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    Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5) Pleth wins

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5)

    Check, let’s make this dope.

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5)

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5)

    Ya glow’s fading homie. You’ll get no votes when I wash it away
    Voters gonna check for Pleth aura, but find flies buzzin n his body in a state of decay
    Truth is you’re nothing special. I’ve beat better, leave u rattled n thin
    Watch u Mimic the Plot tryna win… but end up the same as my battles with them
    J known for smart flips, but mind games gon make you wish you’d have walked
    Even if you rolled up on my writer’s block ya sharpest lines’d get traced out in chalk
    See this text shit’s a game, but I’ll ravage ya rep just for fun
    Soon as u think you’re a star? I’ll have things goin sideways fast as a Mario level with one
    Plus these mags got u gassed. If you think you got skills? Then take a W, nab it
    Cause if I’m ranked in the middle of the pack I’ll bring the smoke… along with a pack a day habit

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5)

    gotta admit last week u went heavy talk with every shot
    grimm really laid into plot..   & that'll be ur final resting spot
    have gun will travel. dump & watch this punk unravel
    so when i bang the hammer for Justice, believe it ain't a judges gavel
    from Minnesota & like the Bible says St. Paul is worthless
    idc how he Acts 24:7, no one even remembers his verses
    mom's in her feels when u in a wheelchair, but fuck her son
    who cares if it don't sit well with her, long as ur comfortable in one
    congrats! beat ex-champ mimic then a contender plot in week 11
    on the brink of blowing up..  & i'll make sure u join Ukrainian soldiers in heaven
    Last edited by plethora; February 28th, 2022 at 11:53 AM

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5)

    Quote Originally Posted by Justice Grimm View Post
    Ya glow’s fading homie. You’ll get no votes when I wash it away
    Voters gonna check for Pleth aura, but find flies buzzin n his body in a state of decay
    Cool np idea. Set up well. This was dece
    Truth is you’re nothing special. I’ve beat better, leave u rattled n thin
    Watch u Mimic the Plot tryna win… but end up the same as my battles with them
    Ehhh it's OK. Self personals are never as good as regular personals, and "mimic the plot" is kind of a weird thing to say. This one's a bit of a stretch for me
    J known for smart flips, but mind games gon make you wish you’d have walked
    Even if you rolled up on my writer’s block ya sharpest lines’d get traced out in chalk
    Cool ideas but the 'writers block' thing has been done
    See this text shit’s a game, but I’ll ravage ya rep just for fun
    Soon as u think you’re a star? I’ll have things goin sideways fast as a Mario level with one
    Nice! I like this 'going sideways' wp - creative... LOL you could have flipped his line from last week that was flipping my line from the week before about being a Star... We could have had Flipception here. Still like this a lot but that feels like a missed opportunity hahaha
    Plus these mags got u gassed. If you think you got skills? Then take a W, nab it
    Cause if I’m ranked in the middle of the pack I’ll bring the smoke… along with a pack a day habit
    wp is OK but I don't like the 'pack a day habit' flip/ending, think you could have found something punchier for that... even just wording it to say HE has a pack a day habit/addiction or something would be better IMO

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    Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
    gotta admit last week u went heavy talk with every shot
    grimm really laid into plot..   & that'll be ur final resting spot
    Pretty cool. Laid into wp works. Well worded and set up
    have gun will travel. dump & watch this punk unravel
    so when i bang the hammer for Justice, believe it ain't a judges gavel
    Good. Might be played on him idk, but I haven't seen it and I like it. Really dig 'have gun will travel' as a set up multi too haha
    from Minnesota & like the Bible says St. Paul is worthless
    idc how he Acts 24:7, no one even remembers his verses
    Like the wp, that's fresh to me. Think maybe you could have found a more creative or punchier flip but it's OK as is
    mom's in her feels when u in a wheelchair, but fuck her son
    who cares if it don't sit well with her, long as ur comfortable in one
    Ehhh. I've done a 'doesn't sit well' wp with what I thought was a better flip so this one didn't hit for me
    congrats! beat ex-champ mimic then a contender plot in week 11
    on the brink of blowing up..  & i'll make sure u join Ukrainian soldiers in heaven
    Alright current event line... 'blowing up' is a bit simple/done as a wp and I think you could have set up the concept without complimenting him as much
    Close-ish. I think the going sideways bar was prob my favourite, but pleth was a little more consistent with things I liked overall.

    V/ pleth
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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5) Open for Votes.

    Quote Originally Posted by Justice Grimm View Post
    Ya glow’s fading homie. You’ll get no votes when I wash it away
    Voters gonna check for Pleth aura, but find flies buzzin n his body in a state of decay
    This was nice. Good shit.
    Truth is you’re nothing special. I’ve beat better, leave u rattled n thin
    Watch u Mimic the Plot tryna win… but end up the same as my battles with them
    This was a decent jab.
    J known for smart flips, but mind games gon make you wish you’d have walked
    Even if you rolled up on my writer’s block ya sharpest lines’d get traced out in chalk
    Not bad. Another decent jab.
    See this text shit’s a game, but I’ll ravage ya rep just for fun
    Soon as u think you’re a star? I’ll have things goin sideways fast as a Mario level with one
    Dope. Seen alot of Mario angles, but this was a fresh spin & nicely worded.
    Plus these mags got u gassed. If you think you got skills? Then take a W, nab it
    Cause if I’m ranked in the middle of the pack I’ll bring the smoke… along with a pack a day habit
    I like what you were going for here. Just feels like it could have been harder. Decent jab still.

