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Visual Chemist
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check check homie this is my check in ya ya its on
"It always happens, all the niggaz that change the world die, they dont get to die like regular people, they die violently"
Tupac
shea its what ever i got all time to reword and shit lets make this a good battle check
good luck both of yall lets go ppl
lets go let the best man win
hey visual chemist i hear your a topical writer
i also hear from your crew that you a fuckin biter
but even that wont help you against the great rabbit emcee
youd have a better shot of the nazis starting world war three
these we own you niggas calling out unstoppable threat
when im done with you and your crew all youll be is a silhouette
man you gonna regret ever callin us out with that roster of yours
you gonna get hurt like the veterans of foriegn wars
you should have let emancipated or constipated or whatever battle me
you shold feel lucky youll never have a chance to get hepatitis b *
dont you feel lucky that you gotta face someone for my crew
you wont win just go join up with a boy band like blink 182
with them you might actually learn something about music
or maybe everyone will find out that your a muzhik **
* = noun: an acute (sometimes fatal) form of viral hepatitis caused by a DNA virus that tends to persist in the blood serum and is transmitted by sexual contact
** = noun: a Russian peasant (especially prior to 1917)
"It always happens, all the niggaz that change the world die, they dont get to die like regular people, they die violently"
Tupac
nice nice now u drop it go
fuck this dude you rap like ya occupation cuz it sounds like shit*
i could give ya a noob as"target practice" and you still bound to hit
your a noob and ya names bitten and eight mile can prove this
you minds well rewrite you whole verse.................................
..............................................cuz ya spitten em's is useless**
ill treat this herb like a animal so stuff your mouth with carrots***
tell me who wrote your verse ...............................................
..........................im not a bank and i still wouldnt give you credit
look at him shivering and say you confident i dont think ya was ready yet
you use rhyme zone for vocab and try to claim you are a heavy vet****
we own you easily and thats a meaning.......................................
................................................ cuz unstoppable wasnt a threat
this crew battle is over and i beat you in 6 bars .........................
..........................................so let the average of ya record set
*his occupation was shit
**bitten verse
***dicks in his mouth dick riders
****uses it for voacbulary/big word thinking he could win off that
nice good job homie but actually i just saw a rabbit run across my yard thats how i got my name
"It always happens, all the niggaz that change the world die, they dont get to die like regular people, they die violently"
Tupac
nice battle u all were just kidding right kool l8ter
lmao its a battle its cool LMAO he seen a rabbit in front of his yard aight its a cerw battle we just trying to gt rep
v. VIsual Chmist, came much harder, the othr guy had crappy rhymese scheme, no flow, and a lotta satements..Visual Chemst was ok at times.. this was pretty one sided. both need elevation and more hard hitting punches.
v. V.C.
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