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    Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper[Open For Votes]

    5 bars I guess because no one seems to want to do much more than that.

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    GrimmZReaper?/ more like flimsy queefer/
    you're simply weak/ you're a wimpy creature/ with a mini-weiner/ and dim demeanor/
    You said you don't like my multis/ so I guess I need to let them all free/ in the aether/
    till' they dissipate/ like Zyklon-B/ vapours/ not allowing Grimm to breath for/
    under-estimat/ing me and my pipe-bomb-heat-masers/ that give you tenth degree burns/

    (Just in case you're too stupid to know what a maser is, it stands for Microwave Amplification by Stimulated Emission of Radiation)
    (Also Zyklon-B is a transition rhyme from "multis" and "all free" in case you didn't catch that)

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    2lines=1 Bar

    Line 1
    Line 2
    Is a bar^^



    You need more bars

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    2lines=1 Bar

    Line 1
    Line 2
    Is a bar^^



    You need more bars
    Alright, I'll fix it up soon. You are basically giving me permission to kick his ass even worse.

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    Quote Originally Posted by Fact Machine View Post
    (Just in case you're too stupid to know what a maser is, it stands for Microwave Amplification by Stimulated Emission of Radiation)

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    2lines=1 Bar

    Line 1
    Line 2
    Is a bar^^



    You need more bars

    sooo, u tried to appear smart but couldn't comprehend counting bars in a battle YOU set ....that's more pathetic than ironic.... i'll post something when I feel like it since u were also too stupid to set up a due date or time
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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    Quote Originally Posted by GrimmZReaper View Post
    sooo, u tried to appear smart but couldn't comprehend counting bars in a battle YOU set ....that's more pathetic than ironic.... i'll post something when I feel like it since u were also too stupid to set up a due date or time
    I actually did count it, it's just hard to tell because of all the rhymes inside of rhymes inside of alpaca's butt holes inside of rhymes. But if kill spree wants me to add more I won't complain.

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    GrimmZReaper?/ more like flimsy queefer/
    you're simply weak/ you're a wimpy creature/ with a mini-weiner/ and dim demeanor/
    You said you don't like my multis/ so I guess I need to let them all free/ in the aether/
    till' they dissipate/ like Zyklon-B/ vapours/ not allowing Grimm to breath for/
    under-estimat/ing/ me and my pipe-bomb-heat-masers/ that give you tenth degree burns/
    I'm a human intestine-baking/ white zombie flavor/ing human flesh with alien entity curds/
    my father is insanity, my mom, she's anger/ I'm a python, three acres/ long, tree strangler/
    your rhymes are potty flavour/ Fact's odd, he's stranger/ than a volley of mach three waifers/
    made of toffee, and coffee cake you're/ probly a cockmeat taster/
    it's obvious you want me, hater/ you'd probably suck on me wanker/

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    @GrimmZReaper
    You have 48Hrs to prove a verse or you're getting the DQ L
    THanks

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    @GrimmZReaper
    You have 48Hrs to prove a verse or you're getting the DQ L
    THanks
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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    @GrimmZReaper
    You have 48Hrs to prove a verse or you're getting the DQ L
    THanks
    i'll drop by end of tomorrow,, I might be going to a Smack rapbattle event in Raleigh, but Saturday by midnite
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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    Quote Originally Posted by GrimmZReaper View Post
    i'll drop by end of tomorrow,, I might be going to a Smack rapbattle event in Raleigh, but Saturday by midnite
    since he didnt state due date tonight mid night is final...you no show your getting the L and a Duck award


    I'll clean this thread up as soon as you drop

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper

    Grimm vs a machine that cant count ...


