Contendors: $pitacular(8) vs. Feeble Minded(6)

[Vaskez]

Make sure you've read the rules as they will be enforced.

Checkin due Wed 23.59 EST (late/no checkin = -2 votes)
Verses due Fri 23.59 EST (lateness = -2 votes even if your opponent agrees the extension)

Line limit: 10 MIN, 20 MAX

Must vote on FIVE battles (we will check that they are proper votes: -2 votes per missing vote)

Voters: if this battle is season 9 classic worthy, nominate it in the correct thread in the office. Also keep an eye out for dope punches for the highlight reel, thanks.

all other rules linked above

[$pitacular]

20?

[Richard Parker]

Yeah 20 is fine

[$pitacular]

Feebs I'll be droppin 24 at the deadline

[$pitacular]

Just when I'm tired of all these wack kids, n' its got me being lazy
Well well, if it isn't the great Feeble.. then it's the one we been seeing lately
my powers blaze.. you suck I amaze we'll just have to see how it plays
I know you picture yourself winning, kids photoshop everything nowadays
fuck ya coward ways, I'm major. my punches hit a bitch goodnight
you're so minor, you had to get a fake ID just to get into this fight
we witnessed your slide, how bad will it be? I couldn't tell if I tried
If I could gage your wackness, I'd blast until I ran out of shells or it died
you been lucky so far. I'm erasing the fame that's been holdin you down
with the way I'm leaving you.. you better hope your last opponent's around
I'm ownin you now.. look Kyle you're no longer a hero with scriptures
n' ever since digital cameras, you appear as a giant zero in pictures
ya parents must be cousins.. so any good genes you had would be damaged
n' since you're already inbred, I might as well have me a pussy sandwich
used to be tight.. now you don't compare bitch. yo I'd never sweat you
Feebs is the past tense. like you were scared stiff before I ever met you
I got hoes fuckin obsessive.. you're not the pimp some have suggested
you said your girl was smokin, but I filter tits it wasn't nothin impressive
bustin ya chest in. it's well known my rhymes are sickly n' savage
you never struck me as dope, dog you barely nicked me on average
servin these scripts.. just give it up Kyle you ain't hurtin these kids
there's no question who's better... but there's a $pit that certainly is
I hit with violent hands. so tough there's no way you can try n' stand
honestly feebs.. your so tender you got Chrit lookin like iron man
Full throttle whippin.. stop textin fag.. yo it costs us all for livin
cuz your reigns been over so long the price of bottled water's risen


Good... night



Gave u an extra half hour. 26.

[Vaskez]

feebs -2 votes if Spit grants the extension

wtf @ all the no shows

[$pitacular]

Fucka no show taking point off I should be gettin 4 no matter what. No shows can deliberately limit your points if kids want

But it's whatever I'll take the DQ since feebs ain't communicated with me at all.

[Warming]

Just when I'm tired of all these wack kids, n' its got me being lazy
Well well, if it isn't the great Feeble.. then it's the one we been seeing lately
[iight]
my powers blaze.. you suck I amaze we'll just have to see how it plays
I know you picture yourself winning, kids photoshop everything nowadays
[iight]
fuck ya coward ways, I'm major. my punches hit a bitch goodnight
you're so minor, you had to get a fake ID just to get into this fight
[ha]
we witnessed your slide, how bad will it be? I couldn't tell if I tried
If I could gage your wackness, I'd blast until I ran out of shells or it died
[iight flip i suppose]
you been lucky so far. I'm erasing the fame that's been holdin you down
with the way I'm leaving you.. you better hope your last opponent's around
[ i feel like this has to be played on meta, still on point tho]
I'm ownin you now.. look Kyle you're no longer a hero with scriptures
n' ever since digital cameras, you appear as a giant zero in pictures
[meh, liked your other photo one better]
ya parents must be cousins.. so any good genes you had would be damaged
n' since you're already inbred, I might as well have me a pussy sandwich
[haven't seen this wp before, iight]
used to be tight.. now you don't compare bitch. yo I'd never sweat you
Feebs is the past tense. like you were scared stiff before I ever met you
[nah..]
I got hoes fuckin obsessive.. you're not the pimp some have suggested
you said your girl was smokin, but I filter tits it wasn't nothin impressive
[not bad, wp is kind of borderline]
bustin ya chest in. it's well known my rhymes are sickly n' savage
you never struck me as dope, dog you barely nicked me on average
[ok]
servin these scripts.. just give it up Kyle you ain't hurtin these kids
there's no question who's better... but there's a $pit that certainly is
[heh]
I hit with violent hands. so tough there's no way you can try n' stand
honestly feebs.. your so tender you got Chrit lookin like iron man
[maybe]
Full throttle whippin.. stop textin fag.. yo it costs us all for livin
cuz your reigns been over so long the price of bottled water's risen
[heh]

overall, pretty solid verse, too bad feeble didn't show

[FUNΞRΔL PR∅]

