LLL Season 11: Week 3
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LLL Season 11: Week 3
Standard Rules (found in LLL Office)
Check in by Wednesday
Drop by Midnight Friday (Eastern Time)
16 Lines Minimum
Vote on 5 Battles
MUST LEAVE LINKS in your check in, or lose 2 votes per missing link
Good Luck
Last edited by Sting3r; August 2nd, 2009 at 01:11 AM
$usernamejoshs
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you won't waste YOUR time.. ha.
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i'll make the battle a party. i can't lose it,
man i'll dance on ya spinal chord til it sounds more like trance music
quit talkin to me. i'm like u ain't dope enough,
why you so obsessed with me? u got mariah's single blowin up
i read up on u. bland, uncreative .. a lesser bloke,
fuck a window of opportunity. u'd need a patio of luck to even get a vote
you can't talk about ur record later. i'll shift/wreck it,
..u won't have time to tell a Taylor story cuz u'll be making a Swift exit
told ya i'm artistic. i do all sorts with some effect,
i'll breakdance.. it consists of me jumpin up & down on ur fuckin' neck
past ur best. hasbeen that's just crude in speech,
you're so over the hills. ..ur practically watchin old reruns of laguna beach
wtf u think ur penning. i'll nvr begin to rattle,
ya $criptures are so wack. ..now even THAT dude can't win a battle
U NVR CONNECT! u think ur a lad that'll move me?
ya bars STAY in the Land of the lost. will ferrel battles them in the movie
yeaa mannn
Last edited by worden.; July 31st, 2009 at 12:20 PM
I'll be back on here around 4 AM to drop, So you can edit or add on till then. If you decide to DQ, then I'll just drop late and take the -2. Either way. Good Showing.
$usernamejoshs
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The way I see it, your level of skill is constructing an obstacle..
My goals to write something dope about you, but it's just fucking impossible
You're a bit confused of your roots so I Def. wont play ya short
There's NOTHING Italian about lonely night with Death note manga porn
see, I live up to the hype so very far from mad & corny
while you just fall under the bar.. cotic vs. commissioner category
You always fail when it counts, & on that matter I'm certain
So go ahead & cry uncle.. cause relatively, you're just an old wacker version
but yo, Casanova has a simpler sex life then it would seem to be
He told me it was like fitting a square peg in his round hole.. repeatedly
I wont bring it to blood stains on this gap kids sweatshirt
Since I Already made this bitch dig his own grave as a last ditch effort
& I'm even more cold hearted, it's not often I mention this
But he's just starting to scratch the surface.. of that coffin I left him in ^^
I bet you're still a virgin.. even though sex aint a hard job..
So I guess you're no ladies man, Or sex symbol.. Casanova, OR heart throb
G/L
$usernamejoshs
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told ya i'm artistic. i do all sorts with some effect,
i'll breakdance.. it consists of me jumpin up & down on ur fuckin' neck
past ur best. hasbeen that's just crude in speech,
you're so over the hills. ..ur practically watchin old reruns of laguna beach
Vs.
see, I live up to the hype so very far from mad & corny
while you just fall under the bar.. cotic vs. commissioner category
You always fail when it counts, & on that matter I'm certain
So go ahead & cry uncle.. cause relatively, you're just an old wacker version
& I'm even more cold hearted, it's not often I mention this
But he's just starting to scratch the surface.. of that coffin I left him in ^^
Both had some iffy bars, and Josh had some played shit (like the "last ditch effort" line).. but I felt that Josh won this with one more quotable, barely.. Cas's misses were REALLY bad in my opinion.. they were corny/gay for the most part.. also, Josh's last bar was ALMOST a quotable.. so that said, I got Josh by a bar or so.... \\//ote: Josh S.
i read up on u. bland, uncreative .. a lesser bloke,
fuck a window of opportunity. u'd need a patio of luck to even get a vote
you can't talk about ur record later. i'll shift/wreck it,
..u won't have time to tell a Taylor story cuz u'll be making a Swift exit
told ya i'm artistic. i do all sorts with some effect,
i'll breakdance.. it consists of me jumpin up & down on ur fuckin' neck
vs.
