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    Round 2 - 1. Dominate (4) vs 11. Letterman (0) Dom Wins

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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman

    Check g/luck.
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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman

    What’s good bro

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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman

    Sent 16 to Phalanx
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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman

    I almost forgot about this. Ext please

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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman

    Yeah man that’s fine. @Phalanx I’ll post my own verse before the new deadline tomorrow. May make some edits.
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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman

    Got a mil on the waist. Keep talking tough & I will let it raise
    This can only go left like Zoolander.. & that was confirmed when I blew steel in his face
    They gave a jobber the belt. Ill prove this bum is weak
    You gotta know your roleplayer.. now watch how they switch up after Dom gets beat
    Acts tough but he’s a creep. Guess it’s hard to admit
    But I know you’re far from pussy, cuz he’s not allowed to be within 100 yards of a chick
    BUT YOUR LAST BITCH!.. I gave her mad cock, she was that hot
    She even nicknamed my dick ‘Epidural’.. cuz it made her legs numb right after the backshot
    The mag said it’s all eyes on this battle cuz someone’s gotta lose
    They’re looking for answers across the board.. well they’ll need a ouija to get a response outta you
    Drive-by your hood. Let off shots so you can die for good
    Then I’ll get praised for what I did to Dominate with the 9 iron - Tiger Woods
    Contract killer. Your mother, brothers and ya cousins get tagged
    Crime scene? More like a plasma center, cuz I even got paid for putting blood in a bag
    You an easy kill. Calm down and stay in your lane soldier
    Tug Of War - you better get a grip cuz as soon as you cross that line, it’s game over

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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman

    Quote Originally Posted by Predictions
    One things certain, somebody is taking their first & last L of the season.
    I laugh at the idea of someone believing this clown’s better
    LOL - You’ll take the first and last L… i.e. you’ll be Leaving this Round Letter
    Ur first 2 bars against Spree were OK - rest belonged in the trash can, goof
    That Material went on the Wayne so much it resembled a Batman Suit
    Now u better quit talking dweeb. I’m on ya porch waving & it ain’t no small machine
    Shotty to your mug - that Pumpkin get a whole Face Lit Up like it’s Halloween
    Any woman would bench him. One punch & I’ll end this round
    I’m getting Lett down easy. He’s getting “I just see us as friends for now”
    Got nothing but played and recycled bars - that really cements this herb’s fate
    Forget Dr Who - this Tardis Taking us Back in Time whenever he attempts a wordplay
    And Ghostwriters can’t help him against these beast mode writes
    Sub Let for ANY Boarder… he still ain’t getting a New Lease on life
    Calls himself “Young Simba”… I got a piece for this mark
    & when he’s Running Into THIS Desert, it won’t just be Leaving a Scar
    In a fistfight he’d get slumped too - dude is barely at chest height
    He can’t beat me w/ bars, ‘Let alone w/ his hands’ - that shit compares w/ his sex life
    3TC

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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman

    Quote Originally Posted by Letterman View Post
    Got a mil on the waist. Keep talking tough & I will let it raise
    This can only go left like Zoolander.. & that was confirmed when I blew steel in his face
    Nah. Wording issues, corny issues
    They gave a jobber the belt. Ill prove this bum is weak
    You gotta know your roleplayer.. now watch how they switch up after Dom gets beat
    Nah. Decent enough wp. but I dont like what you did w/ it
    Acts tough but he’s a creep. Guess it’s hard to admit
    But I know you’re far from pussy, cuz he’s not allowed to be within 100 yards of a chick
    Too many variations of this been done before it + this is a long winded one
    BUT YOUR LAST BITCH!.. I gave her mad cock, she was that hot
    She even nicknamed my dick ‘Epidural’.. cuz it made her legs numb right after the backshot
    Okok. Better...and even better if you scratched 'right'
    The mag said it’s all eyes on this battle cuz someone’s gotta lose
    They’re looking for answers across the board.. well they’ll need a ouija to get a response outta you
    Mad potential here. Again tho, wording issues. Just decent as is
    Drive-by your hood. Let off shots so you can die for good
    Then I’ll get praised for what I did to Dominate with the 9 iron - Tiger Woods
    Fire! Leaps and bounds higher w/ your wording too
    Contract killer. Your mother, brothers and ya cousins get tagged
    Crime scene? More like a plasma center, cuz I even got paid for putting blood in a bag
    Tf? No
    You an easy kill. Calm down and stay in your lane soldier
    Tug Of War - you better get a grip cuz as soon as you cross that line, it’s game over
    Fiiiiiiller
    Quote Originally Posted by Dominate View Post
    I laugh at the idea of someone believing this clown’s better
    LOL - You’ll take the first and last L… i.e. you’ll be Leaving this Round Letter
    This is insane, wtf? Mad creativity. I love this
    Ur first 2 bars against Spree were OK - rest belonged in the trash can, goof
    That Material went on the Wayne so much it resembled a Batman Suit
    Fire
    Now u better quit talking dweeb. I’m on ya porch waving & it ain’t no small machine
    Shotty to your mug - that Pumpkin get a whole Face Lit Up like it’s Halloween
    Nah. Old, mainstream-like idea here
    Any woman would bench him. One punch & I’ll end this round
    I’m getting Lett down easy. He’s getting “I just see us as friends for now”
    Decent
    Got nothing but played and recycled bars - that really cements this herb’s fate
    Forget Dr Who - this Tardis Taking us Back in Time whenever he attempts a wordplay
    Lol. Good
    And Ghostwriters can’t help him against these beast mode writes
    Sub Let for ANY Boarder… he still ain’t getting a New Lease on life
    Not feeling this one. Feels like your 3rd one
    Calls himself “Young Simba”… I got a piece for this mark
    & when he’s Running Into THIS Desert, it won’t just be Leaving a Scar
    Dope flip
    In a fistfight he’d get slumped too - dude is barely at chest height
    He can’t beat me w/ bars, ‘Let alone w/ his hands’ - that shit compares w/ his sex life
    Pffffft. You stupid for this one but its still good
    Dom wins
    Dom i would love to battle u again

