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Take a Look at my Life
U ain't the brightest around here..I wonder if u ever use yo brain, b
Cus u and IQ arent usually seen togetha.. unless u getting merkd in the FL Tourney
I drop people with deadly punches..that's something a fag like u wont do
So when I'm finally done wit this, u'll get an one-way ticket back to the ICU
I'm Colder than ice, see me punch u in the head and let u hit the floor quick
And that's where this hoe belongs..riding more vet's dicks than that Brodie prick
I got a couple of W under the belt..but u seem to take this in a wrong way
Cus when u say u won something down there.. u earned nuff money to make it through the day
Ur not a respected battler here..u only got that record battling Mac 13 times
This whack shit reached all up to yo brain..u must be sniffing ur own whack lines
Take a Look at my Life
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you wont ever make it to the top, those are wounds that only time will settle
so how are you the bos..when in the end, you're far from being on the highest level
when i cut him down to size, it'll hurt his ego once this win is never accumulated
and leave him torn apart in more ways than one like he was dismembered and mutilated
from your style, to the way you vote, this yes man does the same as his faction
he must be manchurian candidate...cuz someone's always swaying his action's
if you had half a brain, it would make your neck break, get your head straight
cuz he's so absent minded, his shoulders are like pall bearers the way they carry dead weight
as i beat bos to near death, ill give him deep insight to himself that adorns his mind
and he'll really get a chance to take a look at his life...as i make it flash before his eyes
Good shit, bruh. Start voting ppl
I'll have links 2morrow
Take a Look at my Life
U ain't the brightest around here..I wonder if u ever use yo brain, b
Cus u and IQ arent usually seen togetha.. unless u getting merkd in the FL Tourney
concept was there but B and TOURNEY do NOT rhyme
I drop people with deadly punches..that's something a fag like u wont do
So when I'm finally done wit this, u'll get an one-way ticket back to the ICU
this is ok but someone else used the same concept in another battle
I'm Colder than ice, see me punch u in the head and let u hit the floor quick
And that's where this hoe belongs..riding more vet's dicks than that Brodie prick
doesnt do it for me
I got a couple of W under the belt..but u seem to take this in a wrong way
Cus when u say u won something down there.. u earned nuff money to make it through the day
uhhh..whatever
Ur not a respected battler here..u only got that record battling Mac 13 times
This whack shit reached all up to yo brain..u must be sniffing ur own whack lines
used "whack" twice in one line..no punch here either
overall your verse was very weak, Bos
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you wont ever make it to the top, those are wounds that only time will settle
so how are you the bos..when in the end, you're far from being on the highest level
good nameplay
when i cut him down to size, it'll hurt his ego once this win is never accumulated
and leave him torn apart in more ways than one like he was dismembered and mutilated
nice multis
from your style, to the way you vote, this yes man does the same as his faction
he must be manchurian candidate...cuz someone's always swaying his action's
nice personal
if you had half a brain, it would make your neck break, get your head straight
cuz he's so absent minded, his shoulders are like pall bearers the way they carry dead weight
lol
as i beat bos to near death, ill give him deep insight to himself that adorns his mind
and he'll really get a chance to take a look at his life...as i make it flash before his eyes
nice play on his sig
indrid..you had nice multis and some good personals here, you took this W quite easily..Bos..you need to work on some more complex rhyme schemes and concepts
vote - indrid cold
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Originally Posted by Justice Grimm
Coincidence? And he used the "similar" punch only two days after it was used on him. I see the same exact punch, with a little tweaking it to make it seem like a personal! Also, I find it funny how both set-ups end with one letter! But it could be a coincidence...
Bos -highlight bars
"U ain't the brightest around here..I wonder if u ever use yo brain, b
Cus u and IQ arent usually seen togetha.. unless u getting merkd in the FL Tourney"
The rhyming is way off, but I getet the message you were tryna deliver. Plus the wording is bleh. This was the best part of ur verse, you grasp the concept of punches but you need alot of work. No offense
Indrid Cold - highlights
"when i cut him down to size, it'll hurt his ego once this win is never accumulated
and leave him torn apart in more ways than one like he was dismembered and mutilated"
Ya whole verse was dope but this my fave line. My one comment is the wording, you could make your lines shorter and they have movement and impact. You coulda shortened up like:
Ill cut him down to size, hurt his ego when his win's never accumulated
Have him torn up apart in more ways than one like he dismembered and mutilated
Sounds alil better without all the correct english in there lol, but otherwise your gradp concepts is awesome, flow is decent and your punches land to some degree, good shit
V/ IC even though it prolly doesnt matter cuz im below 50 posts lol
uppin
v/ indrid..