The way I see it, your level of skill is constructing an obstacle..
My goals to write something dope about you, but it's just fucking impossible
see, I live up to the hype so very far from mad & corny
while you just fall under the bar.. cotic vs. commissioner category
but yo, Casanova has a simpler sex life then it would seem to be
He told me it was like fitting a square peg in his round hole.. repeatedly
Vote - Josh, close but his good bars hit harder than nova's. Casanova had some nice concepts, but nothing really stinged to me. Some of both of your bars were awful though..AWFUL.
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Originally Posted by Josh S.
vs
'll make the battle a party. i can't lose it,
man i'll dance on ya spinal chord til it sounds more like trance music
okish
quit talkin to me. i'm like u ain't dope enough,
why you so obsessed with me? u got mariah's single blowin up
mehh
i read up on u. bland, uncreative .. a lesser bloke,
fuck a window of opportunity. u'd need a patio of luck to even get a vote
coo
you can't talk about ur record later. i'll shift/wreck it,
..u won't have time to tell a Taylor story cuz u'll be making a Swift exit
mehh
told ya i'm artistic. i do all sorts with some effect,
i'll breakdance.. it consists of me jumpin up & down on ur fuckin' neck
i liked this
past ur best. hasbeen that's just crude in speech,
you're so over the hills. ..ur practically watchin old reruns of laguna beach
not harsh but still a good bar
wtf u think ur penning. i'll nvr begin to rattle,
ya $criptures are so wack. ..now even THAT dude can't win a battle
mehh
U NVR CONNECT! u think ur a lad that'll move me?
ya bars STAY in the Land of the lost. will ferrel battles them in the movie
weak
damn, both had decent verses but i honestly expected more from both. cas- alot of your lines were creative but pretty damn corny. work on getting more personal and actually having harsh punches instead of just somewut wiity. josh ya verse was ok, just barely enough to squeeze by here...
v/ Josh
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past ur best. hasbeen that's just crude in speech,
you're so over the hills. ..ur practically watchin old reruns of laguna beach
wtf u think ur penning. i'll nvr begin to rattle,
ya $criptures are so wack. ..now even THAT dude can't win a battle
vs
The way I see it, your level of skill is constructing an obstacle..
My goals to write something dope about you, but it's just fucking impossible
You always fail when it counts, & on that matter I'm certain
So go ahead & cry uncle.. cause relatively, you're just an old wacker version
imo its tied in qoutables. cas had some ehh concepts while josh had more played ones. for me it comes down to creativity and i was diggin cas' verse on a fresher level.
v/ casanova
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read up on u. bland, uncreative .. a lesser bloke,
fuck a window of opportunity. u'd need a patio of luck to even get a vote
you can't talk about ur record later. i'll shift/wreck it,
..u won't have time to tell a Taylor story cuz u'll be making a Swift exit
nice bar ^^^^
Vs.
see, I live up to the hype so very far from mad & corny
while you just fall under the bar.. cotic vs. commissioner category
but yo, Casanova has a simpler sex life then it would seem to be
He told me it was like fitting a square peg in his round hole.. repeatedly
lol. funny shyt
I bet you're still a virgin.. even though sex aint a hard job..
So I guess you're no ladies man, Or sex symbol.. Casanova, OR heart throb
even tho Josh had a couple of played bars i think he won this jus cuz his verse was more consistent. but u barely won this Josh, imo. that "scratch the surface" line look'd mad familiar tho. like i seen it sumwer. but i ain't accusin u of nothin tho dawg. jus sayin...
Vote-Josh
you can't talk about ur record later. i'll shift/wreck it,
..u won't have time to tell a Taylor story cuz u'll be making a Swift exit
wtf u think ur penning. i'll nvr begin to rattle,
ya $criptures are so wack. ..now even THAT dude can't win a battle
U NVR CONNECT! u think ur a lad that'll move me?
ya bars STAY in the Land of the lost. will ferrel battles them in the movie
vs.
see, I live up to the hype so very far from mad & corny
while you just fall under the bar.. cotic vs. commissioner category
Casanova, ur verse was okay. U had a lot of played shit in there like the over the hills, window of opportunity, and a few other things. But, on a positive note, ur wording is on point, its perhaps as smooth as anyone's i've seen in this league. I think once u learn to combine that wording with some fresher concepts, ur gonna be very dangerous. Josh, I wasn't impressed at all with ur verse. All ur concepts were too simple and u didn't really have any creativity. Ur opener, cry uncle, scratch the surface... u pretty much just used all those concepts in the most basic way imaginable. The dig his own grave / last ditch effort concept was cool, but the wording was off and that killed it. Really the only thing I could quote from you was the fall under the bar thing. Overall, I dunno what others are seein', but I thought Casanova actually got this fairly easily.
