FL CONTENDERS: Bomb Bard Vs Monolith[bomb wins]

[Spree]

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House rules
Check in due Sunday OCT 1st 11:59 PM EST
Verses due 11:59 PM Friday OCT 6th EST
EXTENSION MUST BE AGREED UPON FAILURE TO CHECK = DQ




@Bomb Bard @Monolith

[Bomb Bard]

Cash

[Monolith]

Check

[Monolith]

Yo not to be rude but this dudes skills missin, like tryna find Nemo/
I will listen, but the chance of your punches hittin... like a Shaq freethrow//
Starting it off with a played-out-rhyme?/
Yes, that's all it takes to get you laid-out in ya prime//
Your flow reminds me of a really dorky white dude fittina-dance/
All retarded, yo you Prolly up in a nursing home straight shittin-ya-pants//
Prolly ain't even a rapper, sitting over there wit 5 homies providing Text-Support/
Man, for real ya mom's shoulda went to the clinic an just checked-abort//
Aye you kinda remind of this oompaloompa I'm using as a punching-bag-now/
You know, small in stature like a munchkin, fag-cow//
I go in a battle like fuck yo life there's no peace/
So I'ma bust shots at ya head like my leads got dome lease//
This fat boy got titts wit the sag, bet-you-dress-in-drag/
Lemme take ya head an just press-it-in-the-bag//
Setting us a battle, they just wanna see me clapping on this whack-faggot/
Make ya girls brain rattle, Dickin her down nutts slapping, fuckin like a jack rabbit//
Lemme just reiterate why you really ain't shit/
Bottom line, you just an illiterate suckin a taint, bitch//

[Bomb Bard]

was gonna ask for the ext but realized you dont take time on ur verses....

here we go again




Yuh slut look like a sea creature. I fuk'er anyways & I'm gone sir
Bitch sayin she hate wen Montauk & wont stop speakin how she took My monster
Every verse you drop crashes. Faggot Kid'll get torn up
We hope U get hit by a Carr W/that terrible game like Oak in the 4th Quarter
Battling U I bank on wins. Loser Ur a laughin stock
I'll give Mon Knee's Till his legs break & take all the cash he got!
Bomb have ya brain punched, Lame fuck Yuh not meant to kill sir
I'll leave ya face marked W/Hand on ya lip...That a Lenox Filter
Red dot, kid'll get hit, Every bar is a Trip U fuckin fag
can tell by Ur votes U a Late Bloomer & Ur skill is Just as wack!
Kid from the heart? U lucky I dnt cut quick in the neck
So u better Bauer I'll put a broken hockey stick right through yuh chest
we could fight in real life...1 punch & yuh hands snap
Because everything U put on the Net Basic Yet you'll never see a champ match
Fuck you Im not writing more and know it son
These last to bars'll beat anything u write... I know i won
Ask grim reaper to ghost right for you yuh herb, b
& still your faggot ass wont win a tourney

[Monolith]

^ Trash lol

[Spree]

@Allen Knight @Late Bloom er @plethora @Lenny @Letterman @Dia @Bomb Bard @Monolith @Basic M @Foul @Glockamole @Networth @B Dot LESNAR @Cajetan @Smog @Enbombz this needs votes

[Join The LLL]

Oh it wasn’t stickied

[Join The LLL]

