Third track from A2Z's album... "Uphill battle""

aight this is my first topical drop on my album "XYZ"


[Hook]
This is an uphill battle//
Struggling up the ladder, looking for a handle//
Something to grab on to, something to grapple//
Everybodyt his is an uphill battle

Picture this: a young boy still wet behind the ears//
Trying in the rap world getting nothing but jeers//
What the fuck would you do? Give up?//
Drop all your dreams and say enoughs enough?//
Nuh uh, no way not for this cat im trying//
Im goinna suceed or while i trying im dieing//
Cuz I can't give up... can't take this rap world and quiet up//
Imma speak my piece even f i get shot up//
Theres low blows and backstabbing, theres no other way//
Ya gotta struggle to the top, to the place where it plays//

[hook]

Baby momma gotta love her... but she won't stop yelling//
Will there be police involved? Theres no fucking telling//
Ya try to reasonable, ya ask her nicely//
After all, ya don't wanna kill ya wifey//
But no, she aint having it, she just keeps bitching//
The rent, the baby, the car SHE WONT FUCKING LISTEN//
Ya getting so pissed, the anger burns inside//
Your Adrenaline kicking into hyper drive//
But mind says 'kill her'' but ya heart says 'no'//
Remember she put up with ya nagging yo//
'Aw who cares, she fucking deserves it'//
Does she really? Or are YOU the one who started shit?//
So ya back down let her screams wake the dead//
Its an uphill battle ya'll but ya gotta use ya head//

[hook]

Sitting at ya desk... thinking about tonight//
The big rap battle... the shits gonna be tight//
But you got homework about as high as you//
Ya sit and think... What the fuck do you do?//
Ya already flunking, but ya almost at a D//
If ya get up to a C you can get in the University//
But the battle... How can u miss it?//
But ya got ya life ahead of ya... ya can't just say piss it//
Let it go and watch ya lif slip between ya fingers//
End up desperate for money, being the man that pulls the trigger//
Unload three and a super market guy//
Run out the door and theres fourty cops outside//
10 year minimum for armed robbery//
All because u up and said "Fuck the D"//
To go and battle, something that wouldn't even win?//
Fuck this dude, pick back up ya pen//

[hook x5]

uppin for feedback on my TOPICAL verse

yo do i have to uppin it already?

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this drop was better than tha other one , , , ,but it still lacked wordplay ,

uppin

i didnt find it that good...its aight like my man Bash said its lacked word play complexity and all that good shit...keep elevating though...wahid

yeah, but this song is serious not fancy this song is supposed to tell a story, so i tried to avoid all the metas and wordplay ya knwo what i mean... this is one of the few serious songs on my album so i needed to make that evident