Celebritie Killer

[SoloSleepy]

I Injected A!DZ In Eazy and slashed Aaliahs Jet-line
Overdosed Marilyn and Caused the Crash for Left-eye
Took Kirk Kobanes Sex-life when I Grabbed My Tec-nine
Blew his dome back, and Framed His X-wife
Itz All justifide because killin is a part-of-rap
I punched Elvis in his chest to make him have a heart-attack
I burry Celebs alive just to watch the casket-rock
Rolled up on the side of a BMW and Blasted-pac!!!!!
If I wanna Be famous then I have to Murder these foolz ahead-of-me
And If I dont want them to stand in my way, then i must kill these Celebrities
I bleached Michales Skin, Well hez not dead but Praticily
Im guna kill Johnny Depp Inside the Willy wonka Chocolate Factory
Scream 'Muuurder' to 'Ja Rule' as I grab the Gat-slow
And u know I got 'tonz' of 'Punz' To use on 'Fat-joe'
Grab Nas and Strangle him with 'One-Mic'
Kill Eminem, His Daughter Haily and his dumb-wife
Open up 'Dr.' Dre'z stomach with one-knife cuz im a Surgeon
Kill Christina Agulaira because as you know, im known to kill virgins(haha yeah right)
Dont take this as a joke, belive me, Im not Bluffing
cuz 'im a bad boy 4 life' wich is why I killed 'puffy'
Im an Infamous Criminal and im Strait up Raw
I tryed to murder 50 but i missed and just shot that bitch in the jaw
These Rapperz aint doin music, now these stupid Fagetz Act
Busted in the Games House and shot that wack cat in the back
Ill stick Ice-cube right-through his stomach and eye-too
Why ??Cuz I like-to, knock out young jeezy with my right-shoe
One bullit through the head cuz Solo Does it the Easy-way
I dont know if hez a Celb, But people like him so Im also guna kill DZK
BPC Dont give a fuck and I dont care if you belive-us
Watch when I kill Kanye West so he can 'Walk' With 'Jesus'
I kill 'Big' 'Nitorious' Celebirites on a daily basist
And if you wanna be famous, Ill help you out by giving you a perminent Face-lift

BPC Reppin

[master theisis]

this was ight but what made it good to read was the topic matter

best quote of the drop
I burry Celebs alive just to watch the casket-rock
Rolled up on the side of a BMW and Blasted-pac!!!!!

i liked the originality on this one b cuz u didnt hold back even pac...even tho it seemed kinda like just a line to get blind attention, i still liked it

best verbal
I bleached Michales Skin, Well hez not dead but Praticily
Im guna kill Johnny Depp Inside the Willy wonka Chocolate Factory
Scream 'Muuurder' to 'Ja Rule' as I grab the Gat-slow
And u know I got 'tonz' of 'Punz' To use on 'Fat-joe'

this shit made me laugh a lil...only thing i woulda changed was the first two lines and switch em around to make the michael jab come after the johnny depp part

best display or lyricism
Took Kirk Kobanes Sex-life when I Grabbed My Tec-nine
Blew his dome back, and Framed His X-wife

thought that this was tight because it actually took place...and it was worded in a way that made it sound a lil mo edgy

structure- 5 out of 10
flow- 7 out of 10
verbal- 8 out of 10
lyricism- 6 out of 10
overall- 6.5 out of 10


i know it sounds bad but im a harsh critic

[killamami1]

yo i liked even though it did talk about my gurl aaliyah in tha very 1st line....but made it so interesting iz tha wordplay u used. my favorite line waz:

I burry Celebs alive just to watch the casket-rock
Rolled up on the side of a BMW and Blasted-pac!!!!!

i liked it kuz it wasnt wat u woulda expected any1 ta say....not about pac.....but all in all i give diz OM bout a 8.5 kuz i waz feelin tha flow and wordplay

[efgeesus]

this had the potential to be a crazyily good drop on a very good topic idea

but you missed the mark by some way

the flow was really good, kept me reading

started off good and seemed like you ran out of people to kill and ways to kill them
the highlighting worldplay with quote marks is annoying too..we're not stupid, anyone with any knowledge of writing/rap would get what you mean

you have good potential man, just keep dropping

wish i'd thought of the idea!!

fin