ChuckM vs Brutality

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aight 10 lines, whatever you wanna spit, lines due hour after check?

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this dude is such a fable he could leave Aesop dreary
ain't you see what's about to happen to your boy TheChaosTheory.?
shit but what i write causes pandemonium
i leave him feeling salty call him the man of sodium
not from New York but i'm Giant in the sack like Mike Strahan (NY Giants leader in defensive sacks)
maybe bring enough quarters to the game next time and you might play man
but he can't make a hit, so when i leave the battle he ought to miss me
but i'm bout to turn the game around...XBox 360
really to battle me is this man on purple?
for real he must've been higher then the pants on Urkle

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Chuck ya verse in the trash cuz ur time has bin (been)
you should have skipped this battle cuz its one ur gonna catch an L in
Wordplay isn't my forte, but i can experiment, i dont even need to come hard
This win seems such an easy gift, i might even Chuck M a thankyou card
i bet that picture brings in loads of girls, get it from the images in yahoo?
shit, I'd love to see the "I've been had!" look on there fact when they meet you
Ah fuck i've just realized that i'm wasting my lines on this hoe
If i chucked him into a fast moving river he couldn't follow a flow
yo the decisions been made before the votes have begun, Chuck cant win for shit
You could drop 50 bars against my 5, and you still wouldn't score a hit.

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Chuck ya verse in the trash cuz ur time has bin (been)
you should have skipped this battle cuz its one ur gonna catch an L in
Wordplay isn't my forte, but i can experiment, i dont even need to come hard
This win seems such an easy gift, i might even Chuck M a thankyou card
i bet that picture brings in loads of girls, get it from the images in yahoo?
shit, I'd love to see the "I've been had!" look on thier face when they meet you
Ah fuck i've just realized that i'm wasting my lines on this hoe
If i chucked him into a fast moving river he couldn't follow a flow
yo the decisions been made before the votes have begun, Chuck cant win for shit
You could drop 50 bars against my 5, and you still wouldn't score a hit.



Quickly edited "fact" to "face" cuz it was a stupid error

Im done


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just gonna put an explanation out before the votes... this is the picture i am talking about
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/albu...&pictureid=538

[Camoflawge.]

this dude is such a fable he could leave Aesop dreary
ain't you see what's about to happen to your boy TheChaosTheory.?
Meh, weak.. Bad opener
shit but what i write causes pandemonium
i leave him feeling salty call him the man of sodium
weak, leave him feeling salty? WHAT A DISS!
not from New York but i'm Giant in the sack like Mike Strahan (NY Giants leader in defensive sacks)
maybe bring enough quarters to the game next time and you might play man
nah not feeling this dude
but he can't make a hit, so when i leave the battle he ought to miss me
but i'm bout to turn the game around...XBox 360
Ok concept
really to battle me is this man on purple?
for real he must've been higher then the pants on Urkle
Mehh

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Chuck ya verse in the trash cuz ur time has bin (been)
you should have skipped this battle cuz its one ur gonna catch an L in
Nice setup, terrible punch
Wordplay isn't my forte, but i can experiment, i dont even need to come hard
This win seems such an easy gift, i might even Chuck M a thankyou card
aight I chuckled
i bet that picture brings in loads of girls, get it from the images in yahoo?
shit, I'd love to see the "I've been had!" look on there fact when they meet you
Huh?
Ah fuck i've just realized that i'm wasting my lines on this hoe
If i chucked him into a fast moving river he couldn't follow a flow
ok
yo the decisions been made before the votes have begun, Chuck cant win for shit
You could drop 50 bars against my 5, and you still wouldn't score a hit.
Nah, not feeling it

Comments: Chuck I though you had some decent wordplay and a good vocab but your punches just weren't making an impact for me... Also try and make your lines all about the same length because the flow is messed up here...

Lyrical... You had some decent attempts at wordplay as well, the first bar had potential but a bad punch killed it... Flow was good, some of your lines hit harder than Chuck and for that you get my vote...

Vote: Not a great battle from either of you, it was closer than it looked but I just give the edge to Lyrical Brutality

[Bless Da Lord]

this dude is such a fable he could leave Aesop dreary
ain't you see what's about to happen to your boy TheChaosTheory.?
nah
shit but what i write causes pandemonium
i leave him feeling salty call him the man of sodium
weak
not from New York but i'm Giant in the sack like Mike Strahan (NY Giants leader in defensive sacks)
maybe bring enough quarters to the game next time and you might play man
nah
but he can't make a hit, so when i leave the battle he ought to miss me
but i'm bout to turn the game around...XBox 360
weak
really to battle me is this man on purple?
for real he must've been higher then the pants on Urkle
iight

