Punches due Thursday
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@spectre1
@KnoXville.
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@spectre1
@KnoXville.
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It’s OVER.
I dont do word play, i do girl on girl play while im drippin in their eyeballs
U a internet wapper, your bars & your hoes both just pixels on your iphone
Better recognize. Yu ain’t murderous w. Threaten lines,
I’ll send bullets inspect so bad, there gnna have to carefully examine his body for a second time.
Spectre came with an alright jab but nothing too clever or funny about his punch. Knox has a good name play flip and cleanly executed
V/knox
to be honest.. i'm not feeling either punch... Spect's pun was a diss, at least, but didnt rhyme.. that kinda took away from the line... and Knox's pun was too wordy w/ a typo... but i could see the potential. but the concept is a bit played ... so i'll have to go with Spect's with more originality
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
VOTE KNOXVILLE
"Sound stuff out guys" - Barcotic
Vote - Knox
Spectre came pretty lackluster. Shakey mechanics aside the concept was mild at best, and your execution was far from creative. Knox had an okay, if somewhat unpolished bar. The payoff worked, but the set up h wording could hace been better. Just enough to edge this.
v/KnoX
spec that pic sells/pixels was ok but i think you undersold it. KnoX had a concept im sure isnt new but slick wording made this punch have more pizzazz.
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Yo Knox - the in-spect wordplay's been done at least one this season, come on bro you know you been lazy with this one I've seen you drop better.
Spectre - The set ups funny but it's non-attacking & doesn't assist the punch other than giving something to rhyme with, eyeballs & iPhone rhyming is a bit iffy. Where I live the term "internet wapper" could mean someone who only has virtual internet sex so I'm assuming that was the wordplay. It was alright, I'm gonna edge this one to spectre based on having something that kinda works which hasn't been used multiple times recently.
Vote Spectre1
4-2 in favor of KnoX
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