Yo not to be rude but this dudes skills missin, like tryna find Nemo/
I will listen, but the chance of your punches hittin... like a Shaq Free throw///
lol first bar and You’re already pissing me off
Starting it off with a played-out-rhyme?/
Yes, that's all it takes to get you laid-out in ya prime//
sorry sir but this was bad too
Your flow reminds me of a really dorky white dude fittina-dance/
All retarded, yo you Prolly up in a nursing home straight shittin-ya-pants//
which one is he? White dork or joe Boston sr.? Not a good punch
Prolly ain't even a rapper, sitting over there wit 5 homies providing Text-Support/
Man, for real ya mom's shoulda went to the clinic an just checked-abort//
nah this ain’t right, how did you manage to make it to contender March?
Aye you kinda remind of this oompaloompa I'm using as a punching-bag-now/
You know, small in stature like a munchkin, fag-cow//
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I go in a battle like fuck yo life there's no peace/
So I'ma bust shots at ya head like my leads got dome lease//
whTeever
This fat boy got titts wit the sag, bet-you-dress-in-drag/
Lemme take ya head an just press-it-in-the-bag//
how about you give him head you animal
Setting us a battle, they just wanna see me clapping on this whack-faggot/
Make ya girls brain rattle, Dickin her down nutts slapping, fuckin like a jack rabbit//
Lemme just reiterate why you really ain't shit/
Bottom line, you just an illiterate suckin a taint, bitch//
never reading another one of your verses ever again, I’d rarher vote on late bloom battles all fucking year


You’re a cool guy I’m sure you’re cool irl too, but your battling is really bad.

Vs



Yuh slut look like a sea creature. I fuk'er anyways & I'm gone sir
Bitch sayin she hate wen Montauk & wont stop speakin how she took My monster
ok cool
Every verse you drop crashes. Faggot Kid'll get torn up
We hope U get hit by a Carr W/that terrible game like Oak in the 4th Quarter
terrible rhyming but decent concept
Battling U I bank on wins. Loser Ur a laughin stock
I'll give Mon Knee's Till his legs break & take all the cash he got!
lol foh with that shit b
Bomb have ya brain punched, Lame fuck Yuh not meant to kill sir
I'll leave ya face marked W/Hand on ya lip...That a Lenox Filter
alright
Red dot, kid'll get hit, Every bar is a Trip U fuckin fag
can tell by Ur votes U a Late Bloomer & Ur skill is Just as wack!
ok
Kid from the heart? U lucky I dnt cut quick in the neck
So u better Bauer I'll put a broken hockey stick right through yuh chest
ok again
we could fight in real life...1 punch & yuh hands snap
Because everything U put on the Net Basic Yet you'll never see a champ match
decent? NO
Fuck you Im not writing more and know it son
These last to bars'll beat anything u write... I know i won
Ask grim reaper to ghost right for you yuh herb, b
& still your faggot ass wont win a tourney


Welll this was easy

Vote BIMBBARD

[Late Bloom]

Yes too easy bomb took this with style.....

[Late Bloom]

Okay im dropping a vote here even thouh i reallu dont want to but yeah monolith u need some work if i were u i would go read some late bloom battles like glock told u cause that dude bomb bard took u easy.... @Kill Spree how did this guy make it this far... let ya boy trip get a shot at the title homie... or sit me on a backburner battle er sumn... yeah anyways not much to say about this battle i read it twice and the second time i didnt even have to read bomb bards because i already knew who won...

[Lenox]

Monolith: nothing (you're execution is poor, but the main thing that's holding you back is ur creativity.. you're concepts are dated.)

Vs

Bomb: wasn't feeling the opener. Nice name okay tho. Carr was good. 3rd bar was a stretch lol. Lenox filter was flames hah, late was good.. bauer was heat. Wasn't feeling the closer

Overal: self explanatory. No hits vs some good jabs

Vote: bard

[Sizurp]

Punches-Bomb Bard
Personals-Bomb Bard
Wordplay-Bomb Bard
Fav Bars-Mon Knees, Net Basic, Late Bloomer
Vote-Bomb Bard
Conclusion- Monolith was all over the place concept wise. Looks more like a keystyle. I think if he would look around & see what people like he'd get a better idea. Bomb took this pretty easily.

[Krucial Th1rt3en]

dont really wanna do a bar breakdown, bcuz theres not much to break down...
but the BombBard guy was a level higher than Monolith.
mono seems to just rap, while bomb atleast tries wordplay n a punch here n there.
id love to battle both yall n smoke u, lol with all due respect.
decent battle, much room to elevate for both.

W - BombBard

[Krucial Th1rt3en]

punch - Bomb
wordplay - Bomb
entendres - Bomb
multies - Bomb
personals - Bomb, dont know much bout either, but the nameplays were only done by Bomb...