ChuckM vs KID L

[bob the builder]

16 lines, 24 hours as you said. drop today if you want though cause i'll probably be ready after i go handle some biz.

[KID L]

checkin in

Ayyo

Lemme [/b]Chuck[/b] an L to ya cuz, not for ya loss yet, just for kicks

Leave ya sole(soul) missin cuz you cant walk da talk, let alone take a hit

I'm more of Jekyll when it comes to dis shit im all about madness

You more like da Hyde(s)(hides) i collect as trophies young shit, chk diss

Listen if i could collect a penny for every bad punch you've thrown

Ya girl,i'd copper(cop her) n smash her up like im Sylvester Stallone

I got an ice box where ma heart used to be,know why bitch?

Read ya past battles, just do like i did now,drop dead from ya wackness

Cuz,

You whack off more than Peewee Herman, bad lines and all

Ahaha

Jackin off to cracked bitches who carry big sticks and much larger balls

Homo shit, treat ya like a fag you aint nothing but smoked herb

Or more like a ho,im just here to beat dis pussy up and kick him to da curb

Chuck you dont pack enough punch to rip any bitch, you always miss

less you're pullin ya strap on outta nigga's asses is the only time you feel you've hit

No wings, yet you feel you can fly right through me to a win, it'll be god sent

So high in da clouds wit that thought,you're downing nuts from a male flight attendant

[KID L]

fag- cigarette butt
Sylvester Stallone- Rocky
Peewee herman- dude's gay,homo and everything...lol


drop bruh...

[bob the builder]

goddamn, are you serious? you really typed that shit? you're slacking off
i mean half your bars was homo sex, and Peewee Herman jacking off

shit so i guess this dudes an expert on the subject, the master of masturbation
rushing me to drop, get your family in the waiting room, so give this bastard patience

my last battles i lacked the experience but personnally i think i did well
i'm going hard now, and i guess you're ready for loss hell, ya name is Kid L

and i guess this fits since my middle name starts with a W
and bitches like a winner...
so you and your girlfriend are probably wanting to cuddle too

yeah so next battle from the right set of lips
hop on a track but you forget the hip

he forgot hips cause he get's no ass, hence why rapping bout beating dick
and without any ass, it seems that it's impossible for him to be the shit

so that leaves his girl leaving him, cause his flowing is bad son
so now her favorite rapper is ChuckM and a trojan magnum

so them face shots cumming at her head look like hollow tips
so she wasn't biting her nails when i say she swallowed clips

[KID L]

nice nice....we got a good battle....uppin folks

[Vallus]

Chuck the cuddle too line wasnt very good
and some shit came out as forced like the forget the hip ish
but u had some good stuff in there too like the magnum ish
that spacing ur lines out shit has gotta stop though


Kid L...u had some decent stuff like the copper wordplay
but the way u worded alot of your stuff it seemed stretched
and could have been flipped much better.....

Kid...work on coming with some better concepts and better wording
for harder punches next match

vote - ChuckM

[KID L]

ok check the battle i had with Rdot...lol..and teh upcomin one with Artic...

[bob the builder]

uppy

[Camoflawge.]

Lemme Chuck an L to ya cuz, not for ya loss yet, just for kicks
Leave ya sole(soul) missin cuz you cant walk da talk, let alone take a hit
aight wordplay, punch was mehh though
I'm more of Jekyll when it comes to dis shit im all about madness
You more like da Hyde(s)(hides) i collect as trophies young shit, chk diss
Gay as fuck
Listen if i could collect a penny for every bad punch you've thrown
Ya girl,i'd copper(cop her) n smash her up like im Sylvester Stallone
aight, cool
I got an ice box where ma hear used to be,know why bitch?
Read ya past battles, just do like i did now,drop dead from ya wackness
terrible
Cuz,You whack off more than Peewee Herman, bad lines and all
Jackin off to cracked bitches who carry big sticks and much larger balls
no
Homo shit, treat ya like a fag you aint nothing but smoked herb
Or more like a ho,im just here to beat dis pussy up and kick him to da curb
not feeling it
Chuck you dont pack enough punch to rip any bitch, you always miss
less you're pullin ya strap on outta nigga's asses is the only time you feel you've hit

No wings, yet you feel you can fly right through me to a win, it'll be god sent
So high in da clouds wit that thought,you're downing nuts from a male flight
this didn't even rhyme

Comments: Horrible drop, lots of wack lines, had like 2 bars with some decent wordplay, the rest was wack.. Work on setting up punches... Your lucky I even broke it down with the fuckin stupid one line structure you got going on, change that ASAP

Vs.


goddamn, are you serious? you really typed that shit? you're slacking off
i mean half your bars was homo sex, and Peewee Herman jacking off
Nah, not feeling it
shit so i guess this dudes an expert on the subject, the master of masturbation
rushing me to drop, get your family in the waiting room, so give this bastard patience
No
my last battles i lacked the experience but personnally i think i did well
i'm going hard now, and i guess you're ready for loss hell, ya name is Kid L
you could have flipped this way better dude, should have finished the line by saying.. "Im going to give this Kid L's"
and i guess this fits since my middle name starts with a W
and bitches like a winner...
so you and your girlfriend are probably wanting to cuddle too
rofl, no
yeah so next battle from the right set of lips
hop on a track but you forget the hip
wtf, that was short as hell..waste of a bar
he forgot hips cause he get's no ass, hence why rapping bout beating dick
and without any ass, it seems that it's impossible for him to be the shit
ok
so that leaves his girl leaving him, cause his flowing is bad son
so now her favorite rapper is ChuckM and a trojan magnum
lol
so them face shots cumming at her head look like hollow tips
so she wasn't biting her nails when i say she swallowed clips
Nice, won you the battle IMO

Commnts: I thought your last battle was actually a little more creative but whatver, you're getting there dude.. Flow was aight, losethat spaced out structure, that shit is stupid..

Vote: ChuckM for coming a less wack than Kid L

[bob the builder]

up!

[The Seven]

i dunno... i dont see much here plus it was a feed anyway...chuck fed from kids masturbation verse (which there shouldnt be a masturbation verse cuz thats played out...literally...lol) yall need to practice 1,2 punches in cypher awhile, and read some old legendary battles and stuff, so you can see where you want to get to..
NO VOTE/ FEED

[bob the builder]

up!

[the shooter]

this was a shitty battle. vote goes to chuckm due to being not as bad and attempting multis. both were pretty weak though. ill do a battle with either one of u if your willing...

[w0lverine]

chuck fed, should be dqd

[HYPOKRIT]

If KidL wants him DQ'd its up to him to report it.

As for the battle i see a clear win for chuck decnt multi's good attempt at punchs. Vs poor attempt at punch's no multi's and poor attempt at wordplays.

V/ChuckM