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DJ Philosophy
MaRVJ
10 lines
due in 2 hours..check in asap
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checkin
matter fact fuck it make it due 2nite cuz im bout to go out....cool?
alright due tonight midnight
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dudes soft and fluffy I cause ya ego to go fragile and static
a lightweight, your lines couldnt weigh a gram if you was a coke addict
broke down your structure leaving the truth ridding the fake
thinking he's the shit this paraplegic is all hype like drake
we all thought you were dirty but ya girls closer to a floormop
cuz she turns around when anybody touches her like a doorknob
aint quick with ya feet one line will cause you to lose dummy
trying to be a comedian cause you being dopest not even funny
wack mixed with garbage the only thing that hits is your stench
cause your punches wouldnt reach me if ya lines were stretched
son watch your grill...talkin tuff but when i pop the steel.
shit....even fuckin talk show host wont be able the dr.phil.
fagget..pay homage why you seem the hate in your raps dummy?.
broke ass bum.....this nigga a sell his baby for cashmoney.
this fag like doin paintin his nails and puttin near on his back.
he had samuel between his legs...but didnt spill beer on his lap.
Your image scar'd!..thanks to me I know my textin his tight.
No goals...his PLAN is to work at sprint for the rest of his life.
YOU AINT HEARD Im killing niggaz the black body bags evidence.
phil got jump'd by 2 midgets he been in karate class ever since.
upppppppp
we all thought you were dirty but ya girls closer to a floormop
cuz she turns around when anybody touches her like a doorknob
vs
son watch your grill...talkin tuff but when i pop the steel.
shit....even fuckin talk show host wont be able the dr.phil.
fagget..pay homage why you seem the hate in your raps dummy?.
broke ass bum.....this nigga a sell his baby for cashmoney.
this fag like doin paintin his nails and puttin near on his back.
he had samuel between his legs...but didnt spill beer on his lap.
Phil had a good bar in there and some ok concepts but punches were pretty weak
Marv brought that heater to this battle. all but closer went hard
very onesided indeed
v/ mj
dudes soft and fluffy I cause ya ego to go fragile and static
a lightweight, your lines couldnt weigh a gram if you was a coke addict
1/3 weak
broke down your structure leaving the truth ridding the fake
thinking he's the shit this paraplegic is all hype like drake
2/3
we all thought you were dirty but ya girls closer to a floormop
cuz she turns around when anybody touches her like a doorknob
3/3 lol
aint quick with ya feet one line will cause you to lose dummy
trying to be a comedian cause you being dopest not even funny
0/3 weak dude
wack mixed with garbage the only thing that hits is your stench
cause your punches wouldnt reach me if ya lines were stretched
1/3 okay
vs
son watch your grill...talkin tuff but when i pop the steel.
shit....even fuckin talk show host wont be able the dr.phil.
2/3
fagget..pay homage why you seem the hate in your raps dummy?.
broke ass bum.....this nigga a sell his baby for cashmoney.
2/3
this fag like doin paintin his nails and puttin near on his back.
he had samuel between his legs...but didnt spill beer on his lap.
3/3 oh shit
Your image scar'd!..thanks to me I know my textin his tight.
No goals...his PLAN is to work at sprint for the rest of his life.
2/3
YOU AINT HEARD Im killing niggaz the black body bags evidence.
phil got jump'd by 2 midgets he been in karate class ever since.
2/3
Phil-7/15..kinda weak bro
MaRV-11/15..heat
RTF link in sig if u wanna
Trapped within the lights of the city..
Where it looks full of life but inside it's all empty..
And from outside it's all tempting..
What..it's all lies upon entry..
:noor:
[YOUTUBE]uGEHlYk4M5c[/YOUTUBE]
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upppppppppp
we all thought you were dirty but ya girls closer to a floormop
cuz she turns around when anybody touches her like a doorknob
vs
A solid verse.
Overall - Normally I'd break the 2 verses down and then drop a vote. But honestly, Philosophy, you had some good idea's going but the punches never really landed. Marv came with a pretty solid verse overall. The closer wasn't as good as the rest, but it was still a dope verse.
No hate either way.
V/ Marv
...RTF in the future...
If I leave feed on your shit, return the favour...
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