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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman

    Got a mil on the waist. Keep talking tough & I will let it raise
    This can only go left like Zoolander.. & that was confirmed when I blew steel in his face
    Not bad for a Zoolander concept, but meh

    They gave a jobber the belt. Ill prove this bum is weak
    You gotta know your roleplayer.. now watch how they switch up after Dom gets beat
    Would like to end a lil different. Aight.

    Acts tough but he’s a creep. Guess it’s hard to admit
    But I know you’re far from pussy, cuz he’s not allowed to be within 100 yards of a chick
    i didnt like this one.. corny as a diss

    BUT YOUR LAST BITCH!.. I gave her mad cock, she was that hot
    She even nicknamed my dick ‘Epidural’.. cuz it made her legs numb right after the backshot
    Feels familiar, but This one was cool i thought, straight

    The mag said it’s all eyes on this battle cuz someone’s gotta lose
    They’re looking for answers across the board.. well they’ll need a ouija to get a response outta you
    Didnt like how you ended it... oujia board concepts have been done too

    Drive-by your hood. Let off shots so you can die for good
    Then I’ll get praised for what I did to Dominate with the 9 iron - Tiger Woods
    Liked it. Good bar.

    Contract killer. Your mother, brothers and ya cousins get tagged
    Crime scene? More like a plasma center, cuz I even got paid for putting blood in a bag
    ehh, needed something more here IMO

    You an easy kill. Calm down and stay in your lane soldier
    Tug Of War - you better get a grip cuz as soon as you cross that line, it’s game over
    Boring to me.

    I laugh at the idea of someone believing this clown’s better
    LOL - You’ll take the first and last L… i.e. you’ll be Leaving this Round Letter
    off the bat - Good. Using the quote and personal, this was a nice start

    Ur first 2 bars against Spree were OK - rest belonged in the trash can, goof
    That Material went on the Wayne so much it resembled a Batman Suit
    Cool, never seen the Wayne done like this, another hitter

    Now u better quit talking dweeb. I’m on ya porch waving & it ain’t no small machine
    Shotty to your mug - that Pumpkin get a whole Face Lit Up like it’s Halloween
    So so, might be something in a live battle.. in text not so much

    Any woman would bench him. One punch & I’ll end this round
    I’m getting Lett down easy. He’s getting “I just see us as friends for now”
    Ok, only thing i seen this variation on letterman, still decent

    Got nothing but played and recycled bars - that really cements this herb’s fate
    Forget Dr Who - this Tardis Taking us Back in Time whenever he attempts a wordplay
    liked it when i seen it & did it before lol.
    But still good just lessened b/c ive seen a few plays before of this actually

    And Ghostwriters can’t help him against these beast mode writes
    Sub Let for ANY Boarder… he still ain’t getting a New Lease on life
    Decent, new lease on life was a solid flip here

    Calls himself “Young Simba”… I got a piece for this mark
    & when he’s Running Into THIS Desert, it won’t just be Leaving a Scar
    Good here w/ running into desert.. I just dont think he calls himself Simba? If he does.. alright lol. Cool.

