30 Lines...Due In 2 Days...BlindSpit....
Jov Lo
.Crucial Times.
30 Lines...Due In 2 Days...BlindSpit....
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Checkin...This Oughtta Be Good....G/L Holmez....
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Word.Same to you.
Check
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You're Comin Across As A Dreamer Bigger Than Jennifer Lopez's Ass
The Depth In The Crack Goes To Show How Much This Dope Head Has
I'm Giving This Dreamer A Reminder On The Results Of Those Slept On
Early Retirement....
...Like Feeble And $pit Cept They're Good...U've Never Had A Profession
Nothing Sinks In To Hit This Head So I'm Posting It On Your Forehead
U're A Stranger...An Utter Foreign Forfeit Fortunately Unimportant
Thats Why You Never Will Get Labled Unless Made By Urself In Your Sig
Funny How You Have A Picture Of Sumbody Else In That Shitty Portrait
He'll Say I Suck...But Realize All Of Your Wack Jokes Just Back-Fired
This Roller Has Been Rimming His Own Ass So Long He's A Flat Tire
U Can Probably Replace A Bulb But The Shade Still Covers Ur Brightness
Its Shit Like This, When I Realize Your Topicals Are As Bad As -Isis-
Switched Ur Name From Tha Joka, But Still Coming As A Huge Joke
A Bad Comedy Show Of Drew Carey Reading The Shit That You Wrote
I Always Liked Fans...Originally Posted by Jov Lo
Well Joka....Heh....Suck It You Ugly Mutha Fucka...
Fuck The Shit I Wrote Before....Part II To This Shit.....
Its The Chainsaw Massacre Leavin You Dead White(Right) Afterwards
Givin Ya A Beatin Like A Desperate Husband Till I've Mastered Her
Cuz I'm A Nightmare, Watchin U Drown Right Here From My High Chair
U've Long Been Ready To Die There, U Look Up To Me Not That I Care
Guy Thinks He's Dope Cuz Crews Want Him, N Now How Far U Gotten?
This Page Is His Grave....
...When Its Closed With Chains For Days N Your Shit Verse Stays Locked In
U're Weak With Those Fillers So I'm Eating Ur Innards For Me Dinner
Until I'm Seen As A Winner From This Seeping Shit Liver It's Delivered
I've Never Cared, Its A Pair When U're In 2 States Of Shit For Daycare
U've Been Retired In Battles Since Mar. 05 N Continue To Stay There
This Dawg's Head's Dangling, Anglin Rock Bottom Like A Fucken Manakin
I'll Shave This Head N Razor His Wrists, Make Eyes Slit Like A Damn Asian Kid
I Ain't Racist Bitch, But When U're Willing Me But Haven't Started Killin Me
I Have An Initiative To Act As A Guillotine To Make U Remember The Hostility
Whateva Ur Name Is, I'm Sterilizing You With More Shots Than An Aid Kit
I Might Be Cheeky With My Rhymes, But U're So Much Ass U Can't Save Shit
Fuck This Battle...I'm Outta Here...
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This Is A No Show. If I Could Please Get Feed I'd Appreciate It...
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No show? Bro I'm always offline. Specialtys of my 2000 post.
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Sure I've always wanted a challenge but the fuck is this?
Special Elevation?Hell it's Crucial I don't punch this kid
This battle has no Time
Since your calling for a no show
You taken easy wins? Thats a personal LO
Here buddy let me feed you since you've asked
Yuck what the fuck
Replies to what you dropped,ate,and threw up last
Hell I won't lie Crucial is dope,yeah this Time I admit it
StatQuo is the real Crucial & u just proved ur dimwitted
It'd be stupid for me to say you didnt go to high school
Cause you dropped out like ur concepts
& its not cool
NO feedin but ur writtens have no Flava & lack Love
How bout' you do Somethin,take some shit
& give it a shove
Word I'll go easy since I know your in a bad mental state
But to be honest I've never felt you
'S why when I drop it's a BTW
Let me glue together my old OMs cause this is old
& u comin out on top is the earasers story
Finally told
Carpotunnel is givin me a direct link to watch uve dropped
& just to be fair Ill even make my verse flip after it flops
Push it to the limit,the fuck were u thinkin 30 lines?
Must've kept a tally of your recent losses 30 times
Comin back from where it started? U mean not Slim Shady?
Guess not everything can be in Black then White
Or maybe ur colors just lazy
I put this on my daddys grave ull never come back
Old jokes,topics,guess I can say I love orange n ur ALL THAT
Let me stop now I can sit back n still be glad
U can strain ur brain,be in solitude,n remain had
I love God,jesus,and I revoke Satan as my savior
thats what I said
Crucial Time says"Satan is my father hell love me..
.....especially when im dead"
Hello goodbye aol said to the wackest child to type
I guess like ugly chicks to male models
Ur not our type
Meh drop. Figured he needs a win.
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what up
in case you dont know..
its Crucial
Crucial Times (where the fuck you been man?)
