10 lines due before midnight
round III
Kid L
Chuck Massey
10 lines due before midnight
round III
lol check bro GL
You're so lame even God couldnt work dis miracle for you to stand tall,fool
Wouldnt know how it felt to be on top of ya shit,even if ya sittin on a toilet stool
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im quick to teach, faggot C's its a lesson
his lines too basic
Silly adolescent,your rhymes need maturin,their fulla pubescence
Like a boxer watch me knock this prick out and leave his lips cleft
"Two Words" to anyone who listen to fag spit must b "Mos Def"
Done screwin around ima use "Chuck" to change shit up a "bit"
You know the "drill", C bitch?
After this ,I'll burn on this L as i watch this herb quit
Im doing good considerin the odds,with the bullshit n all
But im really waiting for ya dickriders to make this one a recall
lol drop bruh
You're so lame even God couldnt work dis miracle for you to stand tall,fool
Wouldnt know how it felt to be on top of ya shit,even if ya sittin on a toilet stool
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this L=his L
You're so lame even God couldnt work dis miracle for you to stand tall,fool
Wouldnt know how it felt to be on top of ya shit,even if ya sittin on a toilet stool
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Kid L's record vs Me (0-2) winless
ROUND 3
like trouble kids i know raps principles better so fix ya garbage
i passed kid so many L's you'd think i'm smoking with kindergartners
i carry bigger arms so if you ain't got a ticket to the gun show bye bye
i'm flexing on this verse, so when i run it by him he think it was a drive by
haha put all my dickriders in a room and i bet you that shits quietOriginally Posted by KID L
but your girls mouth is a cockpit...
...so fuck riding i got dick pilots
RB got alot of wack names, they should yall up you can be a starter
then watch as iBeastOut on STRE3T KIDs and make em lyrical - Martyr -'s
you should leave and come back Feb 3rd if you wanna do something ya dig
cause then i'll be 18...
...so i won't be allowed to fuck with the Kid
just wrote this walking home from work, maybe like 10 minutes?
4th bar should be
RB got alot of wack names, they should *team* yall up you can be a starter
then watch as iBeastOut on STRE3T KIDs and make em lyrical - Martyr -'s
and for noobies those 3 names in the punch were some of the wackest dudes on FL
up votes
Kid L:
im quick to teach, faggot C's its a lesson
his lines too basic
Silly adolescent,your rhymes need maturin,their fulla pubescence
^ meh no real hit
Like a boxer watch me knock this prick out and leave his lips cleft
"Two Words" to anyone who listen to fag spit must b "Mos Def"
^ i see what you were trying to do, but the wording fucked it up....
Done screwin around ima use "Chuck" to change shit up a "bit"
You know the "drill", C bitch?
After this ,I'll burn on this L as i watch this herb quit
^ okay good line on the chuck and on the second...
Im doing good considerin the odds,with the bullshit n all
But im really waiting for ya dickriders to make this one a recall
^ meh not something to close with
CM:
like trouble kids i know raps principles better so fix ya garbage
i passed kid so many L's you'd think i'm smoking with kindergartners
^ meh nothing amazing
i carry bigger arms so if you ain't got a ticket to the gun show bye bye
i'm flexing on this verse, so when i run it by him he think it was a drive by
^ lol good second line....
haha put all my dickriders in a room and i bet you that shits quiet
but your girls mouth is a cockpit...
...so fuck riding i got dick pilots
^ ha....decent
RB got alot of wack names, they should yall up you can be a starter
then watch as iBeastOut on STRE3T KIDs and make em lyrical - Martyr -'s
^ okay
you should leave and come back Feb 3rd if you wanna do something ya dig
cause then i'll be 18...
...so i won't be allowed to fuck with the Kid
^ hot closer
Meh this battle was kind of lukewarm IMO, but you both did your thing Chuck just got the more consistancy....and he got my attention with the closer....so i gotta go with macey....
Vote = CM
chuck ur closer & cockpit lines were coo. kid l.. u still need to improve ur punches. ur not really doing anything wit them. make them witty & harsh. u seem to be writing down the first thing that comes into your head.. don't. it's usually played. chuck.. u came alrightish. u did enough to win.
v/chuck
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im quick to teach, faggot C's its a lesson
his lines too basic
Silly adolescent,your rhymes need maturin,their fulla pubescence
-too streatched, makes sense but not that good
Like a boxer watch me knock this prick out and leave his lips cleft
"Two Words" to anyone who listen to fag spit must b "Mos Def"
-how do you leave someones lips cleft, poorly worded, how can u have words for someone whos deaf n how can they listen, not good
Done screwin around ima use "Chuck" to change shit up a "bit"
You know the "drill", C bitch?
After this ,I'll burn on this L as i watch this herb quit
-terrible word play, real basic, not good
Im doing good considerin the odds,with the bullshit n all
But im really waiting for ya dickriders to make this one a recall
-real basic, not good
vs.
like trouble kids i know raps principles better so fix ya garbage
i passed kid so many L's you'd think i'm smoking with kindergartners
-doesnt make any sense, not good
i carry bigger arms so if you ain't got a ticket to the gun show bye bye
i'm flexing on this verse, so when i run it by him he think it was a drive by
-again, doesnt make sense
haha put all my dickriders in a room and i bet you that shits quiet
but your girls mouth is a cockpit...
...so fuck riding i got dick pilots
-naturally they would be quiet, still not good
RB got alot of wack names, they should yall up you can be a starter
then watch as iBeastOut on STRE3T KIDs and make em lyrical - Martyr -'s
-bad forced word play, martyr is a streatch to fit in here
you should leave and come back Feb 3rd if you wanna do something ya dig
cause then i'll be 18...
...so i won't be allowed to fuck with the Kid
-ehh alright, basic rhyme scheem
v/ chuck
up #2
i didn't think both verses were outstanding, kid l didn't really do much for me, he needs alot of work. CM coulda done better i believe, but really didn't need that much to win. didn't have much, but he did have lines that made sense, and actually threw stuff at L so imma have to give it o cm
vote=chuck
up #3
up #4
you should leave and come back Feb 3rd if you wanna do something ya dig
cause then i'll be 18...
...so i won't be allowed to fuck with the Kid
vs
a bunch of almost concepts...
Chuck didn't have much.... most of the punches were below average or forced... i liked your closer the most... Kid, your shit just didn't connect... it's like you have concepts but don't know how to form them into punches...
vote Chuck
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