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cherry pie
I am a cherry pie, in the morn.. the drew drops forming
sure as sure can be when yawning while fawning
hard core exploring before loitering on lawn each storm hits
bored between bordem and forwarning
The Law of the land is as fat and word lore untorn
in a new years wish of before yours i support but to inform you i am poor
nah i am norse - itself
off the shelf
TOP SHELF infact - splat
trying to make an impact in the cement jungle where only the wild roses
SCAT-TAR..altar that farther further down the line maybe SHAT-ER
holy moses
did you know most people die alone from over self exposure and its aroma
no sir not this
kitty kat riff raff missmatch hybrid still in bed
with her bed hair..
this is just the morning news..
the over thrown vomit bucket sitting near my blue swayed shoes
the buckle that sits on them new - new but bruised
like a vashion victim suckling the threaded section waiting to be called consumption
assuming
I am here to report
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DAY one
on the moon us
This nazi camp smells like rotten tomatoes
a potato gun and all the mother missmatched out her halo - sun
son
to be or not to be
as pluto ressurects each cosmic dust cloud
the wolfs planets defour the virginity of the merucrys rub down
venus golden then blue
the evening news new label is espn - if you use old spice mixed with brute
the triffin is low.. the total recall of being labotimized named..
Denis Quad comes over the screen
"the devil is in the details, and the stage is set"
"This is our new favourite holiday melanea available in the streets..
stepped on, stepped on but yet oh so discreet..
wet like uncut heroin caressed each set to the shower"
waiting breaking breaking news in breaking news - weeeee have just been hit by a metor shower......
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Greetings (again) Cereal...
Do you have any audio recordings?
Really thought that "tricky"Profetesa youtube beat I linked (on other site) really worked well for my verse AND YOURS ARGUABLY EVEN MORE...
Mill goin' so hard here it's hard to "imagine/mentally" hear your bars here...
thus the initial question up top ^
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anyway, this is fire, but as u kno i'm biased....
let's look at some of the many quotables:
did you know most people die alone from over self exposure and its aroma
Awesome...I'd like you to place a '?' either at the beginning or end of the line just for the reader, (on that first take esp.) so they know it's tone...
this is just the morning news..
the over thrown vomit bucket sitting near my blue swayed shoes
casual, slightly self-depecrating FIRE
like a vashion victim suckling the threaded section waiting to be called consumption
In the words of Edward Norton in Primal Fear: "it was like we were dancing, Marty"...lol.
This line holds a special place in my heart...I think we can all infer why
the evening news new label is espn - if you use old spice mixed with brute
lol, phonetic fire, after prev. line ended "blue"
the triffin is low.. the total recall of being labotimized named..
And again. Tbh I am not sure what the triffin term is, but still love the line...
There are other quotables, but these are the big ones.
Thanks for being a big boy as I critiqued you...you've (along w/ your own inititive and PRACTICE) vastly improved.
to the point where i have to consume
Keep exploring the boundaries of phraseology & phonetics...abstract imagery & try to pack your next one FULL of it,..
That is already what you're doing but, as you are still improving, look to do it on sterioids and pack a big punch (again)...
MINOR mispellings (some intentional)...like is it really necessary to spell "meteor" "metor"....is it some Aussie/British prounounce-cheat? I am a big culprit of purposeful misspellings, but I ONLY do it when I think it helps the reading.
Stay up...
Talk to you in like... less than 24 hours.~
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i got a music page
https://soundcloud.com/aaron-batty-951093780
but i dont do recordings anymore..
thanks for the reply ish was dope as all hell my maine man keep beeing cool lots of love
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That was ironic… I didn’t read this ish yet but jungle some real shit. A spell I tried when I was delirious but Besides Candy I know better than to click your links even though I wanna study.
This was really good and I’m impressed - I hope the best coke of it for you!
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Yeah the psychic said about 2 more weeks of this double typing
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Come of it*
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OMG thanks 4 all those linkz man....
Im only on the 2-4TH ONE....AND ITS GREAT,
I ddint even know u had posted Disciple...
I[;m so paranoida nd tired caffeined out...bipolar...weeeeeeded..gummied...no smoke tonight oh wait black nmilds SO many just enjoy 2 diff flavors till i die 4ever..on an alligator pole-dancing instigitaor, withatt00s and peirce and paitn on 'er backsyde
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ok one more (b4 938 in the morn)
get to bed discipe..afternoon cer.. 1- 3 more here, ever,,,4evvvr
no sweater
"(i sad b4?) she GETS no necklace btu she gets a baby
(frommm her cufrent BF...wtehr or not she's ready??
Oh yeah itsalicz.
Itgs fine...shes a good mother in time unlike no wonder shye rimes for a living.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xksAMJWRiXw
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XztxYhHbHCk
here’s my personal life
don’t hurt me w/ words likea knife
ask a seamstress about tha “threaded section” [lol]
head infected bt idgaf\ hope u GEt that msg
ain’t no drama here – never stresson
but i carry that.. GLOCK,, for proteCtion
,other Gunz-i-won’t mention
keep ‘um Locked intha “cahb-nit”
,i’m Hot|U-try-ta ma-nage
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t.b.c.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ofSBaLEmcqM
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who are you? [echo] [echo] [echo...]
https://youtu.be/er8eJHQ8W6Q
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dvd watched liste
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the simpson movie
looking for alibrandi
tesla
masters of the universe
universe soldier
me, myself & irene
loaded weapon 1
real cancun
mulan
aladdin - people
wuthering heights
social network
the swan princess
basket case
wonder woman animation
wonder woman
con air
a beautiful day in the neighborhood
care bears 12
carer bears the movie
bad boys
barbie and the pauper
idependence day
beauty and the beast
white man cant jump
sucker punch
tangled
gang related
paddington
paddington tv show
life as a house
the princess bride
hercules
spirited away
how to train a dragon
power rangers samurai - the team unites
megan
human traffic
a royal family
the royal jewels
the limehouse golem
citizin kane
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here's my best found Evanescence remix for you
(harder tho)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0oOCs6eGeZk