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Last edited by Jackie Moon; January 5th, 2007 at 10:22 PM
me battlin u, for me its the greatest show on earth, Barnum & Bailey this shit.
half this website ain't feeling u n 3/4's of them are ur all aliases bitch.
i comeback its like B&B seeing u ringling brothers 2 win thats all u achieve
against this cat i can PlayOfful
cuz he PM like a Colt but i'll still run over him like a Kansas City chief
get it hope u do just versusin u is relaxation u got no D u suck
im not gunna be like other textcee
saying i didnt try i did i needed 2 describe ur textin with synonyms 2 butt
ur ass,buns,tush, ur skillz are browneye material u know thats true
cant even live up 2 words in ur name Be Ill something u wont ever do
fat fuck weighs 2,000 ibs.punches leavin red marks cuz im fuckin mean
tryin to Washing.ton ur redskin i thought u were a football team
for B&B i meant Barnum & Bailey was gunna put ^^ that but it wouldnt make sense.
Look at you, the man behind King Cobra; oh dear
Another PB hoe here; thats what seems to appear
Face it man, Pandoras Box is a dead creation of newbs
For example, they brought in Nightmare, JC and you
I might lose this battle, but I'm not a text head
Thinking of failure when a I hear your name being said
10 Lines is all I need to hit this kid cuz he's writing blind
Fighting bline throwing misses and getting struct from behind
Now to finish this, I'll leave you with my name and buisness card
Also leaving you with a lose and another permanent scar
me battlin u, for me its the greatest show on earth, Barnum & Bailey this shit.
half this website ain't feeling u n 3/4's of them are ur all aliases bitch.
didnt hit
i comeback its like B&B seeing u ringling brothers 2 win thats all u achieve
against this cat i can PlayOfful
cuz he PM like a Colt but i'll still run over him like a Kansas City chief
you got to into the football mood here. plus, chiefs and colts havent played yet, dumb punch.
get it hope u do just versusin u is relaxation u got no D u suck
im not gunna be like other textcee
saying i didnt try i did i needed 2 describe ur textin with synonyms 2 butt
stretched and retarded
ur ass,buns,tush, ur skillz are browneye material u know thats true
cant even live up 2 words in ur name Be Ill something u wont ever do
your second line was decent. but ass, buns, tush? that kinda ruined the whole thing
fat fuck weighs 2,000 ibs.punches leavin red marks cuz im fuckin mean
tryin to Washing.ton ur redskin i thought u were a football team
once again was a decent concept, just the flow and wording messed it up for you
Overall: 6/10
You made 100 typos and stretched your line. It's hard trying to flow with it when you can't understand it. You had some good concepts, but your set-ups were weak.
vs
Look at you, the man behind King Cobra; oh dear
Another PB hoe here; thats what seems to appear
i love the flow, punch wasn't that hard though
Face it man, Pandoras Box is a dead creation of newbs
For example, they brought in Nightmare, JC and you
ehhh decent
I might lose this battle, but I'm not a text head
Thinking of failure when a I hear your name being said
nooo
10 Lines is all I need to hit this kid cuz he's writing blind
Fighting bline throwing misses and getting struct from behind
stop worrying about making the lines rhyme well, and go for a harder punch
Now to finish this, I'll leave you with my name and buisness card
Also leaving you with a lose and another permanent scar
no
Overall: 6/10
I could tell your not a text battler. Your flow was awsome with your rhyme scheme but you went a little overboard. Just think of some more witty punches and concepts but you got potential to do good.
Nothing amazing in this battle, at least you both showed you knew what you were doing.
Street had the concepts, but belligerent was more concistent the whole time and Street your verse was hard to read and choppy. This made the punches seem useless and non-effective.
Very close but...
V/ Belligerent
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me battlin u, for me its the greatest show on earth, Barnum & Bailey this shit.
half this website ain't feeling u n 3/4's of them are ur all aliases bitch.
