i rhyme in a rage like im of demonic posession/
murderin wack emcees is my guilty obsession/
a duel to the death at your own discrection/
24 hours,1 million rhymes wit 0 intercessions/
enter the chamber pretty as a tulip/
spit 1 verse boggled brains splittin two lips/
the center of envy lyrics expressed without hesitation/
a tad bit hostile i deliver wit temptation/
said to be similar to mother nature i strike fear by devestation/
this is my passion my love my sexual sensation
You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
this is another example of why these type of OM's should be seperated from the other pieces...
They never leave links, an wtf if it gets closed? its only a freestyle anyway, they'll just do another one in two days time an if that gets closed its all 'wtf? why y'all hatin on my pieces?'
You should have a choice to where you drop, so it gives it a bit more meaning instead of retarded battle spits of abt 5 bars
This was wack........mad elevation is need......stay up
well im new to this shit and i just dropped something to see how this thing works,still not too sure but ill figure it out.
Too short. There was no topic really which you need.
Standards are high on this site so you gotta come good almost every time. Keep droppin and you'll elevate, but I have seen worse than this
LM The Life
& Times
...The Rhymes
this piece was poor, it was too short the flow was poor, it was really no topic or story 2 it, i just didnt like it.
but keep writing and you'll improve.
hit this up.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167404
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