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    Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - Ex wins

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0)

    Check. Let's go 10

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0)

    Coool. 1o it is

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0)

    Ext. Please

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - EXT

    i’m Inf on NC, Fresh is Habitat

    If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
    Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
    Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
    Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
    Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
    Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
    NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
    RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
    You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
    Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
    Last edited by Exalted.; March 2nd, 2022 at 07:45 AM

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - EXT

    u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
    if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
    ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
    if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
    bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
    if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
    u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
    If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
    u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
    aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - EXT

    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted. View Post
    i’m Inf on NC, Fresh is Habitat

    If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
    Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
    I get the personal you were going for but this whiffed for me execution wise.
    Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
    Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
    THis was a decent jab
    Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
    Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
    A tad forced, not the best honestly
    NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
    RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
    This was fire.
    You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
    Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
    Decent jab w/ the personal

    Quote Originally Posted by Fresh View Post
    u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
    if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
    Thjs was a decent jab.
    ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
    if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
    Not sure about the rhyme scheme. Punch is solid.
    bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
    if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
    This was okay. Kinda light.
    u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
    If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
    Solid jab
    u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
    aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map
    Solid set up. Good jab

    Close battle. I liked alot from both, Ex had the LotB, but Fresh was more consistent.

    Vote - Fresh

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - EXT

    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted. View Post
    i’m Inf on NC, Fresh is Habitat

    If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
    Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
    Not really feeling this one
    Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
    Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
    Not bad
    Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
    Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
    The concept isn’t bad but it isn’t a hard hit IMO
    NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
    RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
    Not bad on this one either
    You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
    Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
    Cool closer
    Vs

    Quote Originally Posted by Fresh View Post
    u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
    if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
    Sorry not feeling this one
    ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
    if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
    This one feels basic
    bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
    if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
    Light jab
    u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
    If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
    Not bad
    u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
    aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map
    Solid closer
    Not a bad match overall but I have fresh coming a bit stronger overall, about even on quality though and both had two solid bars

    V/ Fresh

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - EXT

    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted. View Post
    i’m Inf on NC, Fresh is Habitat

    If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
    Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
    Good personal and wp concept. I had to reread to get it which took some impact. I like the ‘if he lose it HE LOSE IT’ play too
    Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
    Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
    Pretty good. Self nameplays/personals are never big hitters for me but this was cool
    Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
    Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
    Props for the attempt at creativity but… Nah this is a miss for me. “I treated her ass like a simple carb & ate it” is just not something I can imagine anyone saying ever
    NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
    RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
    Boom. Big punch. Good execution. Lotb here
    You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
    Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
    [b]Cool np idea but I’m not clear about what you’re going for with ‘off the heels’ on the literal side of it.
    Quote Originally Posted by Fresh View Post
    u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
    if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
    OK. I’ve done a pilfer line before
    ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
    if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
    Cool attack bar
    bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
    if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
    Nah that’s a REALLY old and used wordplay. Too simple to compensate
    u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
    If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
    cool.
    u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
    aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map
    concept is cool. Execution I think could have been a little cleaner but not bad
    In general, Fresh had simpler concepts but executed them better than Ex did his more ambitious concepts. In that sense it’s close and will just come down to voter preference. For me, Ex had the LOTB, and what’s sealed my vote is that he took a few personal angles, whereas Fresh was more generic.

    V/ Ex
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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - Open For Votes

    If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
    Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
    Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
    Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
    NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
    RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth



    Vs


    u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
    if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
    ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
    if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
    u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
    If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks

    I’ve seen Radar done to death here and NC


    I got this tied in quotes but I’m edging it to Ex for two reason. He had line of the battle and he had more personals

    V/exalted

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - Open For Votes

    If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
    Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
    not feelin this punch
    Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
    Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
    nice wording a lookin choppy but i dig it
    Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
    Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
    nah mad basic
    NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
    RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
    ehh could of been dope but basic
    You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
    Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
    LOL!!!! FUEGO!!!



    vs



    u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
    if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
    nice
    ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
    if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
    ehhh weak jab
    bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
    if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
    super old flip
    u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
    If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
    lite again
    u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
    aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map
    could of been flame but set up hurt you here.


    Lite battle overall. Ex finished it off with a dope personal/np/wp flip. Fresh started off wit a haymaker but the rest was made plain. a couple more creative bars would of get the job done.

    v. Exalted

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - Open For Votes

    3-2 Need votes from:

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    If he lose it HE LOSE IT. this psychopath swaying in threads
    Voters lie quoting a bars dope… that’s the only time you’re ‘OK in the head’
    -nah
    Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
    Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
    -not a fan of self np bars unless opponents name is tied in
    Wanted her ass ate, but no Bubble Up in my damn face
    Off-brand soda; treat it like a simple Carb n Ate it….gave me a flat taste
    -lol nice
    NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
    RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
    -concept was fire but execution was not
    You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
    Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch
    -dope

    Vs.

    don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
    if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
    -eh
    ur a straight up karen, always wanna cry 'bout somethin
    if i catch u starin daggers ima poke ur fucking eyes out with em
    -close to a miss
    bottom tier for life, homie. it ain't a shock ur despised
    if there's any Praise for em s'cos we're hoping to GOD that he dies
    -no
    u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
    If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
    -lol simple but I fux wit it
    u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
    aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map
    -ok


    Nothing really hit hard for fresh while exalted had a haymaker. However I'm going with consistency..


    V-fresh

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - Open For Votes

    Ya girls throat my whole universe; the passions everlasting..
    Begins & ends w/ ME. when Infinite it’s ALWAYS expanding & contracting
    NC is where real animals roam, over there fag was a joke
    RB his little terrarium: Habitat Light never seein any Natural Growth
    You’ve been a sub in every champ match hating the switch
    Last time Fresh Off the Heels of one - no surprise a Dom made you his bitch

    vs

    u don't deserve a 2nd chance, autopsy or not ull get sliced up in 2
    if there's a Pilfer Fixing Dude it's the type that Steals the life outta you
    u old as shit n still bottom tier, you're gonna die pops
    If u think ima pick ur brain ill make sure its off the sidewalks
    u stayin far away from schools, i could look u up n come give u a slap
    aint hard to find when the pussies u Radar sure to put you on the Map

    So I have it even in quotes here but I actually think that Ex had the stronger ones. I really like Fresh’s Pilfer line but as far as the other 2, they’re cool but not as strong as the 3 I quoted from Ex. The habitat light is LOTB for me.

    v/Ex

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    Re: Week 12 - Fresh (7-3) vs Exalted (1-0) - Open For Votes

    4-3 exalted wins

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