^This would've been a nice punch but your wording was off. So no.
i comeback its like B&B seeing u ringling brothers 2 win thats all u achieve
against this cat i can PlayOfful
cuz he PM like a Colt but i'll still run over him like a Kansas City chief
^Meh.
get it hope u do just versusin u is relaxation u got no D u suck
im not gunna be like other textcee
saying i didnt try i did i needed 2 describe ur textin with synonyms 2 butt
^Meh.
ur ass,buns,tush, ur skillz are browneye material u know thats true
cant even live up 2 words in ur name Be Ill something u wont ever do
^No.
fat fuck weighs 2,000 ibs.punches leavin red marks cuz im fuckin mean
tryin to Washing.ton ur redskin i thought u were a football team
^Meh.
vs.
Look at you, the man behind King Cobra; oh dear
Another PB hoe here; thats what seems to appear
^Meh.
Face it man, Pandoras Box is a dead creation of newbs
For example, they brought in Nightmare, JC and you
^Iight.
I might lose this battle, but I'm not a text head
Thinking of failure when a I hear your name being said
^No.
10 Lines is all I need to hit this kid cuz he's writing blind
Fighting bline throwing misses and getting struct from behind
^No.
Now to finish this, I'll leave you with my name and buisness card
Also leaving you with a lose and another permanent scar
^Meh.
Weak battle. No quoteables. Cobra, if you would've worded your opener right you would've won this. Lex takes it because he had one iight punch. Wasn't good but enough to win this battle.
\\//Belligerant
me battlin u, for me its the greatest show on earth, Barnum & Bailey this shit.
half this website ain't feeling u n 3/4's of them are ur all aliases bitch.
Ok opener...not a good punch!
i comeback its like B&B seeing u ringling brothers 2 win thats all u achieve
against this cat i can PlayOfful
cuz he PM like a Colt but i'll still run over him like a Kansas City chief
Yeah...NO.....This Has To Come From A Meaning....Showing They Haven't Played..NO
get it hope u do just versusin u is relaxation u got no D u suck
im not gunna be like other textcee
saying i didnt try i did i needed 2 describe ur textin with synonyms 2 butt
Wow.....This Is Just 1 Big Run on Line
ur ass,buns,tush, ur skillz are browneye material u know thats true
cant even live up 2 words in ur name Be Ill something u wont ever do
Punchin' At Bames Like That, Not Good...If You COuld Have Reworded The Whole Line, Maybe!
fat fuck weighs 2,000 ibs.punches leavin red marks cuz im fuckin mean
tryin to Washing.ton ur redskin i thought u were a football team
[/b]WTF??? Not Intelligent...Doesn't Make Sense![/b]
for B&B i meant Barnum & Bailey was gunna put ^^ that but it wouldnt make sense.
Never, Fucking Ever Explain Your Punches....If They're Witty Enough, People Will Get Them! That's A Big Way To Get A Loss Quickly
Overall.....2.5/10
Dude...Your Whole Verse Was One Giant Run On, Stretched Out Sentence!
vs.
Look at you, the man behind King Cobra; oh dear
Another PB hoe here; thats what seems to appear
Not A Good Punch, BUt Nice Rhyme Usage
Face it man, Pandoras Box is a dead creation of newbs
For example, they brought in Nightmare, JC and you
Ehhh, Not Really
I might lose this battle, but I'm not a text head
Thinking of failure when a I hear your name being said
[/b]Not Really A Punch[/b]
10 Lines is all I need to hit this kid cuz he's writing blind
Fighting bline throwing misses and getting struct from behind
Again, Not A Great Line But Good Rhyme Usage
Now to finish this, I'll leave you with my name and buisness card
Also leaving you with a lose and another permanent scar
[/b]Uhh, OK I Guess[/b]
Overall....3/10
I'd Have To Say Beligerent Edged This Out A Little Better!
So V= Belligerent
Last edited by Soule; January 6th, 2007 at 06:32 PM
omgz lolz i gotta get into LLL.Jr
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
Why so you can vote against me?
fat fuck weighs 2,000 ibs.punches leavin red marks cuz im fuckin mean
tryin to Washing.ton ur redskin i thought u were a football team
good
vs.
