Perfect guy

[Lady Poet]

Something about his personality,
He has a perfect smile.
They way he look,
He has a perfect style.
I can't stop looking at him while we have lunch,
I love him so much.
He's so fly compare to them other guys,
He has amazing Green eyes.
He always has a positive attitude,
I got a good dude.

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I meant to put this poem spot

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I post this in open mic by mistake Can someone move this to poet spot

[Candy]

i will critique it on the way out..

i do like this piece its delicate and feeling riden..

thanks for the smile

[Lady Poet]

Thank you