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  1. July 20th, 2004, 12:15 PM #1
    Mistral
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    Fat Chicks!!!

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=137936
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=138151


    Fat Chicks Fat Chicks…
    What Ya Gonna Do?!…
    What Ya Gonna Do…
    When They Come For You!?
    Fat Chicks Fat Chicks…

    Fat and round, bellys smack the ground, asses plump with lard…
    Sound rumbles as the ground crumbles as she thumping hard…
    While Rolls of fat, Patrol for snacks to ease the clashing waves…
    Of loose skin, she’s choosin to eat more…just stashing weight…
    Crumbs all round, as she becomes a cow, with no milk though!...
    Her tits are dry, shit why try…fuck her?! WTF!?...HELL NO…
    I’ll need a map to navigate…all around the hills of fleshy fat…
    I rather fucking masturbate with a over used bloody messy patch…
    Bless me fast…Save my soul…cause she craves more rolls…
    Shes enslaved to toll…more food faster than debating polls…
    It’s a first rate, earthquake that bursts weight on the richter scale…
    Hanging out with her? I don’t concur, Imma ditch her, bail!...
    She has smelly belly…of jelly, well she…better work it off…
    Im not touching that, I’ll smirk and cough while I jerk it soft…
    You really want some of this? Then stop your bitchen! Beg!...
    Fuck this, Im leaving! So I just toss the whore chicken legs..

    Fat Chicks Fat Chicks…
    What Ya Gonna Do!?…
    What Ya Gonna Do…
    When They Come For You?!…
    Fat Chicks Fat Chicks…



    lol, just got bored and wrote this quick...just wanted to drop something so here it is lol.
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  2. July 20th, 2004, 12:28 PM #2
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    Pretty good, dude...

    Funny as fuck in some parts.
    What wasn't, flowed well enough so that it didn't bother me.
    I liked the "Cops" hook as well.
    Ya coulda added something else that woulda been funny...
    And yes, so what, I speak from experience...
    I'm ashamed not.

    Yo, I hate her weight, wish for reduction at the well...
    But I continue to date, cuz the bitch is grateful as hell.

    Funny shit...good read, man.

    If ya want something in a similar light, read my...

    "What Leprosy Means to Me" on the front page.

    Thanks
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  3. July 20th, 2004, 12:37 PM #3
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    Hey credz, this was too funny, but like kill said you could have elaberated a bit. Made it somewhat longer and indepth. I know it's not that type of drop, but I just thing off all things that could have went in here. Thanks for the laughs, you and Kill really hit a funny bone with me today, thanks, I needed that. Nice flow in the read, scheme was solid and strucutre was solid, not too messy at all, oh yeah that cops shit was classic...
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  4. July 20th, 2004, 03:48 PM #4
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    this shit wa hilariuos hook was funny!!!!!!
    return the favor vote on my battles!!!!!!!
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=137849
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  5. July 20th, 2004, 04:00 PM #5
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    lol, very simple piece and hilarious... i plan to refer some of my friends to this...haha
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  6. July 20th, 2004, 05:13 PM #6
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    thats was cool
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  7. July 20th, 2004, 05:58 PM #7
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    lol, i just fucked a fat girl a couple of days ago.
    ROFLMAO, Im serious.
    anyway, this was funny as fuck, but it could have been SOOO much funnier.
    still a good read.
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  8. July 21st, 2004, 02:15 AM #8
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    ^ LOL was it any good!?

    Thanks for the feed guys, Appreciate it, Yeah I probably could have made some parts more funny and added funny parts into it, I dunno i kinda rushed it i guess lol.
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  9. July 21st, 2004, 02:19 AM #9
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    funny shit man turned out good i loverd the chorus that was funny as fuck so was the Verse that was funny...any way the flow was good and shit hahahahahahhaha FAT CHICKS HAHAHHA ok im done.....pZ
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  10. July 21st, 2004, 04:04 AM #10
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    Quote Originally Posted by Credz
    ^ LOL was it any good!?

    Thanks for the feed guys, Appreciate it, Yeah I probably could have made some parts more funny and added funny parts into it, I dunno i kinda rushed it i guess lol.
    more cushion for the pushin`.
    Lol, she wasnt "fat" fat, she was just solid.
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  11. July 21st, 2004, 06:14 AM #11
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    i take my hat of to you and knight you 'Sir Credz, Ruler Of The Fat Disses.'

    that was funny and uplifting, gave me a well needed laugh, and i don't know if your still in C.V, but i tried out again, if thats alright, just thought i'd let you know.
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  12. July 21st, 2004, 12:32 PM #12
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    lol word!..Solid is all good Sam!

    And Thanks For The Feed Guys, Appreciate It, Drop Links And I'll Return The Favor.

    Check CV FanTa.
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    Credz just to add, I think you should keep working on this piece and not view it as finished. I wouldn't say make the rhyme scheme more elevated cause it'd take away from the humor of it, but definately make it longer and use more metaphors. I'd love to see an extended version of this.
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  14. July 21st, 2004, 01:39 PM #14
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    well theres one thing ive found out about havin sex wit big bitches, they can give head good as a mother fucker, but back on point this piece was tight, it was funny, aiight multis, decent structure, good content and it stayed on point,main thing was it was funny.keep droppin.~1~


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  15. July 21st, 2004, 01:53 PM #15
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    LoL.. funny ish Credz.. I hate fat bitches.. they`re just too big.. it`s like fucking a whale fresh from the preservation or wherever the lard comes from. anyway - structure was good.. flow, nice.. funny in some areas..

    You really want some of this? Then stop your bitchen! Beg!...
    Fuck this, Im leaving! So I just toss the whore chicken legs..

    lmao - fat girls love them some chicken.

    Nice and funny work. Hit up `No Change`.. Payce.
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