Now to finish this, I'll leave you with my name and buisness card
Also leaving you with a lose and another permanent scar
ok
Face it man, Pandoras Box is a dead creation of newbs
For example, they brought in Nightmare, JC and you
iight, pretty good
v/belli, more consistant
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Sweet..
me battlin u, for me its the greatest show on earth, Barnum & Bailey this shit.
half this website ain't feeling u n 3/4's of them are ur all aliases bitch.
-lolzz funny
i comeback its like B&B seeing u ringling brothers 2 win thats all u achieve
against this cat i can PlayOfful
cuz he PM like a Colt but i'll still run over him like a Kansas City chief
-nah
get it hope u do just versusin u is relaxation u got no D u suck
im not gunna be like other textcee
saying i didnt try i did i needed 2 describe ur textin with synonyms 2 butt
-some stretched shit
ur ass,buns,tush, ur skillz are browneye material u know thats true
cant even live up 2 words in ur name Be Ill something u wont ever do
-naw yo
fat fuck weighs 2,000 ibs.punches leavin red marks cuz im fuckin mean
tryin to Washing.ton ur redskin i thought u were a football team
-nopp forced
Look at you, the man behind King Cobra; oh dear
Another PB hoe here; thats what seems to appear
-weak punch
Face it man, Pandoras Box is a dead creation of newbs
For example, they brought in Nightmare, JC and you
-ok
I might lose this battle, but I'm not a text head
Thinking of failure when a I hear your name being said
-not really hard hittin'
10 Lines is all I need to hit this kid cuz he's writing blind
Fighting bline throwing misses and getting struct from behind
-nice rhymes but thats all
Now to finish this, I'll leave you with my name and buisness card
Also leaving you with a lose and another permanent scar
-weak yo. basically a statement
v/ bell. street just came wit some stretched shit, n sum of em didnt even make sense. bell didnt really have punches but still better than street. plus rhyme usage and flow was coo
Yes! Thankyou.
me battlin u, for me its the greatest show on earth, Barnum & Bailey this shit.
half this website ain't feeling u n 3/4's of them are ur all aliases bitch.
^^^.Weak opener...worded it wrong
i comeback its like B&B seeing u ringling brothers 2 win thats all u achieve
against this cat i can PlayOfful
cuz he PM like a Colt but i'll still run over him like a Kansas City chief
^^^no
get it hope u do just versusin u is relaxation u got no D u suck
im not gunna be like other textcee
saying i didnt try i did i needed 2 describe ur textin with synonyms 2 butt
^^^you stretched this an it didnt hit at all..you can shortin your bars to still get ya
point across
ur ass,buns,tush, ur skillz are browneye material u know thats true
cant even live up 2 words in ur name Be Ill something u wont ever do
^^^worded it wrong...this coulda been better
fat fuck weighs 2,000 ibs.punches leavin red marks cuz im fuckin mean
tryin to Washing.ton ur redskin i thought u were a football team
^^^weak wordplay your setups need work
vs.
Look at you, the man behind King Cobra; oh dear
Another PB hoe here; thats what seems to appear
^^^no decent use of multi's but thats it no punch
Face it man, Pandoras Box is a dead creation of newbs
For example, they brought in Nightmare, JC and you
^^^Coulda been a better personal
I might lose this battle, but I'm not a text head
Thinking of failure when a I hear your name being said
^^^no weak punch
10 Lines is all I need to hit this kid cuz he's writing blind
Fighting bline throwing misses and getting struct from behind
^^^lol but naw
Now to finish this, I'll leave you with my name and buisness card
Also leaving you with a lose and another permanent scar
^^^okay closer
V/bell just by a little bit...to me he had a bit more consistent verse with some decent lines but coulda been better if worded right..street you verse had no real punchs i was feeling...also ya wording needs alittle work too but overall it was a decent battle..
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