FL Contender series: Ryno Vs King Dee Bee - ( Ryno wins via KO )

Rules:
10 lines min
16 lines max
unless agreed otherwise by opponents
due wednesday

@Ryno @King Dee Bee

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Ur an emotional bitch catchin the 5th, lil pussy I fight for sport
Homie if I strike a chord w/ u, it’s gonna be the one that takes you off life support
Murder for hire? Shit I’ll break his legs easily cuz I’ll strike till I’m tired
Ironically these blows I’m dealing to ‘bees knees’ could be ‘highly admired’
He ain’t lifting the piece capeesh? Hell all of his goons’ll crack if it sings
Only time he’s running w/ multiple clicks, is performing w/ his tap dancing team
All those lines so booty, homie u ain’t ain’t hardcore, truly
Bro those ‘off the wall’ flips tragically fail quicker than a parkour newbie
As for women he’s not in the scope, its a comedy when he’s smashin a hoe
Plus chicks laugh at Deez nuts, they’ve become somewhat of a National joke

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@Stranger I can’t make any edits, can you take one of those “ain’t “ out the parkour line. Thanks

He been waiting on my verse yea I'm not gont Die/
It's not Peanut butter,Jelly, or Sandwich meat that I drop on Rye/
And punk I'll pop yo eye, you took the worse takes/
We'd say you fell off, but you'd have to be good in the first place/
I'll get magazines to shoot arms & shoulders/
He get magazines too, it's the ones bought at Barns & Nobel/
I'ma harm em solo, and kill this dead flow bitch/
He gont be face down on concrete like a heads coin flip/
What kinda guy names himself Ryno I'll smack this kids mouth/
His horn in the middle is ineffective like a steering Wheel that got ripped out/

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Originally Posted by Ryno

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Ur an emotional bitch catchin the 5th, lil pussy I fight for sport
Homie if I strike a chord w/ u, it’s gonna be the one that takes you off life support
Decent light jab.
Murder for hire? Shit I’ll break his legs easily cuz I’ll strike till I’m tired
Ironically these blows I’m dealing to ‘bees knees’ could be ‘highly admired’
I fucks with this.
He ain’t lifting the piece capeesh? Hell all of his goons’ll crack if it sings
Only time he’s running w/ multiple clicks, is performing w/ his tap dancing team
Wasnt feeling this one.
All those lines so booty, homie u ain’t ain’t hardcore, truly
Bro those ‘off the wall’ flips tragically fail quicker than a parkour newbie
Light jab.
As for women he’s not in the scope, its a comedy when he’s smashin a hoe
Plus chicks laugh at Deez nuts, they’ve become somewhat of a National joke
Decent closer. Funny.

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@Stranger I can’t make any edits, can you take one of those “ain’t “ out the parkour line. Thanks

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Originally Posted by King Dee Bee

He been waiting on my verse yea I'm not gont Die/
It's not Peanut butter,Jelly, or Sandwich meat that I drop on Rye/
Light jab.
And punk I'll pop yo eye, you took the worse takes/
We'd say you fell off, but you'd have to be good in the first place/
Better, but still a light jab.
I'll get magazines to shoot arms & shoulders/
He get magazines too, it's the ones bought at Barns & Nobel/
I laughed, so there's that.
I'ma harm em solo, and kill this dead flow bitch/
He gont be face down on concrete like a heads coin flip/
This one whiffed for me. Face down would be a coin flip resulting in tails.
What kinda guy names himself Ryno I'll smack this kids mouth/
His horn in the middle is ineffective like a steering Wheel that got ripped out/
I felt like the concept had dope potential. Sloppy execution lessens the sting though.

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I got Ryno edging this. He only had one real miss, and edged all but the 3rd bar for me.

Vote - Ryno

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rhyno

Ur an emotional bitch catchin the 5th, lil pussy I fight for sport
Homie if I strike a chord w/ u, it’s gonna be the one that takes you off life support
shit this was a bar right here, feeling the wordplay.

