[SOUNDCLICK]10170037[/SOUNDCLICK]
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Background of the song:
Just giving a little info about myself within this song subliminally.
Produced by Johnny Juliano
sn: my voice still isn't back to 100% from being sick so bare with me, still isn't that noticable tho lol
lines:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...597/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...585/index.html
Last edited by XM; January 30th, 2011 at 07:56 PM
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
nice flow, decent lyrics I liked it alot, decent style props
yeah this was good, i like the drums in the beat, hook isnt bad, flows goodddd, lyrics were pretty good, delievery sounded good with the beat... nice lil track dude
at the start, sounds like the hook was ahead of the beat...but its mixed right...sounds good overall
good quality rhyming...confident and solid presence
good flow
solid drop
RTF plz on Jehovah's Heist
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feelin da beat...flow is nice, delivery is good....concept is very good...lyrics wer on point...mixing is definitely good....hook was nice...overall this track was dope...keep doin ya thang man
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first off, beats tight. I'm not really a good judge of chorus but I liked it. flow is SMOOOOTH, I like the whole blew off rhymeskeme stanza, flow switched up and slowed down and it worked really good. 2nd verse started tight, really diggin the first stanza....overall shit was tight, I would definitely smoke to this.
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you'll smoke to anything nigga lol appreciate the feed tho bruh
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
Sawp X, solid track overall.. you love fawkin with the triplets haha noticed that in a couple tracks you made. The AABA rhyme scheme works for the chorus, as do the triplets (with a little 6 on top of it). Heart on my sleeve, problems on my shoulders.. dopey.. I know it's simple, but those two concepts put together works real well. I just can't tell the overall tone of the piece.. In the chorus, shouldn't it be 'everyone claming they're above me and not you because you're talking about yourself? Ehh I'm knitpicking.. I mean part of it is swag, which makes sense cause you're 'spreading your wings' flying above, but I think it's more about overcoming obstacles in the past and now you are finally able to spread your wings. Overall this dope man with a cool message if I'm gettin it right.
Well done my dude.. I've bumped it several times already. If you're around the Open Mic section, hit up Blacketh and my piece, it's prob on page 2 or 3 cause it's been a while since I've upped it haha. Peace fam
TNL
The Birth Of Creation
--Help us begin
[YOUTUBE]4sZK4Hd28VA[/YOUTUBE]
Appreciate it the feed Ess, and Kuhn
Ess the reason I said over you is strictly because i'm switching back and forth from talking about myself in the 3rd and 1st Person, hence if you was to put yourself in my shoes you can spread ya wings to over come the obstacles presented while displaying that nobody has the same problems to say theirs is greater than another..
hope that help define it more for you
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
nice flow... beats nice.... lyrics are cool.... overall nice piece ,, i jammed to it ,,,, and prolly will again,,,
the beats no joke..i wish i could get song shit like this..its a really inspiring melody..
everything on this is all natural..aint shit to say homie..i mean, its just a really good song..i like everything about it..
i kinda feel like someone else said, that the hook sounds like it jumps in ahead of the beat..but somehow its actually on point..it threw me off the first couple times..but then it all made sense to me..
dope track man..easy award getter..
-10
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This song is dope...
a dope beat from Juliano and effortless flows from XM...the concept is pretty dope and the execution of the topic is flawless. The quality is top notch and you can hear the exuded confidence and emotion emitted throughout the song.
the hook is strong and could be repeated easily based on the incorporation of easy words.
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damn beat is nice, i like the intro its nice, this song is real chill
your verses flow nice, lyrics are on point. this is a head shaker i could listen to this all day, mixing is nice an i can tell u spent alotta time doing this. great track
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JB!
Ahhh so I was half right, kind of haha. Good looks on the explanation. Again dope track fam and good looks on the Open Mic critique.. it just didn't get a lotta feed cause I think people didn't wanna read 60 + lines.
TNL
The Birth Of Creation
--Help us begin
[YOUTUBE]4sZK4Hd28VA[/YOUTUBE]
lmao no diggy, i was gonna go more indepth but that was alot to read for my OM to read in many months lol it was however technically sound tho and a damn good drop
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
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