Check bitch
What’s up PUSSY
If you get back with an ex, you’re lonely and behave like a teen
If I go back to an Ex, I’m the serial killer returning to the crime scene
this Texan w/ ur girl fuckin at night
You ONLY get to touch a breast & she’s the crush of your life
She made this Cowboy Strip for her main meat & Mac just a Cup as the side
Liked Mac's bar, if I... if you... Vice-versa & variant punches are one of my preferences, Ex wordplay alone would usually be a bit basic but it didn't come across as such, dope.
Exalted on form this week, the "ONLY" in the set up changed it from just a statement to a visual of his girl laying down the rules. Had some nice wordplay, rate the extra step of having the self-representative Cowboy Strip in there, punch was generally on point, respect.
Ex did more with it overall
Vote Exalted
If you get back with an ex, you’re lonely and behave like a teen
If I go back to an Ex, I’m the serial killer returning to the crime scene
feel like this needed more wordplay... but is good enough cus Ex needed more connections in his lines.. plus his was too wordy
vote Mac
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
Vote exalted.
Both lines could have used better execution, but Exalted was doing a hell of a lot more here. I actually liked the premise of Mac's, though. Just felt anticlimactic as it finished.
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Vote - Exalted
Macs flip was a decent jab. Obviously the mac & cheese area is predictable, but I feel like the set up & delivery of the cup on the side flip allowed it to land with more oomph.
I think macs bar was alright but the type of punch that would work better in audio than in text. Exhalteds bar was pretty well delivered not the most complex of concepts, pretty simple in fact but it was set up and executed really well
V/ex
I got Ex here. Mac was funny but seemed rushed/generic. Ex did his thing I’ve seen better for both though
Ex wins 5-1