Just when I'm tired of all these wack kids, n' its got me being lazy
Well well, if it isn't the great Feeble.. then it's the one we been seeing lately
my powers blaze.. you suck I amaze we'll just have to see how it plays
I know you picture yourself winning, kids photoshop everything nowadays
fuck ya coward ways, I'm major. my punches hit a bitch goodnight
you're so minor, you had to get a fake ID just to get into this fight
we witnessed your slide, how bad will it be? I couldn't tell if I tried
If I could gage your wackness, I'd blast until I ran out of shells or it died
ya parents must be cousins.. so any good genes you had would be damaged
n' since you're already inbred, I might as well have me a pussy sandwich
used to be tight.. now you don't compare bitch. yo I'd never sweat you
Feebs is the past tense. like you were scared stiff before I ever met you
bustin ya chest in. it's well known my rhymes are sickly n' savage
you never struck me as dope, dog you barely nicked me on average
servin these scripts.. just give it up Kyle you ain't hurtin these kids
there's no question who's better... but there's a $pit that certainly is
I hit with violent hands. so tough there's no way you can try n' stand
honestly feebs.. your so tender you got Chrit lookin like iron man
^Dopeness..

Overall/-the filter line was forced.. an the big zero line was meh.. an the last opponent line was cool.. i wouldve quoted it,bt the rest was too dope an it overshadowd that one..Good shit $pit!
The closer was okay,wordplay was played... but the way u execyted was dope.. jus didnt make sense inna way... yah know.. rain an bottled water? nah..

[Vaskez]

Just when I'm tired of all these wack kids, n' its got me being lazy
Well well, if it isn't the great Feeble.. then it's the one we been seeing lately
^^haha nice
my powers blaze.. you suck I amaze we'll just have to see how it plays
I know you picture yourself winning, kids photoshop everything nowadays
^^coo
fuck ya coward ways, I'm major. my punches hit a bitch goodnight
you're so minor, you had to get a fake ID just to get into this fight
^^heh
we witnessed your slide, how bad will it be? I couldn't tell if I tried
If I could gage your wackness, I'd blast until I ran out of shells or it died
^^not too bad
you been lucky so far. I'm erasing the fame that's been holdin you down
with the way I'm leaving you.. you better hope your last opponent's around
^^aight
I'm ownin you now.. look Kyle you're no longer a hero with scriptures
n' ever since digital cameras, you appear as a giant zero in pictures
^^heh
ya parents must be cousins.. so any good genes you had would be damaged
n' since you're already inbred, I might as well have me a pussy sandwich
^^lmao
used to be tight.. now you don't compare bitch. yo I'd never sweat you
Feebs is the past tense. like you were scared stiff before I ever met you
^^kinda reachin but creative
I got hoes fuckin obsessive.. you're not the pimp some have suggested
you said your girl was smokin, but I filter tits it wasn't nothin impressive
^^heh not bad
bustin ya chest in. it's well known my rhymes are sickly n' savage
you never struck me as dope, dog you barely nicked me on average
^^pretty played man
servin these scripts.. just give it up Kyle you ain't hurtin these kids
there's no question who's better... but there's a $pit that certainly is
^^haha
I hit with violent hands. so tough there's no way you can try n' stand
honestly feebs.. your so tender you got Chrit lookin like iron man
^^yeah not bad, but ya know I had a tender punch on chrit this week
Full throttle whippin.. stop textin fag.. yo it costs us all for livin
cuz your reigns been over so long the price of bottled water's risen
^^hmm reign flip, just ok

damn nice solid verse, best this week out of the one's I've voted/given feedback on

any feedback on my verse'd be appreciated

[Vaskez]

Spit wins +3

feeble -3 and booted