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WhatThatLookLike..?!
Sounds aight...
Com vs. WRite
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Eclipse vs. Daz
Feeble vs. Savir
Last edited by Born To Kill; July 30th, 2004 at 01:33 PM
I'ma get this over with...
LLL's falling apart - get an exterminater up in here
Cuz ya punches were fresh 'round the Y2K bug scare
Born's face is like play-doe, so Ways stay breakin'..
..The mold and mean while leaving ya Clay Aiken
Born's killin' on the job - all gangsta, gangsta as usual
Thug'd out, no one walks in his block.. I mean cubicle
Get in shape - odds aren't too good for this cat's clout
Gotta 50% chance at throwin' a punch or ya back out
I stomp clocks bitch - the reason B don't bother mine
Don't care how old you are, I'm still crushin' father time
And Born, expunge all thoughts of you being legendary
Cuz you only drop dope.. when I'm too heavy to carry
Ur appearance affends me, don't know who I should kill
BTK?!.. or those fucking retarded kids at Good Will
So fuck ya writtens.. Born dosen't know how to rap
You can't come off the top.. like Bazaar's shower cap
G/L
man..
Last edited by Wise Ways; July 27th, 2004 at 11:58 PM Reason: spelling bitch
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
I handed off to Wise 2 weeks ago, now he hands me the relay...
And since I bruised and dented his ego, consider this instant replay.
I always bunch his panties, Wise can't catch no zen...
Cuz this bitch is a bigger dissapointment...
...........................Than the earnings of Catwoman.
I mean, Best Front Lines, Elite, and even 1-2...
There's Award votes logged for me...
........................But I noticed none for you!
Ya leave a bad taste, you ain't seasoned despite ya dressing, guy...
Cuz ya blander than white bread, white rice, and ironically black tie.
It's boring battlin him, I'm like the Olympics meetin the Special...
I mean, I've carried this bitch so much...
..................I'm surprised we haven't gone over the threshold.
But fuck it, he can stay my ho, I'll just rack wins...
And if I pay for the operation, he'll prolly let me rack him!
Ya always owned, even by Hence, S'why ya ain't been dumped...
See, we're trying to better RB, by sponsoring it's biggest chump.
And BTW, I did ask my girl, and she did know ya location...
Said you really filled her up, at the full service gas station.
Vote-BTK
Punches hit way more harder and contained a lot more creativity and/or wit. The man even dissed his wife kind of in the last line, but still ended up hitting Wise effectively. Wise once again used played age concepts that didn't hit too hard. I was feeling the first four lines, but then you slowly fell off and it got weaker and weaker and weaker to the point where you used a Bizarre line.
BTK I'm feeling the Catwoman line/threshold/gas station/rack him.
That pretty much did it for me. Decent battle.
omg, born plz stop using the
lineeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
.................................................. .punchline!
that shit is as old as you.
Wise Ways
LLL's falling apart - get an exterminater up in here
Cuz ya punches were fresh 'round the Y2K bug scare
meh, didn't hit too hard. decent opener
Born's face is like play-doe, so Ways stay breakin'..
..The mold and mean while leaving ya Clay Aiken
i dono i thought this was dope as hell
Born's killin' on the job - all gangsta, gangsta as usual
Thug'd out, no one walks in his block.. I mean cubicle
pretty nice
Get in shape - odds aren't too good for this cat's clout
Gotta 50% chance at throwin' a punch or ya back out
hah .. kinda funny, not bad
I stomp clocks bitch - the reason B don't bother mine
Don't care how old you are, I'm still crushin' father time
nope, not really
And Born, expunge all thoughts of you being legendary
Cuz you only drop dope.. when I'm too heavy to carry
noooo, so played
Ur appearance affends me, don't know who I should kill
BTK?!.. or those fucking retarded kids at Good Will
didn't like this either
So fuck ya writtens.. Born dosen't know how to rap
You can't come off the top.. like Bazaar's shower cap
concepts been played forever, this was okay
when i read your first 6 lines i'm like damn this kids the only motherfucker in this league that knows whats up. then i read the rest which completely fell off. first 6 lnes were dope the last whatever were not so dope ... cool flow a couple multis, couple tight punches a couple not tight punches. inconsistant verse ... but it was solid
Born To Kill
I handed off to Wise 2 weeks ago, now he hands me the relay...
And since I bruised and dented his ego, consider this instant replay.
didn't like it ... something was missing from it
I always bunch his panties, Wise can't catch no zen...