and @ the guy who said the line was bitten, its a fairly used type of punch.. not wayyyyyyy too obscure for him to of made it himself
.. im back
upp
good openeryou wont ever make it to the top, those are wounds that only time will settle
so how are you the bos..when in the end, you're far from being on the highest level
nice multi and decent punchwhen i cut him down to size, it'll hurt his ego once this win is never accumulated
and leave him torn apart in more ways than one like he was dismembered and mutilated
nice personalfrom your style, to the way you vote, this yes man does the same as his faction
he must be manchurian candidate...cuz someone's always swaying his action's
lol this really made me giggleif you had half a brain, it would make your neck break, get your head straight
cuz he's so absent minded, his shoulders are like pall bearers the way they carry dead weight
decent attack on his sigas i beat bos to near death, ill give him deep insight to himself that adorns his mind
and he'll really get a chance to take a look at his life...as i make it flash before his eyes
vs
not a bad opener but the wording spoiled itU ain't the brightest around here..I wonder if u ever use yo brain, b
Cus u and IQ arent usually seen togetha.. unless u getting merkd in the FL Tourney
okI drop people with deadly punches..that's something a fag like u wont do
So when I'm finally done wit this, u'll get an one-way ticket back to the ICU
not a bad personalI'm Colder than ice, see me punch u in the head and let u hit the floor quick
And that's where this hoe belongs..riding more vet's dicks than that Brodie prick
didnt get this one tbhI got a couple of W under the belt..but u seem to take this in a wrong way
Cus when u say u won something down there.. u earned nuff money to make it through the day
using whack twice in one line killed this barUr not a respected battler here..u only got that record battling Mac 13 times
This whack shit reached all up to yo brain..u must be sniffing ur own whack lines
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indrid just had the better verse with good flow and multies as well, bos had few decent lines but mostly misses
V/cold
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meh personal opener, didnt feel the hitU ain't the brightest around here..I wonder if u ever use yo brain, b
Cus u and IQ arent usually seen togetha.. unless u getting merkd in the FL Tourney
another bland hitI drop people with deadly punches..that's something a fag like u wont do
So when I'm finally done wit this, u'll get an one-way ticket back to the ICU
I laughed, but this hits the Brodie guy harder than Cold hahaI'm Colder than ice, see me punch u in the head and let u hit the floor quick
And that's where this hoe belongs..riding more vet's dicks than that Brodie prick
ok, decent fillerI got a couple of W under the belt..but u seem to take this in a wrong way
Cus when u say u won something down there.. u earned nuff money to make it through the day
First line was leading somewhere, second line missed.Ur not a respected battler here..u only got that record battling Mac 13 times
This whack shit reached all up to yo brain..u must be sniffing ur own whack lines
vs
name flip, but didn't hit too hardyou wont ever make it to the top, those are wounds that only time will settle
so how are you the bos..when in the end, you're far from being on the highest level
soft blow, coulda hit better with some rearrangingwhen i cut him down to size, it'll hurt his ego once this win is never accumulated
and leave him torn apart in more ways than one like he was dismembered and mutilated
concept!from your style, to the way you vote, this yes man does the same as his faction
he must be manchurian candidate...cuz someone's always swaying his action's
great concept, great execution, this just won the battleif you had half a brain, it would make your neck break, get your head straight
cuz he's so absent minded, his shoulders are like pall bearers the way they carry dead weight
boring closer with a so-so rhyming schemeas i beat bos to near death, ill give him deep insight to himself that adorns his mind
and he'll really get a chance to take a look at his life...as i make it flash before his eyes
Neither really had any hard hits, Bos' only decent bar was a personal at someone not even in the battle. Indrid brought some concept and better execution, and got the W.
V/Ingrid
Indrid Cold won this battle here for me , he had the ryhming scheme down to near perfection nice good solid lines , bos ?? i felt ur lines were weak man keep it up tho both of you
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