10 lines
due 9pm eastern
GO!
Kraven Moorbud
Smash
10 lines
due 9pm eastern
GO!
make it 10 eastern...unexpected smoke session
Check
Best believe ill stun him like stone cold, I got the 9 like romo
These bullets would make u freeze like u posin for a foto
Oh no.. this is my omfg flow it'll hurt u
I'll crush S in a dust he'll resemble. Mazda commercial
Forget the game y don't u recollect some of ur past lovers
Back in day u was actin all super..u smash bros
This guy's green w. envy while I got the green strands
U tryna be Hulk, smash? U just get brolic jackin off with both hands
Too bad ur boy Cutler couldn't cut the mustard cuz ur team is trash
N now ur mad n smoking..but if I'd pass u a Jay, u'll get sacked b4 the pass
...Here we go again, Kraven Perpetratin' like he on some smoking shit
he da type to roll his weed,u look..... it's da color of da blunt he Rollin' wit
Please don't compare me to him, I laugh at your lazy attempts i'm pacin' next
he'll lose his head as I give KM 14 like dat android from Jason X
And you wanted me to join ya crew? Being Solo....I'm not mindin' it
if I wanted to Seymour Cyphers your group is not the one I'm vibin' wit
distort ya mind till your eyes are split then a right hook square in da nose
you gay as fuck, a losing politician the way you always trailing the poles
And the way this goes...he Is THAT dinner, he thought he had winners,
But At last it's Smash Puttin an end to Kraven more than rehab centers
LOL You was so quick t try n DQ tho...u don't even have links...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...110/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...087/index.html
Best believe ill stun him like stone cold, I got the 9 like romo
These bullets would make u freeze like u posin for a foto
Kinda soft
Oh no.. this is my omfg flow it'll hurt u
I'll crush S in a dust he'll resemble. Mazda commercial
Coulda be harder
Forget the game y don't u recollect some of ur past lovers
Back in day u was actin all super..u smash bros
Nope not well wrote
This guy's green w. envy while I got the green strands
U tryna be Hulk, smash? U just get brolic jackin off with both hands
Kinda ok
Too bad ur boy Cutler couldn't cut the mustard cuz ur team is trash
N now ur mad n smoking..but if I'd pass u a Jay, u'll get sacked b4 the pass
Kinda ok
Vs.......
...Here we go again, Kraven Perpetratin' like he on some smoking shit
he da type to roll his weed,u look..... it's da color of da blunt he Rollin' wit
Lol... Dirt,
Please don't compare me to him, I laugh at your lazy attempts i'm pacin' next
he'll lose his head as I give KM 14 like dat android from Jason X
Sorda tight
And you wanted me to join ya crew? Being Solo....I'm not mindin' it
if I wanted to Seymour Cyphers your group is not the one I'm vibin' wit
Tight tight there
distort ya mind till your eyes are split then a right hook square in da nose
you gay as fuck, a losing politician the way you always trailing the poles
Pretty good
And the way this goes...he Is THAT dinner, he thought he had winners,
But At last it's Smash Puttin an end to Kraven more than rehab centers
Ok also.
Dude smash pretty much killed this battle, better play, flow ,concept n punches...
Kraven seemed to talk mad ish....
V smash
Best believe ill stun him like stone cold, I got the 9 like romo
These bullets would make u freeze like u posin for a foto
- Freeze/Photo concepts are mad played IMO. I've seen them flipped a million times and each time I don't like the flip, no offense.
Oh no.. this is my omfg flow it'll hurt u
I'll crush S in a dust he'll resemble. Mazda commercial
- Eh, think, you could have played with this one a little bit to make it more effective.
Forget the game y don't u recollect some of ur past lovers
Back in day u was actin all super..u smash bros
- I see where you were going with this one. I'm also assuming you meant Brothers rather then bros? to rhyme with Lovers? Correct. Anyways, pretty cool, I guess... I think you could have came up with more of a better way to deliver but jab at best.
This guy's green w. envy while I got the green strands
U tryna be Hulk, smash? U just get brolic jackin off with both hands
- Same as above. Could have delivered differently to make more of an impact.
Too bad ur boy Cutler couldn't cut the mustard cuz ur team is trash
N now ur mad n smoking..but if I'd pass u a Jay, u'll get sacked b4 the pass
- Not really feeling this one.
Overall: Some decent concepts, but struggled on delivering them. Work on delivering your concepts and you should be straight, bruh.
[vs]
...Here we go again, Kraven Perpetratin' like he on some smoking shit
he da type to roll his weed,u look..... it's da color of da blunt he Rollin' wit
- Eh, not really feeling it.
Please don't compare me to him, I laugh at your lazy attempts i'm pacin' next
he'll lose his head as I give KM 14 like dat android from Jason X
- Once again, not really feeling it.
And you wanted me to join ya crew? Being Solo....I'm not mindin' it
if I wanted to Seymour Cyphers your group is not the one I'm vibin' wit
- Lol, nice & direct.
distort ya mind till your eyes are split then a right hook square in da nose
you gay as fuck, a losing politician the way you always trailing the poles
- I see where you were going with this. Little struggle on the delivery but decent.
And the way this goes...he Is THAT dinner, he thought he had winners,
But At last it's Smash Puttin an end to Kraven more than rehab centers
- Once again, same as above.
Overall: You got the concepts down, just struggled to deliver a few of them. I feel you edged this battle with a few more lines that stood out for me. This battle basically came down to personal preference. Rather close but I believe IMO, you edged it with the chuckle you got out of me.
Vote: Smash
Why?: Edge on the battle as explained above ^
Smash failed to post according to the due time that he set, Kraven Moorbud wins by DQ
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