Cuz this bitch is a bigger dissapointment...
...........................Than the earnings of Catwoman.
bad rhyme, okay concept .. okay overall
I mean, Best Front Lines, Elite, and even 1-2...
There's Award votes logged for me...
........................But I noticed none for you!
'kay? wowzers, not a punch
Ya leave a bad taste, you ain't seasoned despite ya dressing, guy...
Cuz ya blander than white bread, white rice, and ironically black tie.
really didn't like any of this
It's boring battlin him, I'm like the Olympics meetin the Special...
I mean, I've carried this bitch so much...
..................I'm surprised we haven't gone over the threshold.
bad rhyme but this was okay
But fuck it, he can stay my ho, I'll just rack wins...
And if I pay for the operation, he'll prolly let me rack him!
aright
Ya always owned, even by Hence, S'why ya ain't been dumped...
See, we're trying to better RB, by sponsoring it's biggest chump.
word, getting better
And BTW, I did ask my girl, and she did know ya location...
Said you really filled her up, at the full service gas station.
haha, cool closer
well first off i hate that 3 line superdot style, but i wont count it against ya. besides that the beginning/middle sucked balls & the end was cool. also an inconsistant verse from what i saw, bad flow. original concepts but uh, i didn't like them, i dono.
so my vote goes to wise ways for his first 6 lines that completely blew away btk's last four. WW had better flow not as original of concepts but did his a lot wittier & they just hit harder.
votez - dub dub
well i have to disagree with NC..
you had some good points about the battle
but it think Born took this with pure comedy and wit..
Wise dropped a nice verse, but it was kinds blah in some areas..
wasnt feelin the Clay Aiken line, the setup was decent but the punch
seemed forced to me..
i did like the backout punch, that was dope
Mean while i see Born tried a new structure
which coulda worked out, but it didnt help nor hurt your verse in
my opinion...
i think he hit hard from beginning to end here...
i thought the opener was decent, the only line wasnt really feelin
was the Elite/1-2 line seemed more like filler to me
the rest was cool .
the threshold line was my favorite..
all in all i'd say you took this in a pretty close match...
v/omarion, J-bug, lil fiz and the other dude - B2k
ok... now cuz his structures old his verse cant be good? StopOriginally Posted by Frame
fuckin hatin, jesus christ. Now you're sayin his structure is played.
Maybe the use of the word PLAYED, and AS OLD AS is becomin
played. Hate, hate, hate tsk tsk tsk...
n/e ways
BTK... is somethin different to me. The guy has whack ass concepts
sometimes... but then sometimes he comes as fresh & original as
I've seen anybody in a long time. With pretty good wording.
Ya leave a bad taste, you ain't seasoned despite ya dressing, guy...
Cuz ya blander than white bread, white rice, and ironically black tie.
Nice.
& I like this following punch becuz of the punch in both lines & the
connection between the two.
I handed off to Wise 2 weeks ago, now he hands me the relay...
And since I bruised and dented his ego, consider this instant replay.
the whole I beat him b4 metaphor was a thing of beauty. Then
with the punchline mixed in I think this was one of the better lines
in a while. Maybe there's only few that appreciates metas anymore
v/ BTK
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always with the consistancy.... Born again comes with fresh concepts and new punches.
Wise I have to say one of your punches was dope -
Get in shape - odds aren't too good for this cat's clout
Gotta 50% chance at throwin' a punch or ya back out
I laughed hard when I read that one... but the rest of your verse was wack as fuck. Retarded kids, father time, bizaar.... c'mon now.
vote - Born
Born was fresh. No doubt.
and so was wise ways in some way shape or form..
but born was hella wittier..
and wise ways clay aiken shit was hella ..
both had nice flow...
but because of the wittier freshness..
im gonna say..
V/BTK
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
v/ WW ...
The clay aiken line was dope, though it could have been worded a bit different... and like NC said, Wise just had a couple more nice lines, and the best line of the battle imo.
Last Word
I must last... word
Wise Ways' Verse: 39/80
Notes:
You started off strong....but towards the end you just really fell off.....you had at least two good quotable hits in your verse....
Born To Kill's Verse: 40/80
Notes:
You had your ups and downs all throughout your verse...but your closing was nice...and there were a few other lines that were good...and you stayed mostly consistent....
Wow, BTK got this by 1 point....close ass battle in my opinion....
Vote - Born To Kill...
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