supernat vs key.

[Supernat]

10 lines
Due Midnight
Blind spit
House rules

[Supernat]

this is my check.

[Key.]

Check.

[Key.]

I'ma lift you up just to slam you, cry, I might let it
I'll never drop hard with my punches..makin you light headed
And your crew VI picks on me too much, they need to relax
I mean they need to cut me some slack, then never take you back
I don't like the way dude starin @ me like I'll get raped, why?
Just `cuz...I never DID like the show queer eye for the straight guy
Verbal Intercourse is a team force. Skills? You'll forever got NONE
^^And you're the lowest there...but they did need SOMEONE to get that job done
My punches will FUCK UP his jaw, Then I'll choke him right
And I ain't a dentist, but it seems you've just never gotten overbites

^^There you go biter.

[Supernat]

recently you've lost all respect, its a fact peeps aint lovin em
i mean last time key was dope there was a Mr. infront of him
i've been most wanted lately, ur moneys not even lockin,g
n' fag you're only gettin the sheriff you calls the cops on me
nobody wants to hear u speak, Key aint helpfull when raped
i'll take a moment of silence while u'll just get a mouthfull of tape
its the same ol quotes..its true - ur wack n' dude i'm wreckless
you better watch your back cuz that jewely'll leave you neckless
I'm leavin this fuck all red we all thought you'd duck instead
but you can have this matchson.. lit on your fuckin head

[Lord of Pens]

I'ma lift you up just to slam you, cry, I might let it
I'll never drop hard with my punches..makin you light headed
ok.
And your crew VI picks on me too much, they need to relax
I mean they need to cut me some slack, then never take you back
lol.
I don't like the way dude starin @ me like I'll get raped, why?
Just `cuz...I never DID like the show queer eye for the straight guy
lol. good punch.
Verbal Intercourse is a team force. Skills? You'll forever got NONE
^^And you're the lowest there...but they did need SOMEONE to get that job done
lmao.
My punches will FUCK UP his jaw, Then I'll choke him right
And I ain't a dentist, but it seems you've just never gotten overbites
Nice.

vs.

recently you've lost all respect, its a fact peeps aint lovin em
i mean last time key was dope there was a Mr. infront of him
good.
i've been most wanted lately, ur moneys not even lockin,g
n' fag you're only gettin the sheriff you calls the cops on me
ok
nobody wants to hear u speak, Key aint helpfull when raped
i'll take a moment of silence while u'll just get a mouthfull of tape
meh
its the same ol quotes..its true - ur wack n' dude i'm wreckless
you better watch your back cuz that jewely'll leave you neckless
ok.good punch.
I'm leavin this fuck all red we all thought you'd duck instead
but you can have this matchson.. lit on your fuckin head
lol.

Basically,

And your crew VI picks on me too much, they need to relax
I mean they need to cut me some slack, then never take you back
I don't like the way dude starin @ me like I'll get raped, why?
Just `cuz...I never DID like the show queer eye for the straight guy
Verbal Intercourse is a team force. Skills? You'll forever got NONE
^^And you're the lowest there...but they did need SOMEONE to get that job done
My punches will FUCK UP his jaw, Then I'll choke him right
And I ain't a dentist, but it seems you've just never gotten overbites

vs.

recently you've lost all respect, its a fact peeps aint lovin em
i mean last time key was dope there was a Mr. infront of him
its the same ol quotes..its true - ur wack n' dude i'm wreckless
you better watch your back cuz that jewely'll leave you neckless
I'm leavin this fuck all red we all thought you'd duck instead
but you can have this matchson.. lit on your fuckin head

\\//Key.

Please hit the battle up in my sig with a honest vote. Both of you.

