Hexzen (4-4) vs. Phlymo (3-2)

[Dios de Hip Hop]

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[phlymo]

Hey Ted. 16-20?


Smalls/Swag
Toke/Punch
Def/Tony
Chrit/Coop
Sunny/Noodle

[Hexzen]

16 man, im sick as hell. thats why i havnt been at all active lately.

[Hexzen]

I'm known to beat down fags, so stepin to me wats this bitch thinkin?
In this battle I'm just gonna crack another like COM when hes binge drinkin.
While your reps sinkin, I'm the type to spit hot shit n leave Phly burnt to crisp,
So if he's ever able to rise from the ashes it’s a sign that he finally elevated a bit.
Cus he hasn't achieved nothing in the league, hasn't passed any real test,
sat on the throne as a ruler of text?
Nah, Phlys skills never measured up with the best.
An you will confess that there is no stopping me when you catch a knee,
Phly's is gonna be Liston... breaks n bruises like he’s Sonny after fighting Ali.
My punches are somthin like a hurricane P, I always reign supreme,
Only way he'd be able to weather the Storm is playing VS the WNBA team.
A hospitals the scene... these are your final seconds is what I'm implying,
I won’t have your death put on file but he'll be asking "Document that I'm dying"
Bitch I aint lying, you'll lose just as quickly as my punches devour your face,
There’s such a big gap between our skills NASA couldn't help you cover the space.
In this victory chase I got em fallen quick, just yelling come on bitch get up,
Phly comin out on top? Nah he won’t even get to his knees like Fat Joe doin sit ups.



16.

[phlymo]

I’ll make ya head burst, but your drop’s the one that’s read first
n’ votes’ll show me applaud it...like ‘props phly, for making up for Ted’s verse’
i’ll smack ya head to the floor, n’ stomp the shit for five minutes
your face’ll give the decadent so big whole cultures could decline in it
this dumb fuck’s confused if he thinks he’s getting beckoned back
Ted had a lot on his mind, n’ it cleared the auction house in seconds flat
Ya style’s gay as fuck, n’ women are out of reach geek
But he’s got that rock n’ roll sex life, Ted’s getting with a Nugent each week
i’ll drop the hex, it ain’t a threat that this guy’s posed
fuck the shit you’ve achieved Zen, most people do that with their eyes closed
I’ll slit ya throat for rapping, no one wants to hear ya drops weekly
i’ll let ya speak to ya hearts content, since blood muffles words completely
n’ Ted trusts no-one, his mind’s full of doubt and scattered see
dude’s had his misgiving brain ever since he found out she did that to me
This suck-up needs a service, the bitch broke down so fast it’s frightening
Ted’s only roadworthy guys in the hope someone good might start to like him


g/l bud

[Dios de Hip Hop]

I'm known to beat down fags, so stepin to me wats this bitch thinkin?
In this battle I'm just gonna crack another like COM when hes binge drinkin.
nice
While your reps sinkin, I'm the type to spit hot shit n leave Phly burnt to crisp,
So if he's ever able to rise from the ashes it’s a sign that he finally elevated a bit.
meh, decent-ish
Cus he hasn't achieved nothing in the league, hasn't passed any real test,
sat on the throne as a ruler of text?
Nah, Phlys skills never measured up with the best.
nice.
An you will confess that there is no stopping me when you catch a knee,
Phly's is gonna be Liston... breaks n bruises like he’s Sonny after fighting Ali.
decent
My punches are somthin like a hurricane P, I always reign supreme,
Only way he'd be able to weather the Storm is playing VS the WNBA team.
good
A hospitals the scene... these are your final seconds is what I'm implying,
I won’t have your death put on file but he'll be asking "Document that I'm dying"
dope wp
Bitch I aint lying, you'll lose just as quickly as my punches devour your face,
There’s such a big gap between our skills NASA couldn't help you cover the space.
good
In this victory chase I got em fallen quick, just yelling come on bitch get up,
Phly comin out on top? Nah he won’t even get to his knees like Fat Joe doin sit ups.
lol good

dude this is probably your best LLL verse yet that comes to memory. good job

Vs.