Murder for hire? Shit I’ll break his legs easily cuz I’ll strike till I’m tired
Ironically these blows I’m dealing to ‘bees knees’ could be ‘highly admired’
I was expecting a carol baskin reference, fail.b

He ain’t lifting the piece capeesh? Hell all of his goons’ll crack if it sings
Only time he’s running w/ multiple clicks, is performing w/ his tap dancing team
I like multiple clicks/tap dancing team.

All those lines so booty, homie u ain’t ain’t hardcore, truly
Bro those ‘off the wall’ flips tragically fail quicker than a parkour newbie
I'm not feeling this, seen a lot of parkour bars.

As for women he’s not in the scope, its a comedy when he’s smashin a hoe
Plus chicks laugh at Deez nuts, they’ve become somewhat of a National joke
hahha nice name play there.

- You had a couple of good bars, that opening bar was a haymaker, a few head scratchers too.

king dee bee

He been waiting on my verse yea I'm not gont Die/
It's not Peanut butter,Jelly, or Sandwich meat that I drop on Rye/
[b]this was dumb here, sandwich meet and rhy

And punk I'll pop yo eye, you took the worse takes/
We'd say you fell off, but you'd have to be good in the first place/
this has been done a million times, think outside of the box.

I'll get magazines to shoot arms & shoulders/
He get magazines too, it's the ones bought at Barns & Nobel/
this is also played, you have to be creative man.

I'ma harm em solo, and kill this dead flow bitch/
He gont be face down on concrete like a heads coin flip/
like the head coin flip, the rest of this bar was a flow.

What kinda guy names himself Ryno I'll smack this kids mouth/
His horn in the middle is ineffective like a steering Wheel that got ripped out/
this bar ain't really saying nothing, because who names their self king dee bee LOL

- I think your verse was dissapointing for the most part, a lot of your stuff is played, you will have a tough time winning until you get more creative my dude.

MVGT: RYNO

@Zunto can you vote on this fam?

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Ur an emotional bitch catchin the 5th, lil pussy I fight for sport
Homie if I strike a chord w/ u, it’s gonna be the one that takes you off life support
alright
Murder for hire? Shit I’ll break his legs easily cuz I’ll strike till I’m tired
Ironically these blows I’m dealing to ‘bees knees’ could be ‘highly admired’
what? Lmao don’t tell me bees knees is wordplay for “business”
He ain’t lifting the piece capeesh? Hell all of his goons’ll crack if it sings
Only time he’s running w/ multiple clicks, is performing w/ his tap dancing team
ok not bad
All those lines so booty, homie u ain’t ain’t hardcore, truly
Bro those ‘off the wall’ flips tragically fail quicker than a parkour newbie
off the wall concepts are pretty old, decent flip at best
As for women he’s not in the scope, its a comedy when he’s smashin a hoe
Plus chicks laugh at Deez nuts, they’ve become somewhat of a National joke
lol this made me laugh, cool closer



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He been waiting on my verse yea I'm not gont Die/
It's not Peanut butter,Jelly, or Sandwich meat that I drop on Rye/
I beg your pardon?
And punk I'll pop yo eye, you took the worse takes/
We'd say you fell off, but you'd have to be good in the first place/
pretty ancient concept here man, can’t really give any credit to it
I'll get magazines to shoot arms & shoulders/
He get magazines too, it's the ones bought at Barns & Nobel/
lmao made me laugh but nah man not good
I'ma harm em solo, and kill this dead flow bitch/
He gont be face down on concrete like a heads coin flip/
I mean I guess this is ok
What kinda guy names himself Ryno I'll smack this kids mouth/
His horn in the middle is ineffective like a steering Wheel that got ripped out/
nah


This battle was pretty one sided, Ryno had a few cool lines and I think KDB dropped pretty weak here. He’s been doing good in the 1-2 punch league so I’m not sure what happened here.


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Ryno wins