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Chuck ya verse in the trash cuz ur time has bin (been)
you should have skipped this battle cuz its one ur gonna catch an L in
nah
Wordplay isn't my forte, but i can experiment, i dont even need to come hard
This win seems such an easy gift, i might even Chuck M a thankyou card
iight
i bet that picture brings in loads of girls, get it from the images in yahoo?
shit, I'd love to see the "I've been had!" look on there fact when they meet you
lol weak
Ah fuck i've just realized that i'm wasting my lines on this hoe
If i chucked him into a fast moving river he couldn't follow a flow
iight
yo the decisions been made before the votes have begun, Chuck cant win for shit
You could drop 50 bars against my 5, and you still wouldn't score a hit.
iight

Brutality won this battle for having better punches and wordplay...ChuckM you should elevate more on your punches...comming wit stronger punches is key...this battle wasnt to bad...both of you guys could elevate more

v,/Brutality

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and i guess i get no points for multi's
guess i'll have to dumb it down next time

[Blaze.]

this dude is such a fable he could leave Aesop dreary
ain't you see what's about to happen to your boy TheChaosTheory.?
Nah, there is no punch or sting.

shit but what i write causes pandemonium
i leave him feeling salty call him the man of sodium
Salt isn't sodium. Miss.

not from New York but i'm Giant in the sack like Mike Strahan (NY Giants leader in defensive sacks)
maybe bring enough quarters to the game next time and you might play man
Meh...

but he can't make a hit, so when i leave the battle he ought to miss me
but i'm bout to turn the game around...XBox 360
Played.

really to battle me is this man on purple?
for real he must've been higher then the pants on Urkle
Played

You try punches which is good but you need better wording and fresher ideas.

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Chuck ya verse in the trash cuz ur time has bin (been)
you should have skipped this battle cuz its one ur gonna catch an L in
Whack.

Wordplay isn't my forte, but i can experiment, i dont even need to come hard
This win seems such an easy gift, i might even Chuck M a thankyou card
Meh..

i bet that picture brings in loads of girls, get it from the images in yahoo?
shit, I'd love to see the "I've been had!" look on thier face when they meet you
Lol...wtf.

Ah fuck i've just realized that i'm wasting my lines on this hoe
If i chucked him into a fast moving river he couldn't follow a flow
Played.

yo the decisions been made before the votes have begun, Chuck cant win for shit
You could drop 50 bars against my 5, and you still wouldn't score a hit.
Whack.

V/ First dude for droppin' mediocre punches more consistently.

[The Archetype]

I'm mad MI told you to beg me... lol... i feel special my input matters... to both of you, don't do explanations or make your words bolded or anything... it's noobish... we'll see the punch... if you gotta explain it, don't use it... and you don't get points for multi's w/ no punch... anyway... here's a world famous Arch Breakdown... lol

this dude is such a fable he could leave Aesop dreary
ain't you see what's about to happen to your boy TheChaosTheory.?
negative... anytime you gotta go search for a link on something it's not good... lol... even then this is just a statement hyping yourself...
shit but what i write causes pandemonium
i leave him feeling salty call him the man of sodium
another weak self glory bar... and that man of sodium shit is lame all around...
not from New York but i'm Giant in the sack like Mike Strahan (NY Giants leader in defensive sacks)
maybe bring enough quarters to the game next time and you might play man
don't use an explanation... set up and punch didn't really go together... you're hyping up your sex game then telling him to bring quarters so he can play? lol... comes across as gay all together... i know what you meant though... even then, the concept was bad...
but he can't make a hit, so when i leave the battle he ought to miss me
but i'm bout to turn the game around...XBox 360
no... another self hype bar... the closest thing to a diss was he can't make a hit... i understand you're going for a football tie in... but the original punch wasn't even worth continuing...
really to battle me is this man on purple?
for real he must've been higher then the pants on Urkle
weak... but your best... and only punch IMO... set up and punch tied in together...

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Chuck ya verse in the trash cuz ur time has bin (been)
you should have skipped this battle cuz its one ur gonna catch an L in
don't use explantions... we'll get the wordplay... and this isn't a punch... just a statement... like "if you walk in the front door, you'll enter the house"... lol... no wit or anything... and don't just throw his name in there and expect it to be nameplay... be more creative...
Wordplay isn't my forte, but i can experiment, i dont even need to come hard
This win seems such an easy gift, i might even Chuck M a thankyou card
decent enough i guess... swag bars have to be dope though... this was weak... and set up seemed too wordy... i don't know what it is about it...
i bet that picture brings in loads of girls, get it from the images in yahoo?
shit, I'd love to see the "I've been had!" look on there fact when they meet you
doesn't rhyme... just cuz the last syllable rhymes doesn't mean the bar will... shit concept...
Ah fuck i've just realized that i'm wasting my lines on this hoe
If i chucked him into a fast moving river he couldn't follow a flow
played concept... decent enough considering the rest...
yo the decisions been made before the votes have begun, Chuck cant win for shit
You could drop 50 bars against my 5, and you still wouldn't score a hit.
another statement shit...

vote LB

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