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    The Fallback is on The Horizon.

    I'm just a civil civilian
    in a civilization that's crumbling.
    The foundation cracks as
    tyrants stumble and pout.
    1,2,3 and i'm out -
    ain't gonna be around
    when the giants begin to
    spew war from their mouth.
    Go on, attack me.
    Make my lonesome life worth
    L. I. V. I. N. G

    I'm a common thief and a
    no good, rotten scoundrel.
    I've caught many in my shadows
    and blatantly laughed as
    it grabbed and hung
    you on your dreams
    that you placed so highly
    on that ugly rusted pedastool.
    Fuck you -
    Go on, attack me.
    Make my lonesome life worth
    L. I. V. I. N. G

    Fabricate your own protection,
    america ain't going to save you.
    We're like a fly in a flytrap -
    glued to the television.
    That's our truths;
    learn to live man.
    I suppose 'live' isn't pertinent
    to america anymore.
    So go ahead, light your torches
    tear down the memorials
    and burn the sum bitches.
    Go on, attack me.
    Make my lonesome life worth

    L. I. V. I. N. G
    Legion of Kings.

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    Re: The Fallback is on The Horizon.

    I'll get me some links
    Legion of Kings.

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    Re: The Fallback is on The Horizon.

    Pretty cool read, a little boring in the sense that most of everything you write about in the poetic scriptures section is about civilization; politics; humanity; simplistic shit like that. But it was still a nice read. Wording was pretty cool, flowed very well through every line. Imagery had a few nice visuals. Emotion was alright, overall.. it was just something you seem to have done too many times before. Keep writing though.

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