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    "Distractions" (drop links, will return feed)

    any comments/feedback would be appreciated. give the beginning a chance, it sounds weird but i was experimenting a bit lol

    http://soundcloud.com/mikegrand/distractions


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    Re: "Distractions" (drop links, will return feed)

    i was feeling it at first, but then i felt that it lacked a certain excitement. i loved the feel of the beat though and i could see what you were aiming for, for sure.

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    Re: "Distractions" (drop links, will return feed)

    intro sounds like mud

    Vocals a touch loud...good delivery on it though...I like the start and stop thing you got going on

    interesting...but this isn't flowing well...

    What exactly are you rapping about?


    I do like the eeriness of the beat though...sounds ethereal and mysterious


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    Re: "Distractions" (drop links, will return feed)

    I like the beat. I think you should do something different with that intro. Quality is lacking for sure. I think the flow would sound a lot better if the quality was higher. Lyrics are cool. Keep workin.

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    Re: "Distractions" (drop links, will return feed)

    The mellow sound at the beginning is quite nice, I love guitars. This whole beat is different and I like different. Delivery was interesting, it wasn't exactly excellent but I do appreciate unique approaches. Flow was lacking to me, I thought you didn't do this beat justice. Lyrics sound cool, not sure what the content was about though. You'e got a unique style, I give you that. Keep making music man.

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