[Tony Brown]

My punches will FUCK UP his jaw, Then I'll choke him right
And I ain't a dentist, but it seems you've just never gotten overbites
best punch of the battle but idk if it's true and it's your only quotable


Key you got way too much filler mayne

vs.

recently you've lost all respect, its a fact peeps aint lovin em
i mean last time key was dope there was a Mr. infront of him
not bad, a bit played tho imo
i've been most wanted lately, ur moneys not even lockin,g
n' fag you're only gettin the sheriff you calls the cops on me
its the same ol quotes..its true - ur wack n' dude i'm wreckless
you better watch your back cuz that jewely'll leave you neckless
pretty good but these coulda been dope w/ better wording

v/ supernat

[8]

I'ma lift you up just to slam you, cry, I might let it
I'll never drop hard with my punches..makin you light headed
um concept coulda been good, but worded wack so lost impact
And your crew VI picks on me too much, they need to relax
I mean they need to cut me some slack, then never take you back
again, good concept - order of words let you down
I don't like the way dude starin @ me like I'll get raped, why?
Just `cuz...I never DID like the show queer eye for the straight guy
nah, not feelin.
Verbal Intercourse is a team force. Skills? You'll forever got NONE
^^And you're the lowest there...but they did need SOMEONE to get that job done
meh, ok
My punches will FUCK UP his jaw, Then I'll choke him right
And I ain't a dentist, but it seems you've just never gotten overbites
pretty good.

vs

recently you've lost all respect, its a fact peeps aint lovin em
i mean last time key was dope there was a Mr. infront of him
lol, pretty good. probly not the most creative but it works and i aint heard it before.
i've been most wanted lately, ur moneys not even lockin,g
n' fag you're only gettin the sheriff you calls the cops on me
lol, aight wordplay...not the HARDEST punch though. still cool.
nobody wants to hear u speak, Key aint helpfull when raped
i'll take a moment of silence while u'll just get a mouthfull of tape
lol, ok
its the same ol quotes..its true - ur wack n' dude i'm wreckless
you better watch your back cuz that jewely'll leave you neckless
prettty dope, still coulda been better
I'm leavin this fuck all red we all thought you'd duck instead
but you can have this matchson.. lit on your fuckin head
lol, aight pretty decent

overall key was inconsistant , bad wording etc was his let down. supernat came pretty consistant with some nice punches.

i think supernat took this easy, but i probably wont poll because someone might cry.

peace

[Cartman]

I'ma lift you up just to slam you, cry, I might let it
I'll never drop hard with my punches..makin you light headed
meh, i dont like it
And your crew VI picks on me too much, they need to relax
I mean they need to cut me some slack, then never take you back
nice but worded terrible
I don't like the way dude starin @ me like I'll get raped, why?
Just `cuz...I never DID like the show queer eye for the straight guy
no
Verbal Intercourse is a team force. Skills? You'll forever got NONE
^^And you're the lowest there...but they did need SOMEONE to get that job done
meh
My punches will FUCK UP his jaw, Then I'll choke him right
And I ain't a dentist, but it seems you've just never gotten overbites
nice concept

Key I seen Way Better fromyou son, this drop was not good, a few quotables but meh


recently you've lost all respect, its a fact peeps aint lovin em
i mean last time key was dope there was a Mr. infront of him
dope
i've been most wanted lately, ur moneys not even lockin,g
n' fag you're only gettin the sheriff you calls the cops on me
meh
nobody wants to hear u speak, Key aint helpfull when raped
i'll take a moment of silence while u'll just get a mouthfull of tape
o.k
its the same ol quotes..its true - ur wack n' dude i'm wreckless
you better watch your back cuz that jewely'll leave you neckless
o.k concept
I'm leavin this fuck all red we all thought you'd duck instead
but you can have this matchson.. lit on your fuckin head
o.k

v/supernat for more consistency

[Supernat]

uppin for more votes.

[Key.]

Umm crew "feedback" should not include a listed winner because that sways the other voters. But its cool though..this is my first upp I do beleive..

[Mic.]

overall this was a good battle, both of you had great flow and great structure....rhymes were from both of you were good too but supernat had beter.
both had nice hard hittin punches but supernat came slightly more consistant and that makes my decision for who i had a better verse

so overall supernat had a slight bette verse..good battle

v/super

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=296976
hit that up honestly

[Key.]

Upp #2..

[Supernat]

upp this like fuck.

[Supernat]

uppin this, get this closed.