WK 7: Dominate. Vs King Dee Bee - King Dee Bee Wins - Open For Feedback

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@Dominate
@King Dee Bee

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@Dominate
@King Dee Bee

Bars due tonight Gents

Dom 'ur fucked' when I 'expose the strap' I got today bitch.
I'll Drive by, you'll get 'hit from the whip' like it's a dominatrix

This was decent. Simple jab. But the execution is pretty choice. Kudos there.

Thanks brotha...I appreciate the feedback man.

Common np on Dom, put it together alright.