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pun's swagger is STRAIGHT, but when he guzzles a 40..
his sex life becomes like other floors in buildings...cuz thats a different story
im a gangster... so receiveing jailtime made me raw in ways
while pun couldnt catch a charge playing madden w/ double A's
i seen your last battle, n u got layed out flat on ur back
i thought u where new to jerking off how u couldnt handle wack
his verses stink.. a victory?? thats something u'll never see dude
its ironic after reading ur rhymes they say ur initials...PPPP UUUU
ill supply the flowers for the dead...heres some bullets..eat those's
will have a good mourning, pun w/o megan waking up to christopher rios
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my new years resolution is to kill this bitch then whoever
it 'depends' on his name to see if this man can hold his shit together..
they call me punisher the hitman i spit till the tike dead
No mayo but ill get miracle whipped for the right bread..
weak bitch gettin killed cuz u not equiped right
give u the mike vick treament cuz dog aint built to fight..
youz a frail pussy you a lie if u say ya rob and hit licks
miracle all about money then this fraud counterfiet..
mir in his mid 20's virgin nigga thats tragic shit
domestic violence..n you still have trouble smashin chicks..
pun's swagger is STRAIGHT, but when he guzzles a 40..
his sex life becomes like other floors in buildings...cuz thats a different story
-Concept was good, punch could've been better
im a gangster... so receiveing jailtime made me raw in ways
while pun couldnt catch a charge playing madden w/ double A's
-ok
i seen your last battle, n u got layed out flat on ur back
i thought u where new to jerking off how u couldnt handle wack
-LOL
his verses stink.. a victory?? thats something u'll never see dude
its ironic after reading ur rhymes they say ur initials...PPPP UUUU
-Nah
ill supply the flowers for the dead...heres some bullets..eat those's
will have a good mourning, pun w/o megan waking up to christopher rios
-eh
Vs
my new years resolution is to kill this bitch then whoever
it 'depends' on his name to see if this man can hold his shit together..
-no
they call me punisher the hitman i spit till the tike dead
No mayo but ill get miracle whipped for the right bread..
-made me laugh but no
weak bitch gettin killed cuz u not equiped right
give u the mike vick treament cuz dog aint built to fight..
-played concept
youz a frail pussy you a lie if u say ya rob and hit licks
miracle all about money then this fraud counterfiet..
-no
mir in his mid 20's virgin nigga thats tragic shit
domestic violence..n you still have trouble smashin chicks..
-ok
Vote: Miracle, clear landslide.
pun's swagger is STRAIGHT, but when he guzzles a 40..
his sex life becomes like other floors in buildings...cuz thats a different story
i seen your last battle, n u got layed out flat on ur back
i thought u where new to jerking off how u couldnt handle wack
Vs.
N/A
Pretty one sided. Miracle took this with a smoother flow and better shots and even the misses were better than his best attempts.
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Mir
pun's swagger is STRAIGHT, but when he guzzles a 40..
his sex life becomes like other floors in buildings...cuz thats a different story
lol with the concept but wording was bad
im a gangster... so receiveing jailtime made me raw in ways
while pun couldnt catch a charge playing madden w/ double A's
haha good concept
i seen your last battle, n u got layed out flat on ur back
i thought u where new to jerking off how u couldnt handle wack
lol good personal
his verses stink.. a victory?? thats something u'll never see dude
its ironic after reading ur rhymes they say ur initials...PPPP UUUU
didnt like this reference to np
ill supply the flowers for the dead...heres some bullets..eat those's
will have a good mourning, pun w/o megan waking up to christopher rios
ok cool concept
Punisher
my new years resolution is to kill this bitch then whoever
it 'depends' on his name to see if this man can hold his shit together..
ok not a bad punch
they call me punisher the hitman i spit till the tike dead
No mayo but ill get miracle whipped for the right bread..
played np concept but u dont know that no hate been used alot
weak bitch gettin killed cuz u not equiped right
give u the mike vick treament cuz dog aint built to fight..
nah weak and played concept
youz a frail pussy you a lie if u say ya rob and hit licks
miracle all about money then this fraud counterfiet..
nah wording hurt here
mir in his mid 20's virgin nigga thats tragic shit
domestic violence..n you still have trouble smashin chicks..
ok not bad
V/Miracle
I thought his concepts were more wittier the punishers and just better polished. Pun had a couple played references and wording hurt him in some areas.
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im a gangster... so receiveing jailtime made me raw in ways
while pun couldnt catch a charge playing madden w/ double A's
i seen your last battle, n u got layed out flat on ur back
i thought u where new to jerking off how u couldnt handle wack
vs
mir in his mid 20's virgin nigga thats tragic shit
domestic violence..n you still have trouble smashin chicks..
this is what i got from the verses, i think that miracle came with a fresh more hits. punisher came with too simple lines at times. miracle came more soilid.
v/Mir
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pun's swagger is STRAIGHT, but when he guzzles a 40..
his sex life becomes like other floors in buildings...cuz thats a different story
im a gangster... so receiveing jailtime made me raw in ways
while pun couldnt catch a charge playing madden w/ double A's
i seen your last battle, n u got layed out flat on ur back
i thought u where new to jerking off how u couldnt handle wack
vs.
my new years resolution is to kill this bitch then whoever
it 'depends' on his name to see if this man can hold his shit together..
they call me punisher the hitman i spit till the tike dead
No mayo but ill get miracle whipped for the right bread..
punisher u got some coo n pretty creative concepts goin, now jus try n make them bars more hard-hitting in ur verses. Keep battlin and elevatin too. Mir got this with harder punches that landed. no hate to either keep battlin.
v - miracle whipped
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