I’ll make ya head burst, but your drop’s the one that’s read first
n’ votes’ll show me applaud it...like ‘props phly, for making up for Ted’s verse’
dope
i’ll smack ya head to the floor, n’ stomp the shit for five minutes
your face’ll give the decadent so big whole cultures could decline in it
dope wp, fresh
this dumb fuck’s confused if he thinks he’s getting beckoned back
Ted had a lot on his mind, n’ it cleared the auction house in seconds flat
lol good
Ya style’s gay as fuck, n’ women are out of reach geek
But he’s got that rock n’ roll sex life, Ted’s getting with a Nugent each week
dope
i’ll drop the hex, it ain’t a threat that this guy’s posed
fuck the shit you’ve achieved Zen, most people do that with their eyes closed
good
I’ll slit ya throat for rapping, no one wants to hear ya drops weekly
i’ll let ya speak to ya hearts content, since blood muffles words completely
lol nice
n’ Ted trusts no-one, his mind’s full of doubt and scattered see
dude’s had his misgiving brain ever since he found out she did that to me
omg, nice. caught me off gaurd with this one
This suck-up needs a service, the bitch broke down so fast it’s frightening
Ted’s only roadworthy guys in the hope someone good might start to like him
decent.

wow. that was probably your best verse yet this season phly. damn. with the exception of the closer everything was lol, good, dope or nice.

shit man. Ted you had a good verse bro but phly came swinging here.. really hard. He shined in this match. He won rather comfortably.

VOTE: Phly

[Chrit.]

A hospitals the scene... these are your final seconds is what I'm implying,
I won’t have your death put on file but he'll be asking "Document that I'm dying"

vs

i’ll smack ya head to the floor, n’ stomp the shit for five minutes
your face’ll give the decadent so big whole cultures could decline in it
Ya style’s gay as fuck, n’ women are out of reach geek
But he’s got that rock n’ roll sex life, Ted’s getting with a Nugent each week
I’ll slit ya throat for rapping, no one wants to hear ya drops weekly
i’ll let ya speak to ya hearts content, since blood muffles words completely
n’ Ted trusts no-one, his mind’s full of doubt and scattered see
dude’s had his misgiving brain ever since he found out she did that to me

Hex wasnt bad... but everything was pretty played... a couple decent concepts and the wording wasnt bad... but I'd seen most of it before.

Phly was fresh here. Nothing bad I can say really.

v/Phly

[Sting3r]

I’ll make ya head burst, but your drop’s the one that’s read first
n’ votes’ll show me applaud it...like ‘props phly, for making up for Ted’s verse’

decent wording and conceptual

i’ll smack ya head to the floor, n’ stomp the shit for five minutes
your face’ll give the decadent so big whole cultures could decline in it

lol..not sure the grammar works very well.. but a cool line none the less. funny

this dumb fuck’s confused if he thinks he’s getting beckoned back
Ted had a lot on his mind, n’ it cleared the auction house in seconds flat

are you saying he's a fast talker or what? it's late and im confused.. lol

Ya style’s gay as fuck, n’ women are out of reach geek
But he’s got that rock n’ roll sex life, Ted’s getting with a Nugent each week

that's gay.. literally.. funny name play.. and word play.. dope bar.. new gent.. lmao

i’ll drop the hex, it ain’t a threat that this guy’s posed
fuck the shit you’ve achieved Zen, most people do that with their eyes closed

damn, why'd that take me like 5 minutes to get... you know that makes a bar far more enjoyable when it hits u after reading it 4 times.. lol.. i think it was because i forgot his name was hex zen.. dope misdirection.

