real nice piece here homie, like how the whole time you almost kept a double meaning, from what I got from it, from how he was "walking through the doors", "hands on the paynes", and the woman's last touch/guards puttin on the leather belts line, just always kept things interesting, cuz a topic like this could get boring fast with out it being delivered well, which you did, interesting ending, would have liked to see more leading up to that ending though, maybe background into the story of why he was about to see the death penalty, or something to bring that ending in more, a lil bit of a shocker at the end but could have been done to a deeper extent I believe, but all in all a real nice peace fam..
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