Lumbee vs. R.I.P. Big L

[Lumbee]

12 lines
by tomarrow
i'm gonna drop in a min.
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check

[Lumbee]

lol.. first 2 bars should do it, but i wrote 3 more for safe measure haha.

lispy fag can't make a z sound, except when he sleeps
so when he begs, it sounds like L's resting in peace
i spit flames, you try to look like you don't mind the flash heat
cocky bitch'll whipe his forhead throwin his sign, what's that mean...
you already know, i'm gettin votes like obama bitch
TNT, you caught in the explosives, like a drama flick
fuck it, comin hard is a waste on this duche pussy
^ thats the punchline...
... but if it wasn't you wouldn'tve knew rookie
this the worst 5 bars i ever wrote, don't have to change it
cause you can tell alot about somebody from their name kid

[Lumbee]

oh shit.. my b one more bar?

uhhh...

i'll say..

Lumbee stayin in the lead, and your idol was never hot bro
if they sayin Rest In Peace Big................. L never follows

[Lumbee]

i guess i pulled this niggas bitch card, can we get this closed too?

[R.I.P. Big L]

Check.

[R.I.P. Big L]

Yo, yo, yo, I'll hit this fag with punches till he ain't got teeth, like that biting accusation
Drop this quick verse, make him disappear like a magic trick, weak MC evaporation
Please excuse my procrastination, I didn't go nowhere, consider this my vacation
Pulled my bitch card? That's a false proclamation, y'all know I like confrontation
Lumbee ain't takin' 'bout the states in his CUT, he's talkin' Gay Pride "Nation"
And if rap's a sport, y'all 'bout to get cut, like the previous abbreviation
'Cause you ain't a playa, only time you experience ejaculation is through masturbation
And I ain't talkin' 'bout ya hand, I'm talkin' sex toy vibrations
Had I bombed first, guarantee he'd be pullin' a D. Carradine, death by asphyxiation
Lumbee ain't even gettin' props, I'm receivin' a standin' ovation
Couldn't comprehend those five bars? Well here's a brief translation
I'll always be ya superior, this battle's the manifestation

[Joe Boston]

Lumbee

lispy fag can't make a z sound, except when he sleeps
so when he begs, it sounds like L's resting in peace
Good Opener Good Nameplay

i spit flames, you try to look like you don't mind the flash heat
cocky bitch'll whipe his forhead throwin his sign, what's that mean...
Good Punch creative on the concept

you already know, i'm gettin votes like obama bitch
TNT, you caught in the explosives, like a drama flick
Dont like the first line Second line good metaphore

fuck it, comin hard is a waste on this duche pussy
^ thats the punchline...
... but if it wasn't you wouldn'tve knew rookie
Weak

this the worst 5 bars i ever wrote, don't have to change it
cause you can tell alot about somebody from their name kid
Good punch direct personal

Lumbee stayin in the lead, and your idol was never hot bro
if they sayin Rest In Peace Big................. L never follows
Ok ender

BIG L


Yo, yo, yo, I'll hit this fag with punches till he ain't got teeth, like that biting accusation
Drop this quick verse, make him disappear like a magic trick, weak MC evaporation
Good Opener like the vocab usage good metaphore

Please excuse my procrastination, I didn't go nowhere, consider this my vacation
Pulled my bitch card? That's a false proclamation, y'all know I like confrontation
Good Multis Good Vocab but didnt see this as a punchline with impact

Lumbee ain't takin' 'bout the states in his CUT, he's talkin' Gay Pride "Nation"
And if rap's a sport, y'all 'bout to get cut, like the previous abbreviation
Ok Punch

'Cause you ain't a playa, only time you experience ejaculation is through masturbation
And I ain't talkin' 'bout ya hand, I'm talkin' sex toy vibrations
Good Humor but gay jokes gettin played alot. Good Multis and Vocab again

Had I bombed first, guarantee he'd be pullin' a D. Carradine, death by asphyxiation
Lumbee ain't even gettin' props, I'm receivin' a standin' ovation
Good Punch

Couldn't comprehend those five bars? Well here's a brief translation
I'll always be ya superior, this battle's the manifestation
Good Vocab

V/ Lumbee

I thought he had the better of the punches and personal jabs. Big L came with better vocab abd multis but really nuthing that had much impact. No hate

[Riley Freeman]

lispy fag can't make a z sound, except when he sleeps
so when he begs, it sounds like L's resting in peace

vs

nothing

big L ok you have good vocab, thats great and all but if you cant associate that with punchlines, metaphors, wordplay/nameplay, or any of that sort at all, then its not really worth a read. just looked like i was readin a freestyle more than a battle with your verse. no false criticism just sayin homie, keep tryin, you gotta make some direct hits than just speakin words cuz thats all i'm seein. nothing flashy...nothing that stands out...lumbee barely tried it seems cuz he prob knew he had this easy. his first bar was enough - everything else was sorta half assed it seemed but overall, he was the better battler here. he threw punches, not all of 'em landed and not all of 'em made an impact but something stuck and thats good...

/v/ lumbee

[Lumbee]

aight bet.. i didnt think you would drop, i commend you on not bein a bitch nigga. thanks for votin people. ^

[#PrimeTime]

lispy fag can't make a z sound, except when he sleeps
so when he begs, it sounds like L's resting in peace
i spit flames, you try to look like you don't mind the flash heat
cocky bitch'll whipe his forhead throwin his sign, what's that mean...
you already know, i'm gettin votes like obama bitch
TNT, you caught in the explosives, like a drama flick

vs.

Yo, yo, yo, I'll hit this fag with punches till he ain't got teeth, like that biting accusation
Drop this quick verse, make him disappear like a magic trick, weak MC evaporation
Please excuse my procrastination, I didn't go nowhere, consider this my vacation
Pulled my bitch card? That's a false proclamation, y'all know I like confrontation
Lumbee ain't takin' 'bout the states in his CUT, he's talkin' Gay Pride "Nation"

pretty close battle in my opinion, both went hard and that was good to see. lumbee i think your lines were a little rushed in my opinion, but it wasnt too bad either. gotta give lumbee the props for the opening/closing lines. big l you had some good lines too, but throw in some multi's if you are gunna have long lines, it messes up your flow, no hate.

v - lumbee

[Lumbee]

lol.. close? haha nah lemme show some class. up.

[Caiyo]

spit flames, you try to look like you don't mind the flash heat
cocky bitch'll whipe his forhead throwin his sign, what's that mean...
you already know, i'm gettin votes like obama bitch
TNT, you caught in the explosives, like a drama flick
fuck it, comin hard is a waste on this duche pussy
^ thats the punchline...
... but if it wasn't you wouldn'tve knew rookie


vs

nothing im impressed with by big l

This battle was basic..both dint come too good...lumbee dint do half bad but still dint catch my eye to much...big L vocab dosnt win battle..gotta come with harder punches and less streched bars i suppose..

vote=lum

[Lumbee]

up.

[Lumbee]

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[Lumbee]

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