    Quote Originally Posted by Fact Machine View Post
    Amen is a coward for not battling, but you're a fool, which is worse?
    crimson liquid squirts/ from both your dicks as soon as I spit this verse


    Quote Originally Posted by Fact Machine View Post
    your brother sucked, on your peanut butter covered nuts, while you rubbed your butt
    and shoved a cucumber up, your bumper duct, lubed up with whale blubber yuck





    Your infatuation with dicks is awfully awkward, we all joke but YOU take it to newer fag degrees
    Search these threads for gayest bars and all u getting is “FACT’S!!!”....like when a new york cat agrees


    Against Bomb’ard u got floored with plain punches, but I got something up my sleeve for this square
    These fists the wright bros, cause they goin be the first known for putting a machine in the air




    The last guy ducked, using probation as an excuse, so ur a last minute fill-in…at any rate youngin’
    Fact machine? Nah, Dog’s a bounty hunter…only reason youre even here is cause an Inmate’s Running


    Grimm disembowels chumps, have u eating through tubes and straws from the trigger hand
    Im no psychic… but when this bout is through, u and solid food goin’ cancel all future dinner plans


    That format you use just shows your simple minded, but it explains your process ‘o thought management
    U chose that style in a pathetic attempt to lash out at those who never called u multi talented….

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper[Open For Votes]

    fact machine - no real disses, clever wordplays or strong flow to the read. The multis are cool when you can flow them better. You had some attempts at metaphors and concepts, like odd, stranger, or line about tree strangler which made sense but isnt a diss on your opponent. You might consider switching up the writing style, to make it easier to read when competing in text battles. In audio or freestyle or video it's not as bad but the way this is written fucks up the reader and even if you did have some cool content, you need better aimed disses and more intellectually structured bars using some more creative wordplay.

    grim - like the closer with the multi play - other lines were a bot more basic like dinner plans but it wasnt bad, i liked the wright brothers bar nameplay. Not a bad verse after reading a bunch of garbage today im glad i stopped in here and saw a verse with potential.

    vote - grim. better disses and more creative attack that made more sense as far a punchlines go.

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper[Open For Votes]

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    GrimmZReaper?/ more like flimsy queefer/
    you're simply weak/ you're a wimpy creature/ with a mini-weiner/ and dim demeanor/
    You said you don't like my multis/ so I guess I need to let them all free/ in the aether/
    till' they dissipate/ like Zyklon-B/ vapours/ not allowing Grimm to breath for/
    under-estimat/ing/ me and my pipe-bomb-heat-masers/ that give you tenth degree burns/
    I'm a human intestine-baking/ white zombie flavor/ing human flesh with alien entity curds/
    my father is insanity, my mom, she's anger/ I'm a python, three acres/ long, tree strangler/
    your rhymes are potty flavour/ Fact's odd, he's stranger/ than a volley of mach three waifers/
    made of toffee, and coffee cake you're/ probly a cockmeat taster/
    it's obvious you want me, hater/ you'd probably suck on me wanker/

    these bars to me tbh didn't come off as text formulated punches. the whole structure to me came off as an audio battle vibe. the multis were cool but there was really no creativity behind the concepts and just a bunch of filler.

    Grimm

    Your infatuation with dicks is awfully awkward, we all joke but YOU take it to newer fag degrees
    Search these threads for gayest bars and all u getting is “FACT’S!!!”....like when a new york cat agrees
    did this slang come from NY thought it was a down south thing anyway the metaphore was just ok to me felt u could've displayed it more creatively with facts concept I see the nameplay idk just felt could've been more here.



    Against Bomb’ard u got floored with plain punches, but I got something up my sleeve for this square
    These fists the wright bros, cause they goin be the first known for putting a machine in the air
    dope




    The last guy ducked, using probation as an excuse, so ur a last minute fill-in…at any rate youngin’
    Fact machine? Nah, Dog’s a bounty hunter…only reason youre even here is cause an Inmate’s Running
    didn't like the wording on the finish here


    Grimm disembowels chumps, have u eating through tubes and straws from the trigger hand
    Im no psychic… but when this bout is through, u and solid food goin’ cancel all future dinner plans
    nice


    That format you use just shows your simple minded, but it explains your process ‘o thought management
    U chose that style in a pathetic attempt to lash out at those who never called u multi talented….
    ok

    V/Grimm had actual text formatted punches just overall easy win for him hes more experienced had a few creative hits

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    Re: Fact Machine VS GrimmZReaper[Open For Votes]

    grimm wins

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