Wk 2/ Da Punisher (0-1) vs. Design (0-1)

[Born To Kill]

Ok, Gentlemen, week 2 is here...

To remind...it goes like this...

Check in by Wednesday...or YOU LOSE! No exceptions...
At the time of check in drop the topic you wanna write about...
It can be about anything...this shit is about you, the person, you the writer...
What you have inside you that you wanna get out in written word.
Be it your shitty week, the story of you and your girl...
Your inner-most hatred, your ultimate adventure...
Whatever.
BUT MAKE SURE YOU LET YOUR TOPIC BE KNOWN AT TIME OF CHECK IN.
This is to reduce the chances of you waiting until the last minute...
Then posting up an old piece you wrote 3 years ago.
I REALLY hope you don't do shit like that...please write fresh, aight!

Maximum 36 lines...if you drop more, your opponent can request a DQ...
AND HE'LL GET IT! Please keep these verses fairly quick and easy to read.
That'll keep votes and interest going!

Due Friday, Midnight.

That's all, I guess...please tear this shit up!!!

Peace and good luck!!!
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[Da Punisher]

check............................................. ..................................................
But my topic is "Dead End"

[Da Punisher]

I want to change my topic....."Drugs Take Over"

[Nø1nê~]

I dont know if this is the proper title for my topic, but for now it will be Doesn't Matter.

[Da Punisher]

Drugs Take Over
Phase 1...Intro
I'm here in the US without a passport & got power of mass destruction
I don't have any repercussions & cook faster then any fast food production
I am heroin,cocaine, crack, ecstasy, & meth,known to kill men and women
I destroy homes and most families without having any real love for yo ken

Phase 2...Effect
I will make all people who dare to use me full of sin
I will beat any odds against me & get the evil win
I will rob the gold from a rich man & make him poor
I will turn on any foolish virgin and make a whore
Make a husband not care about his kids and wife
Send all greedy men to jail for the rest of their life
Make a school boy forget how to use his books
Make a famous beauty forget about her real looks

Phase 3...Addiction
The rush of me turn ur body into my best work out & playground
Just sounds of deep bleeding,a spirit that was lost but now found
To some i am joy or adventure to create zombies like MJ thriller
I put the gun in his hand and turn the heroes into rueful killer
I more precious than diamonds,pearls & any billions in ur world
I take you on a ride for ur eyes to die & make ur brain twirl
I'm stronger than whiskey, more deadly than any red wine
I stop time,kill memories of love & turn ur sadness to fine
So run off if you want to & to to hide, I wont even chase
I'm here when you cry & die, so ur kid could get a taste
I can make ur life a living dream of a miserable tale
Take my white stallion of speed to the gates of Hell

[Born To Kill]

Feedback for this gentleman, please!!!

[Born To Kill]

Da Punisher WINS, 1-1

Design LOSES, No Show, 0-2 SIGNS OUT!