WK 5 Championship: Barcotic Vs Mac - Mac wins

[Spree]

Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Barcotic
@Mac.

[Barcotic]

Hide your loved ones

[Mac]

Check

[Spree]

@Barcotic @Mac.
Bars due tonight

[Barcotic]

14-41 suits him
Lacklust status

My bars are on another level, past just average & his are not here
Formula 1; the only place you'd see Max Verstappen into the top tier

[Mac]

sup Cronus. again…

.. throwing hissy fits? My peace's flowing and it’s a bliss. your beefs gettin cheesy
shift your mind to expand horizons... neck twist & you’ll cover 360 degrees easy

[KnoXville.]

Cool Battle I got Bar Edging this one I felt his execution was a tad bit better but it could go either way tho.

[Amen]

Mac very wordy. Took away from the impact of the concept.

Barc much cleaner execution which resulted in to an effective punch.

V/ Barcotic.

[Blue Bayou]

Barc - Clean delivery and cool concept but it just doesn't work unfortunately.. no one says I'm "tapping/tappin" into a another higher tier. Its just not an expression that exists so this ends up being a reach bud. Also adding that he has a winning formula in the punch setup was counter productive and that should have been considered

Mac - decent attack line that was cool. Wish you'd of incorporated some wordplay


On the whole I want to vote for Barcs concept but I just can't with how unnatural it is

Mac wins props to both and congratulations on reaching the championship match

[Corleone mk 2]

Barc had an okay concept but worded awkward. Why would you see Max Verstappen into the top tier? No one would ever phrase it like that

Mac’s verse was cool and pretty close to tappin into the top tier

I dunno man ima dwell on this for a bit

- - - Updated - - -

Ok gonna have to score each bar to decide this

Barcotic 3.2/10
Mac 3.1/10

Barcotic gets it in a close one but will need to step it up if he’s gonna beat robocop

[Bag Mandela]

Mac been listening to self-help therapy sessions. The beefs getting cheesy part dipped out of the theme but I rated the neck twist bar. Also benefitted from relating to recent events.
I liked Barc's wordplay in this & had it even after 1st read. The only thing preventing it being clean is the 'sh' sound IE Mac's versh. This is about as close to a draw as it gets. OT.

[Axe.]

I'm gonna call a close one here....but one thing that shifted the tide for me personally was the wordplay from Barc was a little more profound and unique. Both did their thing I just like wordplay used correctly that's all...not to much to go over or breakdown just a preference on what you like in this one.


V- Barc, very close.

[Join The LLL]

This was a super close battle and I’m shocked. I thought barc would clean wipe mac from this earth but that didn’t quite happen. Both had solid punchlines but I gotta edge it to Mac


Vote mac

[Exalted.]

it's versh-tahpen.. Germany, so it fell a bit flat to me
top tier mid way to execute it (u aren't lol)

Mac wordy on the setup but expand horizon/360 was a solid enough bar..

Vote Mac

[mal diction]

My bars are on another level, past just average & his are not here
Formula 1; the only place you'd see Max Verstappen into the top tier

i agree Bar's pun wasnt as wordy and Mac's but ..b/c the name is pronounced "Max Verse Stoppin" i couldnt tell if you were dissing him or giving him a complement ...

.. throwing hissy fits? My peace's flowing and it’s a bliss. your beefs gettin cheesy
shift your mind to expand horizons... neck twist & you’ll cover 360 degrees easy

Mac's pun was not a diss nor a punch line but it was on a horror core level ... just watch your wording next time Mac

b/c Mac's was more effective .. he gets my vote

vote Mac