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    Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
    gotta admit last week u went heavy talk with every shot
    grimm really laid into plot.. & that'll be ur final resting spot
    Pretty dope. Funny y'all both mention it.
    have gun will travel. dump & watch this punk unravel
    so when i bang the hammer for Justice, believe it ain't a judges gavel
    Seen this angle vs him recently, so this loses sting. Great execution though.
    from Minnesota & like the Bible says St. Paul is worthless
    idc how he Acts 24:7, no one even remembers his verses
    This was creative and well executed. Good stuff.
    mom's in her feels when u in a wheelchair, but fuck her son
    who cares if it don't sit well with her, long as ur comfortable in one
    Decent jab.
    congrats! beat ex-champ mimic then a contender plot in week 11
    on the brink of blowing up.. & i'll make sure u join Ukrainian soldiers in heaven
    This didn't do much for me. Felt like a lazy current events flip.

    Close battle. Both had strong verses. I git it 3-2 Grimm.

    Vote Grim

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    Ya glow’s fading homie. You’ll get no votes when I wash it away
    Voters gonna check for Pleth aura, but find flies buzzin n his body in a state of decay
    Truth is you’re nothing special. I’ve beat better, leave u rattled n thin
    Watch u Mimic the Plot tryna win… but end up the same as my battles with them
    See this text shit’s a game, but I’ll ravage ya rep just for fun
    Soon as u think you’re a star? I’ll have things goin sideways fast as a Mario level with one

    The two not in bold I fucked with, could be worded a bit better the Mario shit was dope


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    gotta admit last week u went heavy talk with every shot
    grimm really laid into plot.. & that'll be ur final resting spot
    from Minnesota & like the Bible says St. Paul is worthless
    idc how he Acts 24:7, no one even remembers his verses
    mom's in her feels when u in a wheelchair, but fuck her son
    who cares if it don't sit well with her, long as ur comfortable in one


    I got it tied with quotes…pleth closer was predictable. Hammer for justice was meh…grims writers block and closer was also meh but Grim had LOTB I gotta edge it to Grimm

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5) Open for Votes.

    Justice had pleth aura (weird how it still says his name but it worked regardless), wasn't a fan of Mimic the plot, writers block was ehhh ok, digging the Mario star, pack a day fell flat for me

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    Grimm laid into plot was nice, hammer for justice was cool, Bible punch was cool too, thought wheelchair was just ok-good concept executed poorly, didn't like the closer

    Somewhat close but I got plethora here

    v/ plethora

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5) Open for Votes.

    Ya glow’s fading homie. You’ll get no votes when I wash it away
    Voters gonna check for Pleth aura, but find flies buzzin n his body in a state of decay
    decent jab
    Truth is you’re nothing special. I’ve beat better, leave u rattled n thin
    Watch u Mimic the Plot tryna win… but end up the same as my battles with them
    weak concept
    J known for smart flips, but mind games gon make you wish you’d have walked
    Even if you rolled up on my writer’s block ya sharpest lines’d get traced out in chalk
    old concept but good flip
    See this text shit’s a game, but I’ll ravage ya rep just for fun
    Soon as u think you’re a star? I’ll have things goin sideways fast as a Mario level with one
    lol hitter
    Plus these mags got u gassed. If you think you got skills? Then take a W, nab it
    Cause if I’m ranked in the middle of the pack I’ll bring the smoke… along with a pack a day habit
    naw punch fell off at the end



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    gotta admit last week u went heavy talk with every shot
    grimm really laid into plot.. & that'll be ur final resting spot
    good personal and np/wp but saw that coming a mile away
    have gun will travel. dump & watch this punk unravel
    so when i bang the hammer for Justice, believe it ain't a judges gavel
    dope
    from Minnesota & like the Bible says St. Paul is worthless
    idc how he Acts 24:7, no one even remembers his verses
    lol nice
    mom's in her feels when u in a wheelchair, but fuck her son
    who cares if it don't sit well with her, long as ur comfortable in one
    would of been fire but fell of at the end
    congrats! beat ex-champ mimic then a contender plot in week 11
    on the brink of blowing up.. & i'll make sure u join Ukrainian soldiers in heaven
    coulda be hard but i still mess wit it


    aight battle. both had some decent shots but i got P taking this with the better concepts and connects.

    v. plethora

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5) Open for Votes.

    3-2 Need votes from: @Cody Nash @R!canTheoryz @Zunto @EXalted @Bahriman

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5) Open for Votes.

    Truth is you’re nothing special. I’ve beat better, leave u rattled n thin
    Watch u Mimic the Plot tryna win… but end up the same as my battles with them
    J known for smart flips, but mind games gon make you wish you’d have walked
    Even if you rolled up on my writer’s block ya sharpest lines’d get traced out in chalk
    See this text shit’s a game, but I’ll ravage ya rep just for fun
    Soon as u think you’re a star? I’ll have things goin sideways fast as a Mario level with one

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    gotta admit last week u went heavy talk with every shot
    grimm really laid into plot.. & that'll be ur final resting spot
    have gun will travel. dump & watch this punk unravel
    so when i bang the hammer for Justice, believe it ain't a judges gavel
    from Minnesota & like the Bible says St. Paul is worthless
    idc how he Acts 24:7, no one even remembers his verses
    mom's in her feels when u in a wheelchair, but fuck her son
    who cares if it don't sit well with her, long as ur comfortable in one

    Good showing from both. I have pleth winning with one more quotable. Acts 24:7 was fire and very original. You both had a flip on plot but I think Pleth’s was better. Grimm’s best line was the Mario star punch but I don’t think he was as consistent and I also think Pleth’s haymakers were stronger.

    v/Pleth

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5) Open for Votes.

    Got Pleth here: Acts, first 2 were straight, tighter wording

    Mario lvl sideways was good.. had some others were okish

    vote Pleth

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    Re: Week 12 - Plethora (4-3) vs Justice Grimm (6-5) Open for Votes.

    5-2 pleth wins

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