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    Take Time - MC Mash

    all types of comments will be appreciated,i was spitting after a long long time.

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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    im liking the beat that digital effect at the begging

    im not sure if ur jut ue a cheap mic or u neeed to mix it better bro but it sounds like your rapping in small room .. might need to fix those acoustic..

    vocals are nice strong bars roll nice!! abit more emotion in the hook/break but deffo potential nice drop man

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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    thanks a lot for checking mate.its the mixing i guess...will be taken care of
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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    your mic presence is solid, could use a bit more emotion/energy maybe, but still solid, flow was okay, lyrics were decent, vocals could sound a bit better quality wise, it seemed like they echoed a bit or something, wit a bit more work I could see you killin some shit

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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    Flow is dope on this although I feel the vocal mixing needs work, sounds like your spitting in a live room if you know what I mean. Lyrics and flow is solid though so that kinda makes up for it in my opinion. Beat is kinda cool, kinda synthy for my taste but still alight, goes well with the concept of the song. Not too bad though man, keep dropping.

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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    thanks yall,my mixing fucked it up a lil i think lol
    nevertheless,keep dropping feeds yall
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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    well everyone's made the mixing obvious, so no need to comment there.

    I liked the rhymes and the lyrics were solid man!

    There were some technical issues but we all learn how to deal with that eventually!
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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    ya i got that bro..thanks a ton
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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    more feeds here
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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    cmoon people i need more feeds on this
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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    u stayed solid with ur lyrics ....need better mixin youtube how to mix and it will help u alot in quality other than dat good job man leave me feed bak on mine heas da link

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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    ya man,i could do better in the mixing i know..
    will rtf asap
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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    Ight. your voice is really solid dude. Your lines and flow are decent man. Everyone already said about the mix, So I'm not gonna explain there. What I would do is put more emphasis on your words, because you have the voice, They just need to be felt more. Keep at it though. Check me out as well
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    Re: Take Time - MC Mash

    thanks a lot for checking man but
    do u mean the pronunciation when u said THE WORDS?
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