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    In Too Deep (1st Commandment) makengknowcentz + cla919

    In Too Deep (Part III)


    After “who be waiting”…

    He journeyed outside, 8am, thoughts of homicide,
    Strapped knowing going in would be suicide
    .

    While she was chilling in the crib one day
    When 5 birds came and chased her away
    I guess in a way, you can say
    That he was about to scold me
    What did I do? I was just keeping it real
    Is it because I realized in utter famine and thirst one will steal?
    My neighbor couldn’t even give me a free glass of water
    And of all that brought to me this new world order


    "Baby this is how we will survive, and I aint gonna lie, where I’m going now I’m sure I’m about to die!!!! That little seed inside, is the only part of me that really felt alive, every blessing I ever questioned you were the reason why, I love you forever maybe we see each other again in other lives"

    Or maybe baby, we make it alive!

    HOOK:
    I been through worse than you and I know all the angles this game can do
    I didn’t even have to look you in the eye before I started questioning why
    I just knew, knew on site without rhyme or reason that it is you
    Disclosing more then I had to, I did it for you too, to recognize true
    Do not forsake the only goodness I’ve seen through my eyes, which I saw in you
    Chosen for a brave heart, and will to say what is right vs wrong at all costs
    With an understanding of what it means to truly accept a loss

    Yayo, the streets is bugged, soldiers getting popped for drugs//
    Hustlers selling dubs... A new cancer called thug society show them no love//
    Children forced into sin... question: where have the parents been?
    Cause only in the movies do bad guys win in the end//
    He was my fam, my homie, held me down when I was in an 8x10 lonely.
    Rep that 718 Laupheyette school zone, but
    Came from a Brooklyn home where even his pops packed chrome//
    Couldn’t afford nothing else hand me downs were like a blessing,
    Studied life lessons, so at the age of 14 his brother blessed him
    with his first 4-4 Smiff and Wessun//
    Not that type - never took beef to the tool,
    First in his fam with potential because he followed God’s rules//
    Wrote me daily of his life jewels, and how he had one on the way
    But life’s cruel, I heard down the block were the neighborhood fools,
    That used to rob him before school, young gods with no jobs,
    They pimped the fly gear and shhht, always had the flyest chicks
    They dipped, try to force him in when he said no again and again
    So they framed him, set his ass up with 2 bricks.


    HOOK:
    I been through worse than you and I know all the angles this game can do
    I didn’t even have to look you in the eye before I started questioning why
    I just knew, knew on site without rhyme or reason that it is you
    Disclosing more then I had to, I did it for you too, to recognize true
    Do not forsake the only goodness I’ve seen through my eyes, which I saw in you
    Chosen for a brave heart, and will to say what is right vs. wrong at all costs
    With an understanding of what it means to truly accept a loss

    Chosen for a brave heart, and will to say what is right vs wrong at all costs
    With an understanding of what it means to truly accept a loss


    Upon calling, I felt the smack, from my own father, an attack
    And now, I am not even trying to make up for where I lack
    Instead I turned around and said ok
    If this is the way you really wanna play
    Instinct took over, I hardly had to think
    I stared hard at the bitch recording me as I sipped upon my drink
    Off to the mall and around the block
    I chose my weapon – hardly a glock
    Drove to the scene
    Yet somehow my heart still found a way to intervene
    Eye to eye I fear no man
    But what was said was so real, I began to understand


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    Last edited by CLA919; April 23rd, 2014 at 09:23 PM

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    Re: In Too Deep (1st Commandment) makengknowcentz + cla919

    This looks different like edited but again we blended well but what happened to the original ending

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    Re: In Too Deep (1st Commandment) makengknowcentz + cla919

    It broke down into two parts and I know people don't like to read all that shit SOOOOO I still saved it and condensed it into one (or at least tried to) You think I should edit and just throw the entire post - cause it's mad long - BUT - it does explain a different side to shit - what do you think? @makengknowcentz

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    Re: In Too Deep (1st Commandment) makengknowcentz + cla919

    i like what you did just asked lol

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    Re: In Too Deep (1st Commandment) makengknowcentz + cla919

    I got to read this one… cause I been edited a lot too!

    - - - Updated - - -

    It was a collab piece and my parts are accurate but there was like 3 of us I guess.
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