hey bloke..
You thought there was another route.. see, the shovel already did the work
My punches brought ya back to the roots.. as trees grow across ya corpse
The punch is decent, what accent have you got that makes work rhyme with corpse? Are you rhyming them with twerk or horse? Hey bloke is next level too.
Can't help but notice the similarity with Kill Spree's punch last week, listen pal - hey bloke, worse & intercourse - work & corpse. Probably not intentional but it's worth watching to see if someone else does something similar in a couple of weeks, would somewhat support the theory of contained social group occurrences following a temporal Fibonacci sequence.
Decent concept. Landed as a light jab dye to good execution.. Not liking the schemework, felt lazy.
Last edited by Phalanx; October 8th, 2022 at 11:16 AM
Rhyme doesnt work for me. Concept is there though, keep it up Mac.
Plottin your demise.
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