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    Fucked Up Shit (must read)

    shes drippin in sweat n cryin tears of pain
    shes broken in more ways you could ever name
    wearin the dress her father got her up in maine
    she doesnt see the beauty in it no more cuzza the huge blood stain
    she was pure before this not puttin up witht he bull shit
    she carried mase with her n she knew how to use it
    but she froze n couldnt do it when she saw her friend get hit wit that bullet
    n a man wit his finger on the trigger n she knew he would pull it
    he forced her down on the ground with her face in the pavement
    to go home after this she just couldnt face it
    cuz her moms out fuckin n her pops always wasted
    her legs are bruised up n her face is cut in 8 different places
    shes waitin, n shakin hopin hell be done real soon
    keeps her eyes shut when they're open she only stares at the moon
    its true, this girls beaten, bloody, n bruised
    but it dont compare to the pain of her inside wounds
    he grabs her n throws her behind a dumpster
    she feels dead all alone n like nobody wants her
    thinkin hes gone now she gets up to run
    turns the corner n theres that some man with that gun
    knowin hes out lookin for his next female victim
    she thinks quick cuz she wont let him do it to another one
    she slowly walks backwards n lays on the ground
    starts coughin n screamin tryin to be real loud
    knowin the guy would come back to keep her quiet
    she starts kickin and bangin the ground makin all kinds of riot
    here he comes now with his gun aimed right at her head
    in 30 seconds or less she knows one of them will be dead
    shut the fuck up now bitch were the words he said
    pulled her up by her hair all around there was red
    she was prayin to god to forgive her if she took this mans life
    but she knew she was only doin what she knew was right
    he bent her head back and put the barrell in her mouth
    she tried quickly to get courage n get over her self doubt
    cuz this is the moment that makes all the difference
    she starts swingin left n right hopin for more hits than misses
    when she opens her eyes shes standin there wit a gun
    wit a man layin dead now thinkin shes the bad one
    she put the gun to head knowin thats the only way to forget it
    maybe she woulda held on a little longer if she knew she was 10 minutes pregnant


    Holler at yer Girl
    Last edited by ItsNuFfin; September 8th, 2004 at 09:41 PM

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    I like it very good

    this shit, is similar to my life

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    uppin this piece Holler at yer Girl n tell me watchu think

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    gimme some replies to this shit quit sleepin on me

    Holler at yer Girl

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    returnin da favor cuz u gave feed on my spit

    i wuz feelin it most of da way thru, kinda basic tho, da flow wuz str8

    got kinda bored like 2/3 da way thru

    still a pretty nice drop

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    uppin this shit real quick Holler at yer Girl wit some replies

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    yo that was fuckin sik kid check out my post wit da multis but yo i felt dat dawg tite!!

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    are you ppl fuckin blind im a fukin girl

    Holler at yer Girl ... key word GIRL!!!

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    Coo Shit...
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    you go GIRL nice!

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    thanx uppin this shit for more replies till i post a new thread

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    Yo ya shit was off the knockers. The concept was ILL , I caught a lil flow that was ILL , the way u ended that shit was Sick this piece was hott.

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    Really graphic, but in a realistic way; very easy to relate to without knowing firsthand the incidents...nice drop

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