I’ll slit ya throat for rapping, no one wants to hear ya drops weekly
i’ll let ya speak to ya hearts content, since blood muffles words completely

ok.. not a bad flip

n’ Ted trusts no-one, his mind’s full of doubt and scattered see
dude’s had his misgiving brain ever since he found out she did that to me

ok wording..decent nuf.. didn't have much impact on me tho..

This suck-up needs a service, the bitch broke down so fast it’s frightening
Ted’s only roadworthy guys in the hope someone good might start to like him

decent concept.. ok wp.. i don't like the wording much

Vs.

I'm known to beat down fags, so stepin to me wats this bitch thinkin?
In this battle I'm just gonna crack another like COM when hes binge drinkin.

we've seen plenty com/drunk flips this season.. not sure that this is any better than the last 5 i've seen.

While your reps sinkin, I'm the type to spit hot shit n leave Phly burnt to crisp,
So if he's ever able to rise from the ashes it’s a sign that he finally elevated a bit.

elevated/rise.. i think you coulda worked the concept a bit better.. just my opinion.. decent wording

Cus he hasn't achieved nothing in the league, hasn't passed any real test,
sat on the throne as a ruler of text?
Nah, Phlys skills never measured up with the best.

measured/ruler.. the wording is a bit bland, weak punch

An you will confess that there is no stopping me when you catch a knee,
Phly's is gonna be Liston... breaks n bruises like he’s Sonny after fighting Ali.

punch isn't so harsh.. ok concept

My punches are somthin like a hurricane P, I always reign supreme,
Only way he'd be able to weather the Storm is playing VS the WNBA team.

funny concept.. storm.. alright punch

A hospitals the scene... these are your final seconds is what I'm implying,
I won’t have your death put on file but he'll be asking "Document that I'm dying"

the word play is cool.. the wording is terrible.. u coulda worked this much better imo

Bitch I aint lying, you'll lose just as quickly as my punches devour your face,
There’s such a big gap between our skills NASA couldn't help you cover the space.

does nasa cover space? they go IN space.. they don't cover it.. bit of a wording issue..

In this victory chase I got em fallen quick, just yelling come on bitch get up,
Phly comin out on top? Nah he won’t even get to his knees like Fat Joe doin sit ups.

for some reason, the thought of fat joe doing sit ups.. just sickens me.. decent punch

Phly: congrats on that verse. cool wordplays and entertaining punches

fav:

i’ll smack ya head to the floor, n’ stomp the shit for five minutes
your face’ll give the decadent so big whole cultures could decline in it

Ya style’s gay as fuck, n’ women are out of reach geek
But he’s got that rock n’ roll sex life, Ted’s getting with a Nugent each week

i’ll drop the hex, it ain’t a threat that this guy’s posed
fuck the shit you’ve achieved Zen, most people do that with their eyes closed

hex: you're a bit inconsistent.. couple wording issues.. i know u can do better tho! few decent lines

fav:

My punches are somthin like a hurricane P, I always reign supreme,
Only way he'd be able to weather the Storm is playing VS the WNBA team.

over all - a bit one sided. phly came with a good verse.

v/phly

[Orc]

I'm known to beat down fags, so stepin to me wats this bitch thinkin?
In this battle I'm just gonna crack another like COM when hes binge drinkin.
While your reps sinkin, I'm the type to spit hot shit n leave Phly burnt to crisp,
So if he's ever able to rise from the ashes it’s a sign that he finally elevated a bit.
An you will confess that there is no stopping me when you catch a knee,
Phly's is gonna be Liston... breaks n bruises like he’s Sonny after fighting Ali.
My punches are somthin like a hurricane P, I always reign supreme,
Only way he'd be able to weather the Storm is playing VS the WNBA team.
Bitch I aint lying, you'll lose just as quickly as my punches devour your face,
There’s such a big gap between our skills NASA couldn't help you cover the space.


Vs.


