Spring

[shiznit]

For all those who miss the sun...and of course just for the heck of it. It's been awhile since i dropped a poem but here you go.

Signs of the rainbow appears
after sprinklers of grace poured
to the sacred ground

Sounds like birds singing and
getting ready to embrace
the dew of time

Crystal roads molded reflect
the beauty that touches
all sides of the world

Trees are waiting for the breeze
to release their trapped roots
preparing them for rebirth

Snow is getting thinner on
the surface of the earth
melting it away

Skating rinks turn into streams,
rivers, and ocean
shores defrost

Welcoming the warmth of the light
forming rays of pathways
to spring

Mainly saying goodbye to the
dark clouds that were
smothering the sun.

[Civilized Rebel]

This was actually quite a lovely peice, I really mean that. I mean, the images it produced and the warmth it makes, it's good shit. All about the sun rising and putting all the bad shit behind you. At least, that's how I interpredid it. If in reality this is some sort of twisted peice of a caricturer than, bleh.

~Shalom~

[Prince Escobar]

^Agreed, its an eloquent piece that shimmers with organic beauty. Deep representation of letting the past remain where it is, well written, 1luv.

[Kali_Hypnotiza]

Dam i liked that poem a lot... good job!