    In a fistfight he’d get slumped too - dude is barely at chest height
    He can’t beat me w/ bars, ‘Let alone w/ his hands’ - that shit compares w/ his sex life
    Not a bad closer, and name flip

    Dom got it here, his verse had a more personal edge & more originality which is points for me while Let was generic.. even outside of that Dom had the better overall bars compared to Lett. It was closer on first read not so much after a few

    Vote Dom

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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman - Open For Votes

    Got Dom in this battle with fresher concepts.
    I couldnt get into Zoolander as a movie so Let,s opener is amiss for me, roleplayer was a good flip, 100 yards bar was old material. Didnt like backshot but the ouiji bar was well worded with the board plays. Wasnt feeling the Tiger Woods, was it Dom in 8? Idk? Liked blood bag good wording and cross the line was set up well but fell flat.
    Doms opener was gas, wayne was ill, halloween had great connections. Lett down i didnt really like but it was a creative angle dr who seemed old but well done. Sub let, simba and closer were just ok. But wording was nice

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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate vs 11. Letterman - Open For Votes

    Got a mil on the waist. Keep talking tough & I will let it raise
    This can only go left like Zoolander.. & that was confirmed when I blew steel in his face
    lol'ed at that one.. I think I've heard blue steel flips in actual songs but this was slick for text
    They gave a jobber the belt. Ill prove this bum is weak
    You gotta know your roleplayer.. now watch how they switch up after Dom gets beat
    cool concept
    Acts tough but he’s a creep. Guess it’s hard to admit
    But I know you’re far from pussy, cuz he’s not allowed to be within 100 yards of a chick
    haaaa.. this was dope
    BUT YOUR LAST BITCH!.. I gave her mad cock, she was that hot
    She even nicknamed my dick ‘Epidural’.. cuz it made her legs numb right after the backshot
    damn, I feel like you're on a roll here.. good punch and concept
    The mag said it’s all eyes on this battle cuz someone’s gotta lose
    They’re looking for answers across the board.. well they’ll need a ouija to get a response outta you
    nah, didn't like that one
    Drive-by your hood. Let off shots so you can die for good
    Then I’ll get praised for what I did to Dominate with the 9 iron - Tiger Woods
    felt a bit dated/basic
    Contract killer. Your mother, brothers and ya cousins get tagged
    Crime scene? More like a plasma center, cuz I even got paid for putting blood in a bag
    wasn't feelin' this one either conceptually
    You an easy kill. Calm down and stay in your lane soldier
    Tug Of War - you better get a grip cuz as soon as you cross that line, it’s game over
    didn't connect for me

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    I laugh at the idea of someone believing this clown’s better
    LOL - You’ll take the first and last L… i.e. you’ll be Leaving this Round Letter
    this was nice
    Ur first 2 bars against Spree were OK - rest belonged in the trash can, goof
    That Material went on the Wayne so much it resembled a Batman Suit
    aight
    Now u better quit talking dweeb. I’m on ya porch waving & it ain’t no small machine
    Shotty to your mug - that Pumpkin get a whole Face Lit Up like it’s Halloween
    aight, I like the concept and wording, felt a bit like a "you can get shot" threat and less like a punch?
    Any woman would bench him. One punch & I’ll end this round
    I’m getting Lett down easy. He’s getting “I just see us as friends for now”
    lol'ed this was nice
    Got nothing but played and recycled bars - that really cements this herb’s fate
    Forget Dr Who - this Tardis Taking us Back in Time whenever he attempts a wordplay
    lmao. cool.. haven't seen that before
    And Ghostwriters can’t help him against these beast mode writes
    Sub Let for ANY Boarder… he still ain’t getting a New Lease on life
    eh.. not feeling that
    Calls himself “Young Simba”… I got a piece for this mark
    & when he’s Running Into THIS Desert, it won’t just be Leaving a Scar
    aight, cool.. old concept but okay execution
    In a fistfight he’d get slumped too - dude is barely at chest height
    He can’t beat me w/ bars, ‘Let alone w/ his hands’ - that shit compares w/ his sex life
    slick wording. concept is just okay

    it's wild cause I feel like Letterman made me actually laugh out loud and had some HEAVY connects in the first half of his verse. dude was on a roll for me then the back end of the verse just fell off imo. Dom had more consistent connects throughout the verse and less misses. I think Dom just barely edges it honestly. if Letterman had like a few okay punches at the end or 1-2 more haymakers I may have gone for him. It's close though.

    Vote Dom

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    Re: Round 2 - 1. Dominate (4) vs 11. Letterman (0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Dom wins

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