I’ll make ya head burst, but your drop’s the one that’s read first
n’ votes’ll show me applaud it...like ‘props phly, for making up for Ted’s verse’
i’ll smack ya head to the floor, n’ stomp the shit for five minutes
your face’ll give the decadent so big whole cultures could decline in it
this dumb fuck’s confused if he thinks he’s getting beckoned back
Ted had a lot on his mind, n’ it cleared the auction house in seconds flat
i’ll drop the hex, it ain’t a threat that this guy’s posed
fuck the shit you’ve achieved Zen, most people do that with their eyes closed
n’ Ted trusts no-one, his mind’s full of doubt and scattered see
dude’s had his misgiving brain ever since he found out she did that to me
This suck-up needs a service, the bitch broke down so fast it’s frightening
Ted’s only roadworthy guys in the hope someone good might start to like him

really good battle. ted dropped dope enough for it to be BOTW in an unbiased mag. i liked a lot of your lines. phly dropped quality stuff too.. it was honestly close but phly's superior wording made the difference here. great stuff..

v/phly

[Kenny the G]

I'm known to beat down fags, so stepin to me wats this bitch thinkin?
In this battle I'm just gonna crack another like COM when hes binge drinkin.
Bitch I aint lying, you'll lose just as quickly as my punches devour your face,
There’s such a big gap between our skills NASA couldn't help you cover the space.

vs

i’ll smack ya head to the floor, n’ stomp the shit for five minutes
your face’ll give the decadent so big whole cultures could decline in it
this dumb fuck’s confused if he thinks he’s getting beckoned back
Ted had a lot on his mind, n’ it cleared the auction house in seconds flat
Ya style’s gay as fuck, n’ women are out of reach geek
But he’s got that rock n’ roll sex life, Ted’s getting with a Nugent each week
i’ll drop the hex, it ain’t a threat that this guy’s posed
fuck the shit you’ve achieved Zen, most people do that with their eyes closed
I’ll slit ya throat for rapping, no one wants to hear ya drops weekly
i’ll let ya speak to ya hearts content, since blood muffles words completely


hex came better than his usual imo. unfortuantly he was paired against phly, who tore it down. another solid show of wit and execution that we;ve all grown accustomed too. doesnt take anything away from ted imo. commendable effort hex.

v/phly

[Nick.]

My punches are somthin like a hurricane P, I always reign supreme,
Only way he'd be able to weather the Storm is playing VS the WNBA team.
Bitch I aint lying, you'll lose just as quickly as my punches devour your face,
There’s such a big gap between our skills NASA couldn't help you cover the space.

vs.

i’ll smack ya head to the floor, n’ stomp the shit for five minutes
your face’ll give the decadent so big whole cultures could decline in it
Ya style’s gay as fuck, n’ women are out of reach geek
But he’s got that rock n’ roll sex life, Ted’s getting with a Nugent each week
i’ll drop the hex, it ain’t a threat that this guy’s posed
fuck the shit you’ve achieved Zen, most people do that with their eyes closed
I’ll slit ya throat for rapping, no one wants to hear ya drops weekly
i’ll let ya speak to ya hearts content, since blood muffles words completely
n’ Ted trusts no-one, his mind’s full of doubt and scattered see
dude’s had his misgiving brain ever since he found out she did that to me

holy fuck phly.. you killed the shit this week dude. hex, that nasa line was raw, but you'd of had to of came with a verse fulla quotes to beat phly in this battle man.. no offense, phly just came dope as fuck.

vote - phly

[Jackie Moon]

In this victory chase I got em fallen quick, just yelling come on bitch get up,
Phly comin out on top? Nah he won’t even get to his knees like Fat Joe doin sit ups.
Cus he hasn't achieved nothing in the league, hasn't passed any real test,
sat on the throne as a ruler of text?
Nah, Phlys skills never measured up with the best.


vs.

i’ll drop the hex, it ain’t a threat that this guy’s posed
fuck the shit you’ve achieved Zen, most people do that with their eyes closed
I’ll slit ya throat for rapping, no one wants to hear ya drops weekly
i’ll let ya speak to ya hearts content, since blood muffles words completely
I’ll make ya head burst, but your drop’s the one that’s read first
n’ votes’ll show me applaud it...like ‘props phly, for making up for Ted’s verse’

