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LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 4
10-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST
verses due FRIDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out @Sharp Nine @...Celph Taut
hey, 10 cool? holiday and whatnot
10 is fine.
Why you double dipping in bubbles, pimping? you have no dignity there?
He at Alvin Karpis house with a notebook, creaking, like a fidgety chair
You did that interview with Sinatra, you’d Shank for a position to share...
in his blueberry’s, you’d “Marry, Kill, AND Screw” the fruit to grip on his Pears!
How you running a league thinking you got cunning? You must be wild, young-in
Your style? nothing! I Pierre through it like it’s light — who’s this “Chael Sonning”?
your name probably Kyle, fronting, you catching feelings? why would I rap with you, clown?
With the lack of a crown, I tell you step, child — your real Daddy’s around
This guy’s a scrub, minus the doctor utensils or the Johnson initials
you launching a missile? I’ll rock it, your fizzle a retiree NASA official!
just deleted my verse lmaoooo give me sec and i'll rewrite it
i barely interact w/ you n i cant take any more kid
ironically living a celphless life has been incredibly rewarding
u couldnt get awards w/out help. its known that ur a shitty fool
those accomps took some Shady moves that make the Eagles run game look pitiful
u cant handle the fact u suck. its clear u just keep fibbin, cuz
u aint just livin in a House of Lies... 1 more n Don Cheadle's movin in w/ ya
no one showed you how to rap. thats why u get razed, son
every bar's a miss Taut. its clear u didnt get a decent education
ur crews a buncha wannabes. that e-thug shits deplorable
yall throw up more fake signs than the interpreter at mandela's memorial
Celph
Why you double dipping in bubbles, pimping? you have no dignity there?
He at Alvin Karpis house with a notebook, creaking, like a fidgety chair
lol
You did that interview with Sinatra, you’d Shank for a position to share...
in his blueberry’s, you’d “Marry, Kill, AND Screw” the fruit to grip on his Pears!
I seen the added humor and wordplay here but I felt the finisher could've been displayed better the wording was off
How you running a league thinking you got cunning? You must be wild, young-in
Your style? nothing! I Pierre through it like it’s light — who’s this “Chael Sonning”?
this was nice wordplay here good concept too with the metaphorical comparison
your name probably Kyle, fronting, you catching feelings? why would I rap with you, clown?
With the lack of a crown, I tell you step, child — your real Daddy’s around
ok concept seen the wordplay reference before
This guy’s a scrub, minus the doctor utensils or the Johnson initials
you launching a missile? I’ll rock it, your fizzle a retiree NASA official!
again concept was there man its just the wording display I can see u still display the text battling into audio format
Sharp
barely interact w/ you n i cant take any more kid
ironically living a celphless life has been incredibly rewarding
this didn't come off as a punch to me the wording was more displayed as a statement
u couldnt get awards w/out help. its known that ur a shitty fool
those accomps took some Shady moves that make the Eagles run game look pitiful
wording could've been displayed better on finisher
u cant handle the fact u suck. its clear u just keep fibbin, cuz
u aint just livin in a House of Lies... 1 more n Don Cheadle's movin in w/ ya
ok lol nice concept good wordplay
no one showed you how to rap. thats why u get razed, son
every bar's a miss Taut. its clear u didnt get a decent education
good nameplay flip
ur crews a buncha wannabes. that e-thug shits deplorable
yall throw up more fake signs than the interpreter at mandela's memorial
lol
Close battle here both opponents had there wording issues here and also some ok hits. Celph I see how he still displays his punches in audio format sometimes by how its read according to syllable count. His opener was pretty cool added humor. The Chael Sonning bar was pretty dope creative ass wordplay on his part. Sharp started off very shaky then picked it up his last 3 bars. House Of lies bar had added humor good concept. the Miss Taut nameplay was cool which nameplay flips are overused on him but this was displayed nicely. closer was a nice metaphorical comparison. Also I would give Celph the step child bar but it basic wordplay that has been done and how it was displayed could see getting off in an audio battle. I felt Sharp picked it back up from a shaky start like I said and was slightly more consistent. Good battle from both though.
V/Sharp Nine
Opener
Vs
House of lies, closer
V/sharp, this was a cool lil battle, celph had some good concepts an but
Execution on them were nt hittin tbh sharp had a more consistent verse
house of lies was nice. Props yahll
Why you double dipping in bubbles, pimping? you have no dignity there?
He at Alvin Karpis house with a notebook, creaking, like a fidgety chair
stament here .5/3
You did that interview with Sinatra, you’d Shank for a position to share...
in his blueberry’s, you’d “Marry, Kill, AND Screw” the fruit to grip on his Pears!
.5/3 wasnt feelin it...shank sinatra?
How you running a league thinking you got cunning? You must be wild, young-in
Your style? nothing! I Pierre through it like it’s light — who’s this “Chael Sonning”?
cool line here 1/3
your name probably Kyle, fronting, you catching feelings? why would I rap with you, clown?
With the lack of a crown, I tell you step, child — your real Daddy’s around
stament here aganin .5/3
This guy’s a scrub, minus the doctor utensils or the Johnson initials
you launching a missile? I’ll rock it, your fizzle a retiree NASA official!
ehh 1.5/3
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4/16
not bad but work on it a bit more. i wasnt feelin it much personally tbh.
i barely interact w/ you n i cant take any more kid
ironically living a celphless life has been incredibly rewarding
solid opener 2/3
u couldnt get awards w/out help. its known that ur a shitty fool
those accomps took some Shady moves that make the Eagles run game look pitiful
nice jab 1.5/3
u cant handle the fact u suck. its clear u just keep fibbin, cuz
u aint just livin in a House of Lies... 1 more n Don Cheadle's movin in w/ ya
1/3 ok
no one showed you how to rap. thats why u get razed, son
every bar's a miss Taut. its clear u didnt get a decent education
2/3 clever
ur crews a buncha wannabes. that e-thug shits deplorable
yall throw up more fake signs than the interpreter at mandela's memorial
i seen this concept some where people but its dpe 1.5/3
sharp line
8/15
V/Sharp
Opener
Vs.
House of lies, taut
Meh battle celph had some coo ideas, concepts but did word them right which really hurt em opener was coo, sharp had house of lies lls n I like how u did the taut wordplay sharp got this
V/ sharp9
How you running a league thinking you got cunning? You must be wild, young-in
Your style? nothing! I Pierre through it like it’s light — who’s this “Chael Sonning”?
Vs
i barely interact w/ you n i cant take any more kid
ironically living a celphless life has been incredibly rewarding
no one showed you how to rap. thats why u get razed, son
every bar's a miss Taut. its clear u didnt get a decent education
ur crews a buncha wannabes. that e-thug shits deplorable
yall throw up more fake signs than the interpreter at mandela's memorial
Well, sharp nine got this pretty easily. Decent name flips and the closer all hit hard. Celphs punches lacked real impact and sting, quite an average drop which was quite surprising to be honest. No hate .
V.sharp
How you running a league thinking you got cunning? You must be wild, young-in
Your style? nothing! I Pierre through it like it’s light — who’s this “Chael Sonning”?
Vs
i barely interact w/ you n i cant take any more kid
ironically living a celphless life has been incredibly rewarding
no one showed you how to rap. thats why u get razed, son
every bar's a miss Taut. its clear u didnt get a decent education
ur crews a buncha wannabes. that e-thug shits deplorable
yall throw up more fake signs than the interpreter at mandela's memorial
Well, sharp nine got this pretty easily. Decent name flips and the closer all hit hard. Celphs punches lacked real impact and sting, quite an average drop which was quite surprising to be honest. No hate .
V.sharp