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    Walkin Alone

    Walking Alone.



    Words..... stones, that abuse the heads of many,
    amusing but sinfully, my eyes pain streaked, lost and empty
    in yet you befriend me, accidently, no! intentionally,
    now theirs pain, physically, but mostly mentally,
    Life isn't intended to be, just you or me,
    this world is free, but slaves to do whatever is seen on T.V.,

    My cloths it seems, were sown without seams, so theirs lies holes,
    their is poverty, murder, and stds, but yet you insult me over cloths,
    an now in shows, their is no cloths, no adam or eve,
    ...................its adam and steve, and everybody wants to be hoes,
    i wish everybody could lock their face, an keep their walk ways closed,
    because i got 5 fingers and 5 toes, what makes me dif. who knows?
    and why insult me, when you got 20 siblings, and moms thighs are never closed,
    people or born sick, and never reach 11 yrs old,
    and a idoit would laugh because theirs no hair, an liquids leak from her nose,
    cancer is a mutha-, aids from the fucker-,
    ....smoking attaches to your colon, aids got you swollen.
    2 words, "you Mutha-Fucka,"

    So question, How can I trust what you abuse?
    fighting with words, get you stretched with tools,
    it's never a change of hearts, either you lose or you lose,
    walking beside you, and you all on my shoes,
    back in the day their was a team, "Red & Blue"
    now its neither hue, it's "cool & fool"
    "Love & Lust" which do you pursue?

    I pursue respect, and its a open minded race,
    mirrors all around me, all i see is my face,
    so next to me is a empty space,
    as im walking, in thought, in place,

    through this forest of the lost, an despair
    skin pale, hands bare,
    eyes lost, glazed, gazing to nowhere,
    no amazement, no fair, heart cold, with no flare,
    my souls, like a coupon, ready to tear,
    I'm lonely, someone care.
    I'm alone in this forest, similar, to "Smokey the bear"

    Just wandering this forest like a lost spirt, so alone,
    you couldn't see casper, but you can visit me, "Under that Stone
    ."

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    Re: Walkin Alone

    I'd really like to leave you some in depth feed on this... but I'm going to need you to add in your links first.

    I see one response but you need two to keep the piece open. Thanks
    ArtificialIntelligence


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