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Thread: you kno....."Effectz Of Death"

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    you kno....."Effectz Of Death"

    heat spreadz out from within tha point of contact, no contractz wit Heaven or Hell just strugglin 4 dear life when i bust back/
    left unstrapped, my enemiez experience tha wrath from my gat, if u aint finna die niggah u best lay back/
    now, organz malfuncture, blood spew out of intravenous sectionz, six hollowz iz where tha bulletz left they puncture/
    now i feel tha weight lift off my legz as my body collapses towardz tha concrete, my enemiez soul departed from lungz ruptured/
    eyez rolled back, nah fucc that, fight tha overwhelming fog of death, as it creepz across my soul'z depth/
    no fuccin light at tha end of no tunnel, just blurred visions of my surroundingz before my spirit from tha carcass left/
    blood stained tha pavement, few vehiclez stop only 2 find they belated, in helpin 2 tote tha bodiez 2 E.R./
    morgue specialistz called in 2 help encase tha bodiez in wrapz, doctorz pronounce 2 dead bodiez from a fatal fall/
    fuccin assholez, never know what tha fuccin tha sayin, only intellectual termz 2 obtain that cash/
    my eyez stay closed in tha coffin, memory deceased, but knowledge of tha murdererz that ran up on me off guard wore ski maskz//


    Yo....HNR......Ya'll kno we got a crew forum?!?!?!?!?!?

    Out....

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    dope azz rhyme. i liked to flow, rhythm and everyting. you could work on structure a little bit, but overall i think it was a good piece
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    Ight...Coo....

    Uppin........

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    Oh my.

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    -able......"Oh My" what?


    link 1....
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=164863

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    That sucked.

    All the "z"'s. Use the fucking "s". It's fucking annoying to read for anyone who is past a sixth grade education. Well, so is this rhyme all together. Your bars are incredibly long, horribly long, infact.

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    ight then lil man..........respect ur eldors..........

    uppin......

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    I'm your elder, you fucknut.

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    not by the way u actin..................Son.......................

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    Lmfao. "Son"? Hahaha. That was, um, overly expected.

    By the way I'm acting, it's obvious I'm you're elder, and by that verse, it's obvious you suck.

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    and you can suck on my balls u've had a name for a total of lets say a week and u've got 144 post...fuhkin internet geek.....i read ur profile 45 post per day.......goddamn....stop drinkin tha coffee and go to sleep

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    An Internet Geek that has continually proved that you suck. And that this thread sucks. And that Open Mic of yours sucks. Consensus says: You suck.

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