Vote - Casnova
see, I live up to the hype so very far from mad & corny
while you just fall under the bar.. cotic vs. commissioner category
You always fail when it counts, & on that matter I'm certain
So go ahead & cry uncle.. cause relatively, you're just an old wacker version
& I'm even more cold hearted, it's not often I mention this
But he's just starting to scratch the surface.. of that coffin I left him in
vs
i read up on u. bland, uncreative .. a lesser bloke,
fuck a window of opportunity. u'd need a patio of luck to even get a vote
you can't talk about ur record later. i'll shift/wreck it,
..u won't have time to tell a Taylor story cuz u'll be making a Swift exit
past ur best. hasbeen that's just crude in speech,
you're so over the hills. ..ur practically watchin old reruns of laguna beach
ok... this is tied in quotables... what it came down to was the bad bars... the rest of Josh's verse was average and a little bland... Cas had a couple of truly awful lines i weren't feeling at all... so i gotta give it to Josh for consistency...
vote Josh
More votes.. Seriously.
i'll make the battle a party. i can't lose it,
man i'll dance on ya spinal chord til it sounds more like trance music
aight
quit talkin to me. i'm like u ain't dope enough,
why you so obsessed with me? u got mariah's single blowin up
ehhh
i read up on u. bland, uncreative .. a lesser bloke,
fuck a window of opportunity. u'd need a patio of luck to even get a vote
concept is a reach, missed to me
you can't talk about ur record later. i'll shift/wreck it,
..u won't have time to tell a Taylor story cuz u'll be making a Swift exit
i get the wp but at the same time it comes together into a lame punch, meh
told ya i'm artistic. i do all sorts with some effect,
i'll breakdance.. it consists of me jumpin up & down on ur fuckin' neck
nah..
past ur best. hasbeen that's just crude in speech,
you're so over the hills. ..ur practically watchin old reruns of laguna beach
this was cool
wtf u think ur penning. i'll nvr begin to rattle,
ya $criptures are so wack. ..now even THAT dude can't win a battle
meh
U NVR CONNECT! u think ur a lad that'll move me?
ya bars STAY in the Land of the lost. will ferrel battles them in the movie
no no no
vs.
The way I see it, your level of skill is constructing an obstacle..
My goals to write something dope about you, but it's just fucking impossible
average at best, too simple
You're a bit confused of your roots so I Def. wont play ya short
There's NOTHING Italian about lonely night with Death note manga porn
average, execution had a lot of awkwardness to it
see, I live up to the hype so very far from mad & corny
while you just fall under the bar.. cotic vs. commissioner category
not bad
You always fail when it counts, & on that matter I'm certain
So go ahead & cry uncle.. cause relatively, you're just an old wacker version
set up doesn't help the direction you took this punch, still some ok ideas to this, i did something different with his concept on another site
but yo, Casanova has a simpler sex life then it would seem to be
He told me it was like fitting a square peg in his round hole.. repeatedly
blah
I wont bring it to blood stains on this gap kids sweatshirt
Since I Already made this bitch dig his own grave as a last ditch effort
played and not worded right
& I'm even more cold hearted, it's not often I mention this
But he's just starting to scratch the surface.. of that coffin I left him in ^^
horribly played
I bet you're still a virgin.. even though sex aint a hard job..
So I guess you're no ladies man, Or sex symbol.. Casanova, OR heart throb
no.. if you were going for a nameplay this missed badly
somewhat close battle, both had big misses to me, josh gets this with just a little more polish and substance tho he came perilously close to losing for the awful way he finished
v/ josh
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