I've Never Cared, Its A Pair When U're In 2 States Of Shit For Daycare
U've Been Retired In Battles Since Mar. 05 N Continue To Stay There
Whateva Ur Name Is, I'm Sterilizing You With More Shots Than An Aid Kit
I Might Be Cheeky With My Rhymes, But U're So Much Ass U Can't Save Shit
The Joka
Hell I won't lie Crucial is dope,yeah this Time I admit it
StatQuo is the real Crucial & u just proved ur dimwitted
Hello goodbye aol said to the wackest child to type
I guess like ugly chicks to male models
Ur not our type
You guys have been around for a long time. Crucial times you havnt been around as long as joka but its been a minute. I dont know Times, you had a good flow in alot of your lines, nice rhyme scheme and shit, but you didnt come out swingin with any good punchlines. No fresh new concepts or anything to work with. Just a flow, thats all you really had goin for you. Come to think of it, I dont think I remember one single line youve written. Not even one this battle that I JUST READ. You been around to long to be this weak dude. honestly.
Joka, your lacking two crucial things in battling. Concepts and wording. You need to start off by working on wordplay. pick a word. any word. and make a punch out of it. Look for words with double meanings. Think of cliches, put a twist on them. youll get the hang of it. JUST KEEP TRYING. Find out what voters like in your verses and other verses and try to create somthing simular each time you write. & Dont praise another nigga. Youll appear to be weak.
I cant vote under this name but if i did id give it too crucial times.
this battle was weak though
especially for some 30 lines shit
The fuck? I didnt praise no one.You guys have been around for a long time. Crucial times you havnt been around as long as joka but its been a minute. I dont know Times, you had a good flow in alot of your lines, nice rhyme scheme and shit, but you didnt come out swingin with any good punchlines. No fresh new concepts or anything to work with. Just a flow, thats all you really had goin for you. Come to think of it, I dont think I remember one single line youve written. Not even one this battle that I JUST READ. You been around to long to be this weak dude. honestly.
Joka, your lacking two crucial things in battling. Concepts and wording. You need to start off by working on wordplay. pick a word. any word. and make a punch out of it. Look for words with double meanings. Think of cliches, put a twist on them. youll get the hang of it. JUST KEEP TRYING. Find out what voters like in your verses and other verses and try to create somthing simular each time you write. & Dont praise another nigga. Youll appear to be weak.
Now that sounds like dickriding. Your saying he's better cause he stays in text n mine sucked cause I dont? The hell.
Fuck did I praise?Cause I wrote that one bar. Idiot I don't praise you. Shows in my last few bars. WTF @ that. Cause I said he's dope. Dont get big headed that was just for flow. & Im strictly topical. Crucial T knew that when he dropped. Actually before we battled.
Ignored for now.
Last edited by I Incis; August 15th, 2006 at 09:12 PM
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your taking shit way too seriously
i was refering to the end of your verse
where you said
"Meh drop. Figured he needs a win."
that implies that you knew his verse was better, so you just posted to give him a win.
hence, praising him while making your verse look weak.
and i dont see how you can say dick riding. I obviously said Crucial Times was weak, said he had no good punches, and all he did was flow well. to be brutally honest, he sucks. i mean he had two good lines out of 30. thats wack! no dickriding, its just that his two good lines were better then your two good lines.
im being real with you homie.
Actually I hardly seen his verse. I didnt know he dropped 'till I seen he tried to dq me before I even signed on. That's what actually made me even say meh drop. Dq-in before due date is up. Uncalled for. Thats the last time I hand shit over.
Word & I miscontruded your words Pens.
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I Wasn't Going To Dq You. I Just Didn't Know If You Were Going To Drop. The Times Had Said It Had Been 2 Days Up. More Than Nething It Was Just A Warning To Drop When You Saw It. Nothing More. I'm Happy That You Dropped Though So We Could Get Good Feed. N Crucial Thanks For The Criticism. I'll Keep Working At It No Matter How Long It Takes. Good Battle Jov Lo N *Respect* To Ya Man...
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Word son. You know if you'd start trippin than I'd have to collect rent n kick u out.
Good Battle kid.
Respect
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I've Never Cared, Its A Pair When U're In 2 States Of Shit For Daycare
U've Been Retired In Battles Since Mar. 05 N Continue To Stay There
Whateva Ur Name Is, I'm Sterilizing You With More Shots Than An Aid Kit
I Might Be Cheeky With My Rhymes, But U're So Much Ass U Can't Save Shit
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Sure I've always wanted a challenge but the fuck is this?
Special Elevation?Hell it's Crucial I don't punch this kid
Push it to the limit,the fuck were u thinkin 30 lines?
Must've kept a tally of your recent losses 30 times
Comin back from where it started? U mean not Slim Shady?
Guess not everything can be in Black then White
Or maybe ur colors just lazy
Damn this was a long ass battle...a bit boring too if I do say so myself, and that small ass font crucial used didn't help at all. The punches in this battle were meh. Honestly I'd say that you two both need plenty work on the text scene, but with less bars per battle. Crucial you lacked in appeal, your punches were there but they didn't grab my attention, they were plain. Just not solid enough...they hit but they weren't strong. Jov on the other had decent punches, but they weren't so strong either. Both of you had played concepts, and it has to happen with 30 lines to drop, but to me it just seemed like Jov had more original concepts, which is what this battle to me really came down to. No hate to either battler, because you both did a good job with this.
v/Jov, for having fresher concepts.
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