V/phly pretty one-sided
[phly came really strong his verse was consistentall aroudn hen your verse was kinda strtetched which took away from your pounches being hard hittin and most of your bars i already read before came pretty played

[Mr W.Rite]

I'm known to beat down fags, so stepin to me wats this bitch thinkin?
In this battle I'm just gonna crack another like COM when hes binge drinkin.
not a bad opener, got a chuckle outta me on this one


While your reps sinkin, I'm the type to spit hot shit n leave Phly burnt to crisp,
So if he's ever able to rise from the ashes it’s a sign that he finally elevated a bit.
gotta work on the wording, coulda been much better, didnt flow that well

Cus he hasn't achieved nothing in the league, hasn't passed any real test,
sat on the throne as a ruler of text?
Nah, Phlys skills never measured up with the best.
i see a decent concept, but better wording would have dramatically helped this punch

An you will confess that there is no stopping me when you catch a knee,
Phly's is gonna be Liston... breaks n bruises like he’s Sonny after fighting Ali.
punchline was decent, concept was ok, wordin hurt u my friend

My punches are somthin like a hurricane P, I always reign supreme,
Only way he'd be able to weather the Storm is playing VS the WNBA team.
this one was forced, didnt like man

A hospitals the scene... these are your final seconds is what I'm implying,
I won’t have your death put on file but he'll be asking "Document that I'm dying"
after reading a few times, this one grew on me, wording wasnt that bad either, still coulda been better, but decent punch

Bitch I aint lying, you'll lose just as quickly as my punches devour your face,
There’s such a big gap between our skills NASA couldn't help you cover the space.
seemed forced, punch didnt really hit for me

In this victory chase I got em fallen quick, just yelling come on bitch get up,
Phly comin out on top? Nah he won’t even get to his knees like Fat Joe doin sit ups.
see where u were going, punch just wasnt that effective


honestly, you have pretty decent concepts, ure wording and flow is a bit off right now, a fresh concept is nothing without execution, work on that and you'll be ok




I’ll make ya head burst, but your drop’s the one that’s read first
n’ votes’ll show me applaud it...like ‘props phly, for making up for Ted’s verse’
ha ha. dope opener

i’ll smack ya head to the floor, n’ stomp the shit for five minutes
your face’ll give the decadent so big whole cultures could decline in it
lol, good punch man, wording was there, pretty dope

this dumb fuck’s confused if he thinks he’s getting beckoned back
Ted had a lot on his mind, n’ it cleared the auction house in seconds flat
honeslty the concept was decent, just the punch was average

Ya style’s gay as fuck, n’ women are out of reach geek
But he’s got that rock n’ roll sex life, Ted’s getting with a Nugent each week
coo punch, nothing great ..but still effective

i’ll drop the hex, it ain’t a threat that this guy’s posed
fuck the shit you’ve achieved Zen, most people do that with their eyes closed
seemed like a pretty simple punch but, was very effective for me. nice

I’ll slit ya throat for rapping, no one wants to hear ya drops weekly
i’ll let ya speak to ya hearts content, since blood muffles words completely
just ok, i guess

n’ Ted trusts no-one, his mind’s full of doubt and scattered see
dude’s had his misgiving brain ever since he found out she did that to me
ha ha this was coo, i read it a few time before it really hit me, nice

This suck-up needs a service, the bitch broke down so fast it’s frightening
Ted’s only roadworthy guys in the hope someone good might start to like him
decent closer, nice again

overall just a very consistent verse, some of the best lines of the week are in this verse. very impressive


v/ Phly



this was pretty one sided,Phly came out smokin and nver really had a chance of falling off, hex has some very good ideas but his wording hurt him in the end.
Props to both, good luck the rest of the season..

-W.Rite

[Token]

Phlymo wins (4-2)
Hexzen loses (4-5)