"i speak to a chosen few/who oppose the view/" Benefit quote

[JustInsane]

im kneeling down at the tabernacle/
trying to pray but my hands are shackled/
prying away ready to snap through/
carry the cross on my shoulder,
not just a tattoo/
but to match the 2 on my chains
and make me taboo/
2 theives and jesus/
3 crosses broken into 3 peaces (note how i spelled peaces)
i went to school but no teacers teach this/
that bothered me/
lets learn how to escape poverty/
or what knowledge
and common logic could have gotten me/
or how the ill become doctors commodities/
they should have taught me more of socretes philosiphies/
their ideas are such hypocresy/
using parental advisorys/
to hide the truth from the youth/
the truth from the future/
cause if the youth
knew the truth of their future, theyd shoot ya/
they knowif the truth was seen/
theyd be in the middle of a mother fuckin mutiny/
but no were in the middle of a war
theyre using me stupidly/
give me a gun so i can die/
for abunch of fucking liars/
theives and criminals/
on tv speaking subliminal/
people who in a second would shoot me/
you call it america land of oppritunity/
but it all seems doomed to me/
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i am with 1 mind records you guy should check out the web site(www.soundclick.com/1mindproductions) check out pics and shit. my newest song is called"if these walls could talk" everybody will deeply relate to this song one way or another. let me know what u think. Peace.

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[tjesus]

man u rhyme well ,u have cool content and good text sence
and i sign up to be down with your message..
preach it truth seeker.........peace.

[gem n eye/*DUO*]

I like this....Reinvention would like it too....I like the message it carries...maybe could've pieced your bars together a little closer using commas or dashes so they wouldnt be so short, but other than that- good drop. I like it....

hit me up on my latest for some feedback....Id appreciate it

[Syn.tax]

that was increadable
honestly
flow was great
content was superb
nice drop

[CrazyCarl]

This was a good drop. Some lines were stretched, couple places where you could edit a little. I liked the vocab and rhyming, which were both nice. Certain lines had a lot of emotion, keep it up.

[WhiteNoise]

nice drop bro...........good structure.........u rhymed...as well as used good vocab......this was a good piece...ill look for some more of ur stuff......keep spittin....