WK5: Blue Bayou Vs Dominate - Blue Wins

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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

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@Blue Bayou
@Dominate

@Blue Bayou @Dominate

mighttt be 1 writer out there sayin' Dominate is hot & fresh..
Benign or ten members'll vote Blue cuz they know you're a cancer & not a threat

Aiyyo!!

You don’t talk the talk or walk the walk! You only sound sore, son!
When it comes to rep I gotta doubt yours, hun!!
Think you ‘Harm On Nikkas’???? NO!!! You can’t hurt anyone with your ‘Mouth Or Guns’!!! // (Kayooooo!!!!)

I can already tell this is botw, interesting concepts imo
damn fellas..

har monicas liked the mouth tie in
benign tumor/can sir

I'm coming back to this one, this one for the culture

Blue had benign/cancer & not a threat - nice - inspired by the "spectator 9" bar? It's certainly reminiscent but still it's own thing. This is close so got to be critical - it felt like the set up & punch were slightly off rhythm with one another but it could be my incorrect interpretation of your intended delivery.

Dominate's set up referred to Blue as both "son" and "hun" which is a lazy way of rhyming & has incest/parent of a trans child vibes, but was otherwise ok. The harmonica/mouth or gun wordplay is really creative & I'd have given you the W if it was a natural thing to say. By that I mean you don't say, "I'm going to harm on this individual", you cause harm to them or simply harm them. Great idea though, would deffo go off in an actual battle. Wouldn't be mad or surprised if you got this.

Vote Blue

Vote Blue

Vote Blue... just a better punch... Dom was just wordy and ineffective ...

Both were jokes lol. Blue was worded/executed better


V/Blue

lol this is bonkers.. read this couple days ago and wanted to re-read to make sure.. I got blue here, matter of style, dom was a bit corny but i appreciate his style.

v/ wp

Honestly I like both bars here. I think Blue executed cleaner, but Dom had the more creative concept. I gotta edge it to Blue.

Blue wins