*SPACEBAR -- NEXUS

[Echelon]

I'm opening cans of whoop ass; better whoop my ass firs*WHOPPERCOMBO
Stop this bravado; before I enter the dragon like belly demons..
I'm seldom season; I KILLED THE ARCHITECt when I arched a tech//
bark at sets of parking jets; I JET LAG;; bet fast; the pen grabs//
STEM ADDS neutron reaction;; brain function;; tunnel vision//
COME AND LISTEN; I straight trash emcee's;; stab emcee's//
CASH EMCEE's;; the nexus numerator dominatoer//
I come on top like sex or the fucking mathmatics//
bomb spastic// aziatic.. come last bitch..
i'M aziatic; bomb masses with strong mollasses//

[bigBerd]

You said Asiatic twice there at the end.
Not sure what's going on with the caps lock. I'm sure there's potential context in the double slashes and semicolons, but the capitalization of random phrases just reads sloppily to me.

You can throw together multisyllabic rhymes, there's no doubt there. But this just feels like the product of someone who has literally only listened to battle rap for the last ten years or so