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Pierre Smirnoff
JOOKZ
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Jookz, u a gay nigga n u pulln a ho is straight fiction
cuz the only time you'll "Drop a Dime" is when u "Snitchin"...
so stop ya bitchin n take that P.M.S. out ya flow
cuz when u call the "Police" is the only time, ginst me, you'll see a "5-0"...
cuz im not your average rapper, i dont lose much
but your Wins are "Sluggish" J..<that means they "Dont move much"...
damn im too much, Pierre straight money wit the flow like cash
cuz my verse so tight it'll make U & THE VOTERS *Right-Click* n Save As...
so Jump off my sack J n stop all them gay n fag-ish actions
but i know u cant cuz suckin dicks gives u GREAT SATISFACTIONS...
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ok First..PIERRE im SMEARIN ya brains OFF my shirt..
you comming at me hard..but step soft when u get to my turf..
like Alieans I have rhyming abilities but not from this earth..
2nd off..ima have you crying so get ur tear wiper AKA bandana..
talent to much for his rap stamina..my styles more flashy then his cam-era
that wasnt a very good verse i hope this battle was not top betted
it sounded like Pastor Troy(sig) so youll never get the credit
my words rub together n my brain i guess thats y im hot headed
heres something u may not wanna hear..im the cat u dont wanna get near...
cuz ill demolish you and leave your body in the lake down by the PIEERE..
not the best but well juss look at his verse for ya self..lol j/k..
good luck
lets get them votes in come on uppin for a vote..whos gonna win if you dont vote??
ill RTF if you vote in this battle
Both Was Pretty Good...But Piere Had More Multis And Punchs... V/Pierre
uumm how bout your vote dont count..so BBBBBBRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTT
Can You Vote On My Battle Verse MattewBanks....
yeah but before you START VOTING you need 100 posts at least juss so ull know
i thought jookz came slightly better. he had slightly better punches.
i thought Pierre had too much self glory.
\/ JOOKZ
Jooks-your flow was tight. your rhyme skeme straight. ok punches, i think you cudda thought it out better. use more creativity feel me?. iight verse. it hit, there were ok personals. no hard or 'stand out'.it sounded like Pastor Troy(sig) so youll never get the credit
my words rub together n my brain i guess thats y im hot headed
overall-7.4/10
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damn im too much, Pierre straight money wit the flow like cash
cuz my verse so tight it'll make U & THE VOTERS *Right-Click* n Save As...
pierre- pretty ok flow. your rhyme skeme a bit edgy. you had to work around the pronounciation. ok though. you had better thought clearly. but it was sorta played. nun to great. your verse was sloppy in some aspects. elevate in harder personals
overall- 6.9/10
v/jooks
please RTF w/ honest vote in a link in my sig. thanx
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no excuses for this battle, whack on both sides, i'd vote, but neither had any metaphor's nor wordplay, no personals, WHATSOEVER!!!
fuck it... tie in my opinion, it seemed like you guys were just tryin to see if the other guy sucked more...
oh there was personals dummy u juss to dumb to understand
uppin for votes we need to close this
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