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house rules..due 24hrs after both checks
10 lines - get yah links
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A verse from u cud spark anotha rout in england trust me...cuzz
it's funny u champ'd 2 titles n' still gotta work on ya concepts n' wording probz...
last night i hit the club,party w/ hoes then went on a spank ass
while last night u hit the club, party w/ hoes n' bearly hit the mattress
it's the fuckin' truth...see im from baghdad, i drop bomb on lames
only way u would drop bomb is if u were havin' it along ya name
i peeped ur past battle, so boring, i thought i shouldn't have bothered
i mean u got bullied by N.r n he didn't even have to be ur elder brother
so check it,he will be mad if i say whatever he writes is nonsence
but its obvious ur headless black & white got sub groups in ur contents
i suggest you flee..
cuz the facts be...theres no way u can handle me
im the type to leave you in a 'pool of blood' like bets w/ family
or fucking gasoline your house, burn that bitch down n go further
when i catch a manslaughter charge after the flame 3rd degree murda
get him kidnapped.....with guns im creeping in a disguise fam
duct tape n leave mur in the desert like a forgetful wise man
i'll probably bury u next to a catus.. gut him until his hands rest
then take a shit in ur ribcage.. n redefine the dirty sand-chest
no way you can ever beat me, i wont stop till there nothing left
any move you make is like googling the word deceased, the result is death
i suggest you flee..
cuz the facts be...theres no way u can handle me
im the type to leave you in a 'pool of blood' like bets w/ family
or fucking gasoline your house, burn that bitch down n go further
when i catch a manslaughter charge after the flame 3rd degree murda
get him kidnapped.....with guns im creeping in a disguise fam
duct tape n leave mur in the desert like a forgetful wise man
i'll probably bury u next to a catus.. gut him until his hands rest
then take a shit in ur ribcage.. n redefine the dirty sand-chest
no way you can ever beat me, i wont stop till there nothing left
any move you make is like googling the word deceased, the result is death
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i thought miracle came with a whole strong verse. very fresh and hitting lines. cool multies too. murda lacked some rhyming skills and his punches were weak too simple to hit
v/mir
get yah links mur
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Murda
i peeped ur past battle, so boring, i thought i shouldn't have bothered
i mean u got bullied by N.r n he didn't even have to be ur elder brother
so check it,he will be mad if i say whatever he writes is nonsence
but its obvious ur headless black & white got sub groups in ur contents
these are the only 2 bars i seen stand out with the ok personal and the ok concept on the finisher in the 2nd bar. other then that too many misses repetitve lines and rhyme scheme was off.
Miracle
i suggest you flee..
cuz the facts be...theres no way u can handle me
im the type to leave you in a 'pool of blood' like bets w/ family
ok hard punch cool concept
or fucking gasoline your house, burn that bitch down n go further
when i catch a manslaughter charge after the flame 3rd degree murda
ok nice concept anutha hard punch
get him kidnapped.....with guns im creeping in a disguise fam
duct tape n leave mur in the desert like a forgetful wise man
nice good reference
i'll probably bury u next to a catus.. gut him until his hands rest
then take a shit in ur ribcage.. n redefine the dirty sand-chest
lol nice wp
no way you can ever beat me, i wont stop till there nothing left
any move you make is like googling the word deceased, the result is death
ok
I thought miracle came hard in this and won this by a landside he had some good punches and they overall were consistent as fuck.
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Miracle got this pretty easily imo. His verse was solid and his punches were consistent with good np and wp. Murda's last two bars were decent but couldnt compete with mir drops.......
V:mir
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votes goin the wrong way me thinkz...
Miracle had a great verse, was horror-core like but lacked witty punchlines.. flow was simple..
Murda. - good punchlines, simple flow but effective, overall you edged the punches.
V/ Murda
You Dont Want None
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lol up
miracle-
i suggest you flee..
cuz the facts be...theres no way u can handle me
im the type to leave you in a 'pool of blood' like bets w/ family
or fucking gasoline your house, burn that bitch down n go further
when i catch a manslaughter charge after the flame 3rd degree murda
get him kidnapped.....with guns im creeping in a disguise fam
duct tape n leave mur in the desert like a forgetful wise man
i'll probably bury u next to a catus.. gut him until his hands rest
then take a shit in ur ribcage.. n redefine the dirty sand-chest
no way you can ever beat me, i wont stop till there nothing left
any move you make is like googling the word deceased, the result is death
yeah miracle took this one pretty easy i think. better concepts, flow and a better verse that hit harder with the punches
i have mir catching the W here with more polished wording,better concepts and harder hitting punches.
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